Change: importanceimportance.General Henshaw turned to her: “Corporal Ryan, can you snap out of it and go and find out what the hell is going on?!”“Yes, sir,” she mumbled startled before leaving the room in a hurry.She stood at the side of   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1831)

Change: not himself.General Henshaw looked at Private Jenkins again: “Pull the plug,” he ordered.“But, sir-” Private Jenkins began.“Pull the-” The rest of the order was lost in a sickening swooshing sound.Chapter 2: The Face Of EvilChapter 4: The Surviving Are Left To Fend For Themselves   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1831)

Change: Stunned beyond heart and reason and completely unaware of her surroundings she didn’t notice the station wagon slipping to halt behind her. She started coughing   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 1818)