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Change: altercation was. Several minutes later both uncle and nephew descended the steps into the living room. John was first to speak.“He told me truth, about him and Jesse, her plan... everything. Cameron was set up.
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Change: Cameron? How many are still out there?”“Two are accounted for.”“What do you mean accounted for? Some got away!?”“One. Its endoskeleton was severally damaged. It should take several weeks to repair itself.” John shook his head incredulously and attempted to
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Change: Discoveries Mission on the wall Greenway -P. Alto -Dr. B. Sherman3 Dots -Juan Lopez??StarkAlpine Fields –Kim -Wallace/Brooks -Deacon Sandhip -Tb3N@C84 - An unusual type of fullerene molecule.0419100644 - John couldn’t wait any longer.
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Change: Sarah stood in one place, as if rooted to the floor boards, unable to move, think, feel anything. She felt like a stone sculpture standing
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Change: II, Cameron is here for a reason. If that reason is to murder me then so be it but it is not up to you
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Change: crossing his arms crossed defiantly over his chest. John’s Uncle had not been expecting such a forthright question. It took him several seconds to recover from the severity of what John’s inquiry implied. “What kinda question is that?!” Derek sputtered, almost speechless.
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Change: withwith, but not if you’re the one selecting the pieces that appear to be are suitable for the task at hand. Derek Reese had chosen
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Change: Derek Reese left the hard shell rifle case open and empty on one of the couches down in the living room and silently crept upstairs.
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Change: Cameron hesitated but finally left the room and John waited on his bed his for his uncle, the fully loaded handgun resting between his relaxed
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Change: For Kyle, for the world, for John. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her nor did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way...certainly not a sixteen
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Change: statement sentence implied.instilled.“Only John can do it.”Derek wouldn’t accept that answer. “No. I’m gonna kill her Sarah.”He hoisted the weapon back onto his shoulder and prepared to leave.“You can thank me later.” With that he turned on his heel and headed for the house. “She’s
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Change: it...Oscar Wilde, 1881."John didn’t know what to say so he said nothing and the silence was left to its own. He read the chiseled text again, soaking in the fullness of the words. Finally he managed to pull himself together enough to ask. “What does the
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Change: heaven. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her ornor did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way....way...certainly not a sixteen year old boy...or so he thought...
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Change: Cameron’sCam's brains to high heaven. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her or did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way....certainly not a sixteen year
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Change: heaven. “Aim for the chip. They never get up.” she mumbled but he didn’t hear her or did he need to. Derek was ready to a hero again and nothing was going to stand in his way....certainly not a sixteen year old boy. boy...or so he thought...
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Change: door frame, letting his hard shell sniper rifle case, with weapon inside slip from his broad shoulder to the crook of his muscular right arm.“Does We include me?”Sarah’s eyes snapped up to the fellow resistance fighter’s person and lingered there for several heated seconds. “I don’t
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Change: Derek Reese had expected the call from his sister-in-law concerning John’s first real love interest but even now sitting in the sweltering hot L.A. traffic
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Change: season two storyline could only be played two ways. Cameron either did or didn't. Of course in the actual series she spared Riley's life but what would have happened if she hadn't? The wonderful thing about fan fiction is there is no wrong answer. This is my alternate happening.Chapter
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