Change: There was no sign of Allison. He sat down and turned to Derek.“They are both dead. There was nothing I could do.” his voice was dead. Emotionless.“It wasn’t your fault kid.” Derek said in that same dead voice.“There was nothing you could   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 23867)  View all updates.

Change: Derek was already heading to the rear gun mounts. Elaina swiveled her chair around and opened up the front gun torrents. She felt Rob transform   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 22507)  View all updates.

Change: Derek was already heading to the rear gun mounts. Elaina swiveled her chair around and opened up the front gun torrents. She felt Rob transform   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 20082)  View all updates.

Change: Jessie wasn’t far off on her feelings for Derek. Derek had been her first boyfriend, and her first lover. Now they really were just good   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 18964)  View all updates.

Change: same(then you start to hear the T1same. Brad FidelThe lovemusic sencewas scoreplaying. playing)otherAt times in the past when they where together it was pretty srightstright forwardforward, but this moment was really them making love to eachother afterallafter all there'stheir   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 17585)  View all updates.

Change: Sara said in a very sad tune trying to holdus.” herSarah tearssaid andsadly trying not to look at Kyle utKyle.But John couldn't help but to looklooking at Kyle when Sarah went in to that.Anthat. hourAnd hadan passedhour whenlater   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 17018)  View all updates.

Change: explaining.” “The others are going to meet us here at dusk.” Sarah said to Elaina. “Will you be ready by then?” Sarah continued. “Of course, I am almost ready now. I just need to outfit Savannah and then load up the food and supplies for the humans.” Elaina responded.　   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 17072)  View all updates.

Change: She beamed up at him. He led the way to Elaina’s lair. He pulled the door opens and stepped through. He was shocked at what   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 17072)  View all updates.

Change: Just then he stopped again. He pulled open one of the heavy metal green doors that lined the hall and gestured for her to go   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 11789)  View all updates.

Change: “I told her that she was crazy. That you wouldn’t let some spoiled bitch come between us. That blood was thicker than anything just like   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 8548)  View all updates.