Change: looking shiny metal inside her right cheek. She started to walk away like the Tin-Man in the Wizard of Oz. I saw a man in a black T-shirt with a interesting hair-do. Kind of like those sleek goofy comb-overs. As I approached him and called out to him.him   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 989)

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Change: Locked by Wild-Kat May 2 2008, 12:14 PM EDT for: Per Kaleb

Change: Written by: Kaleb Fabsik (KrazyKaleb)Running non-stop in a panic. I kept recalling the scene of what I just saw. The figure that resembled my neighbor Cameron but   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 930)

Change: bodyboy was wearing a baseball jersey the back of it spelled. Reese."Reese." Huh, that's funny,Ifunny, I thought to myself starting to smile. His name was like Reese's Pieces. But my smile faded as I noticed they were already leaving because it was getting late already. I   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 912)

Change: I just couldn't fathom what I saw and that's is what scared me the most.Was she some kind of robot or did I just imagine all this? I continued trying to relax   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 900)

Change:  Feeling relived now I started to relax. I couldn't take what just happened to me. I started to think about what just happened. I was   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 882)