Change: Locked by denkiva Jun 24 2009, 5:20 PM EDT for: locked for fan fic showdown

Change: “No, I don’t detect any movement above. I’ll be back shortly.” She walked up the rampart, very carefully removed the canvas cover, and climbed through   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7395)

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Change: Chapter 1; Chapter 2John awoke to the sound of thunder. For a brief moment, still in half-sleep stupor, he could almost discern falling rain amid the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 12761)

Change: HK’sHKs were only a few hundred feet above. Everyone made it into the sewer without incident, though a few sprained an ankle. The captain was the first to speak. “How old must this place be? A hundred years or more? I’ve never seen this section of the sewer before.”   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 12760)

Change: standing at the door. John sank into the cot. He had spoken more that day than in all the three weeks before. He placed his rifle at his side, near the wall. On a small table, just next to the cot, sat the defibrillators, fully charged.   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7395)

Change: the time being.now. The only unpleasant task left to John was to introduce Cameron to his 'family'. Metal had never before been allowed within any group, or base, that John was in; this newchange in policy would not be well-received by   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7396)

Change: good chance she is dead, but I don't have a real body to bury, just... this, as a reminder." He looked down at the Metal, and allowed his eyes to rest on its face a moment too long. "With all due respect, sir, I   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7398)

Change: "If... if I could just hold you again... but I can't while I'm in here. Do you still have my body, John?""The one you tried to kill me with? Yes, we have it." "John, you know I would never want to harm you. It was against my will." "How?   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7394)

Change: "I saw your timetable as a suggestion. A window, framing two possible times. There was nothing to be gained by waiting, though. It is darker   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 7373)