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	Date/Time	Made By	Edit Note	Type	Scope
	Feb 3 2009, 7:48 PM EST	Pharazon		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3654)
	Feb 3 2009, 7:47 PM EST	Pharazon		edit	13 words added
Change: her. She found it didn't feel so cold anymore. And slowly, almost imperceptibly, she began to speak. "Dorothy lived in the midst of the great Kansas praires..." Cameron spoke into the night, and the crickets listened.-------------------------------------------- short update, I know...been busy. Let me know if it's any good. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3654)
	Feb 3 2009, 7:46 PM EST	Pharazon		edit
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3640)
	Feb 3 2009, 7:45 PM EST	Pharazon		edit	295 words added 3 words deleted
Change: Cameron shot Derek a dirty look, and despite the smug expression he wore on his face, he felt a shiver run along the back of his neck. He watched as Cameron turned back towards the door and opened it."I guess they are a threat, then?""Don't be View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3640)
	Jan 31 2009, 3:09 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	1 image added
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3331)
	Jan 31 2009, 3:07 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	1 image deleted
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3331)
	Jan 31 2009, 3:06 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	1 image added 1 image deleted
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3331)
	Jan 31 2009, 3:03 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	1 image added
Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details. (Word count: 3331)
	Jan 27 2009, 12:30 PM EST	Krazykaleb	Moved from: Terminator: Fan Fiction	move	No content added or deleted.
Change: Moved by Krazykaleb Jan 27 2009, 12:30 PM EST
	Jan 27 2009, 4:12 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	2 words added 1 word deleted
Change: began to rock slowly back and forth. “Cameron…if he isn’t your brother, who is he?” “We used to be friends.” The John I knew is gone, she couldn’t help but think. “What“Cameron? What happened?” I happened. -------------------------------------------- 9. update maybe soon View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3331)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:48 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	5 words added 5 words deleted
Change: He’s always angry these days. “I had a dream,” Cameron’s voice came distantly as if she were still dreaming, afraid she might wake if she spoke too loudly. “Don’t be ridiculous. Terminator’s can’t dream,” he said dismissively, out of Erik’s earshot. “Besides, what would you possibly dream about?” About you. View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3330)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:44 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	298 words added
Change: But Cameron only sat there, her legs straight in front of her on the white hospital floor. “Come on. We need to go.” Without further View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3332)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:36 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	31 words added 23 words deleted
Change: human to think about much, but as a terminator Cameron pondered the matter quickly. Subject: Allison Young. Mission Objective . . . TERMINATE. But then a certain file came to memory, flashing across her HUD in an View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3014)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:32 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	262 words added
Change: There was only one light in the room. It hung over a table occupying the center of the floor, and flickered faintly over the scene View changes from previous version. (Word count: 3008)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:31 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	3 words added 2 words deleted
Change: UNKNOWNUNKNOWN. ASSESSING THREAT LEVEL . . . HIGH THREAT. ERROR: Primary motor functions disabled. Cameron watched the man, unblinking, as she stored his face in her memory. Based on her database concerning View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2750)
	Jan 27 2009, 3:29 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	312 words added 2 words deleted
Change: Their exchange was interrupted abruptly by an alarm which suddenly rang loudly throughout the halls of the entire facility. For a moment Cameron thought he View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2749)
	Jan 25 2009, 4:39 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	1 word added 2 words deleted
Change: thoughts. =)thoughts--------------------------------------------1. “I made the call. Live with it.” John storms into the hospital room and sits next to an unconscious Riley. Cameron stands nearby. Things are not going well for John, she observes, as Derek stares briefly after View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2444)
	Jan 25 2009, 4:39 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	2 words added 2 words deleted
Change: isand giventhanks to Veran for the concept behind the following (3) scenes-------------------------------------------- 4. For the most part, Skynet Factory 1207 appeared to be like any of the other terminator-producing plants View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2444)
	Jan 25 2009, 4:38 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	24 words added 3 words deleted
Change: Note: due credit is given to Veran for the concept behind the following (3) scenes-------------------------------------------- 4. For the most part, Skynet Factory 1207 appeared to be like any of the other terminator-producing plants View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2444)
	Jan 25 2009, 4:32 AM EST	Pharazon		edit	729 words added
Change: John had been in a Skynet prison before, but something was different about this factory. The triple eights overseeing the factory had brought him down View changes from previous version. (Word count: 2425)

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