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Change: “Yeah, "Yeah, what do you mean? How do you know him you two?” asked John Baum. Derek quickly says, “He's the reason my men are dead in the safe house Sarah! He and
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Change: cut faced Cameron who now had staples to hold her skin together along the right side of eyedher girlface and the man with the five-o'-clock shadow.shadow stood nearby. The Aftershave (Five-o'-clock shadow) guy started talking to Ms. Blum, “We need
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Change: FabsikFabby (KrazyKaleb)Thought never seemed that complicating after I totally lost all my senses in that motor vehicle. So this is what it feels like to die. Huh... Kind of like sleep, I thought to myself. I started to feel
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Change: where I would have to say Curiosity killed the cat. The cat being me... Find out what happens next in Chapter 6: Turning Point to Serendipity Previous(Music From : Vantage Point- Atli Orvarasson)
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Change: Written by: Kaleb Fabsik (KrazyKaleb)Thought never seemed that complicating after I totally lost all my senses in that motor vehicle. So this is what it feels like to die. Huh... Kind of like sleep, I thought to myself. I started to
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Change: on life forever. This is where I would have to say Curiosity killed the cat. The cat being me... Find out what happens next in Chapter 6: Turning Point to Serendipity
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Change: inis going on?” “Yeah right. You were going to get help. Shut-up before I put another bullet in you.” he said pointing the gun at me
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Change: again as he approached me with the gun. “Shut-Up! Stop whining David! You didn't have to screw us all over in the future you know! You could have been
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Change: My mother was rocking me back and forth. Her smile and peaceful hum comforting me. I looked into my mother's eyes expecting to receive that
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