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Change: FabsikFabby (KrazyKaleb)Thought never seemed that complicating after I totally lost all my senses in that motor vehicle. So this is what it feels like to die. Huh... Kind of like sleep, I thought to myself. I started to feel   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 705)

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Change: Written by: Kaleb Fabsik (KrazyKaleb)Thought never seemed that complicating after I totally lost all my senses in that motor vehicle. So this is what it feels like to die. Huh... Kind of like sleep, I thought to myself. I started to   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 698)

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