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Chapter 20: Like Father, Unlike Daughter

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	Jan 8 2009, 12:59 PM EST	InstantEntertainment	added 1 link	edit	6 words added
Change: the hatch to expose the electronics. “I understand, sir,” she nodded. A big grin spread across his face and his eyes started to sparkle when he looked at her again: “Let’s have some fun!” Chapter 19: The Phoenix Chapter 21: The Mists Of Battle View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2239)
	Jan 6 2009, 4:35 PM EST	InstantEntertainment	added 1 link	edit	20 words added
Change: [May contain what could be considered explicit content. Reader discretion is highly advised. Mature readers only.] He felt her touch him softly on the shoulder. Normally this would have comforted him but now View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2233)
	Jan 6 2009, 4:11 PM EST	InstantEntertainment	changed layout	edit	12 words added 3 words deleted
Change: dad’ and 'the great hero'. Who was her dad? It couldn’t be the General because she remembered O’Conlin telling her that her father had died when she had View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2213)
	Jan 6 2009, 3:55 PM EST	InstantEntertainment	added contents	edit	2148 words added
Change: She removed her hand from his forearm and brought it up to his face, running her index finger along the ridge of the scar. He View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2205)
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