Chapter 4: " The Saviour "

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	Jul 31 2008, 1:22 PM EDT	Stampguy17		edit	18 words added 18 words deleted
Change: sparaticsporadic engagements with skynetSkynet patrols, our convoy now consisted of of six trucks and five humvees.But we had finally made arrived at the entrance to the Crystal Peak Bunker.Four soldiers cautiously enterdentered the hollow in the side of View changes from previous version. (Word count: 536)
	Jul 3 2008, 5:26 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	added new lin	edit	13 words added
Change: place into a base MOVE!!!MOVE!!!MOVE!!!. Within a short time the whole place was transformed into a major operational base with a strong defensive perimeter and two forward scouts as an early warning system.To Find Out What Happens Next Read Chapter 5: The Resistance Is Born View changes from previous version. (Word count: 530)
	Jul 3 2008, 7:00 AM EDT	eelman007		edit	228 words added 3 words deleted
Change: (McKenzie)John this is Private Billings and as long as I have know him, he has sworn if ever giving the chance he would buy your mother a round of drinks you see Billings is a demolitions man. (Connor)Im sure she would of accepted your View changes from previous version. (Word count: 517)
	Jul 2 2008, 9:19 AM EDT	eelman007		edit	33 words added
Change: sobbing tearfilled reply. (Connor)The General was killed by a TX Terminator just hours before Skynet launched the missiles.(McKenzie) Dammit!! he was killed by what did you say??? Connor Proceeded to tell the Leiutenant his whole lifes story, the look on the Leiutenant's face said it all View changes from previous version. (Word count: 284)
	Jul 2 2008, 12:09 AM EDT	Krazykaleb	Moved from: Eelman007- Fan Fiction	move	No content added or deleted.
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Change: Renamed from Chapter Four " The Saviour " by Krazykaleb Jul 2 2008, 12:06 AM EDT for: Rename
	Jul 1 2008, 11:50 PM EDT	Krazykaleb	Moved from: Terminator: Fan Fiction	move	No content added or deleted.
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	Jul 1 2008, 11:41 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	98 words added 1 word deleted
Change: identify themselves. Both figures now using their hands to shield their eyes stopped and one of them spoke. My name is John Connor and this is Kate Brewster, who the hell are you??. The soldier standing beside me stepped forward and spoke.(Soldier)Im Leiutenant McKenzie, Mam!! are View changes from previous version. (Word count: 250)
	Jul 1 2008, 10:54 PM EDT	eelman007		edit	150 words added
Change: Without warning the massive blast door shudderd to life and began to raise upward ( I felt like C3P0 in Return Of the Jedi outside Jabba's Palace), which sent the four soldiers diving for cover behind what looked like a crashed Navy SeaKing Helicopter. The blast door View changes from previous version. (Word count: 151)
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