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Change: 9. A lost interrogation sequence is unearthed Oh yeah did i forget to mention... A LOT OF SUBTLE JAMERON TOO! WHOOPEE!A side noteAddressing the issue of Derek Reese and his character: I’ve read a lot a posts in recent weeks (see thread: Fan Fiction Pet Peeves
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Change: Oh yeah did i forget to mention... A LOT OF SUBTLE JAMERON TOO! WHOOPEE!A side noteAddressing the issue of Derek Reese and his character: I’ve read a lot a posts in recent weeks (see thread: Fan Fiction Pet Peeves) about how very
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Change: ) about how very few people enjoy the way Derek is portrayed in Fan Fiction, like he’s some one-dimensional psychopath/drunk with nothing better to do
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Change: vital to the over all understanding of story content. Some of you have written me and said said-"Hey what's with Derek, killing Cam wouldn't make him a hero!!"...tohero!!"well...to answer your statement, You're right, killing Cameron wouldn't make
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Change: not looking at the big picture and now Derek has fallen prey to that exact stumbling block. All he cares about is revenge...he's hasn't busted up on Metal in a long time and Cameron killing Riley was the perfect excuse
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Change: I used to be my own protection, but not now Cause my path had lost direction, somehow A black wind took you away, from sight And held the darkness over day, that night And the clouds above move closer Looking so dissatisfied And the ground below grew colder As
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Change: chapterchapter. I love Linkin Park but they can be slightly emo when they want to be so I thought that would work quite well for
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Change: this time who tells John if he can’t cry, he can always write herRiley a letter. By saying this she’s reminding him that she’s always listening even to stuff he explained
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Change: One reference that some of you have picked up on was my Linkin Park ringtone for John this chapter I love Linkin Park but they
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