Change: And what did she have to do with Andy Good? Did she know him too? I said to myself and moaned out loud, “Ah, Please God. Somebody help me.” More rubbling was going on in the car. Sounded like there   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 649)

Change:  him!” I cried inside myself asking God and Jesus about who am I really? Then I kept on repeating to myself that I was a goner... Find out what happens next in Chapter 5: Feeling Death Previous(Music From : Mission Impossible: III- Michael Giacchino)   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 625)

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Change: Written by: Kaleb Fabsik (KrazyKaleb)My senses were very intense. I knew for a fact that my adrenaline was pumping into my blood stream from the intense feeling   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 617)

Change: orof what I saw because it was so dark. The car started moving and I heard the tires squeal underneath my body as the engine revved off. Feeling a pulsating throbbing in my forehead from being hit. My face was starting to swell. The other guy   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 602)

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