Chapter 10: The Day of the Nightmare

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	Aug 28 2008, 11:31 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated page with better detail and grammar corrections	edit	26 words added 16 words deleted
Change: voice that echoed in my dreams. I think it was Sarah Connor. “Only“I do only what is necessary to accomplish the future's mission. I understand if you kill me and leave me hear to die.” I said in reply. This can't be happening. Why View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3318)
	Aug 28 2008, 11:11 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated content with revisions for season 2 along with grammer and detail clarifications	edit	158 words added 130 words deleted
Change: and saw agent Bauer get shoot multiple times in the chest! She turned around and ran up to Agent Bauer, kneeling down to check his pulse. I knew he was dead though. But then the agent flinched opened his eyes and he took in a quick View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3306)
	Aug 24 2008, 8:53 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated widget	edit	1 widget added 1 widget deleted
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	Aug 24 2008, 8:34 PM EDT	Krazykaleb		edit	1 word added 3 words deleted
Change: in all the while, I was praying to my God Jehovah and his son Jesus that I was going to the right time and place... NOW! Read the Amazing ending... Chapter: 11- The Future Previous(Music From: Vantage Point, MissionTransformers, Impossible III, 24, Terminator.) View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3274)
	Aug 24 2008, 8:33 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated widget	edit	1 widget added 1 widget deleted
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	Aug 22 2008, 2:31 AM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated chapter grammar and details	edit	72 words added 31 words deleted
Change: which was dropped by one of the federal agents, pelted rounds of bullets at my T-twin. She turned around and ran up to Agent Bauer, kneeling down to check his pulse. I knew he was dead thoughthough. butBut then the agent flinched opened his eyes asand View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3276)
	Aug 22 2008, 2:10 AM EDT	Krazykaleb		edit	3 words added 1 word deleted
Change: do only what is necessary to accomplish the future's mission. I understand if you kill me and leave me hear to die.” I said in reply. This can't be happening. Why am I doing this? What's going on? “You jack-ass!! I knew you would View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3235)
	Aug 22 2008, 1:27 AM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated page	edit	10 words added 1 word deleted 1 widget added 1 widget deleted
Change: fade in all the while, I was praying to my God Jehovah and his son Jesus that I was going to the right time and place... NOW! Read the Amazing ending... Chapter: 11- The Future Previous(Music From: Vantage Point, Mission Impossible III, 24, Terminator.) View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3233)
	Jul 27 2008, 12:54 AM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated links	edit	1 word added
Change: The world started to fade in all the while, I was praying to my God Jehovah and his son Jesus that I was going to the right time and place... NOW! Read the Amazing ending... Chapter: 11- The Future Previous View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3224)
	Jul 17 2008, 4:23 AM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated multimedia	edit	1 widget added
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	May 9 2008, 1:25 AM EDT	Krazykaleb		edit	1 word added 1 word deleted
Change: The world started to fade in all the while, I was praying to my God Jehovah and his son Jesus that I was going to the right time and place... NOW! Read the Amazing endingending... Chapter: 11- The Future View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3223)
	May 9 2008, 1:24 AM EDT	Krazykaleb		edit	9 words added
Change: naked. The world started to fade in all the while, I was praying to my God Jehovah and his son Jesus that I was going to the right time and place... NOW! Read the Amazing ending Chapter: 11- The Future View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3223)
	May 7 2008, 2:42 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	gammar	edit	1 word deleted
Change: my T-twin hit through the drywall and slid to the floor. A explosion resonated to the other side of the room at the same moment of time. My ears started to View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3214)
	May 5 2008, 9:20 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	updated grammar	edit	4 words added 1 word deleted
Change: T-twin. She turned around and ran up to Agent Bauer, kneeling down to check his pulse. I knew he was dead though but then the agent flinched opened his eyes as he took in a quick deep breath of air and View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3215)
	May 4 2008, 9:36 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	added spaceing	edit
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	May 4 2008, 9:13 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	added story	edit	3122 words added
Change: “You are going to go to the future McFly... and your going to help Skynet make the time machine...” the T-twin smiled evilly as as View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3212)
	May 4 2008, 8:58 PM EDT	Krazykaleb		create	No content added or deleted.
Change: Created by Krazykaleb May 4 2008, 8:58 PM EDT for: no reason given

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