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Change: Revised Chapter Posted 11-11-2009Chapter 24 Into the Abyss Coming Soon!!!Sneak Peek posted, Full chapter coming soon!Chapter 25: Storming the Gates of Hell rough draft completeChapter 26: Survival of the Fittest rough draft 60% progressChapter 27: The Price of Victory rough draft
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Change: 24:24 Into the Abyss Coming Soon!!!Sneak Peek posted, Full chapter coming soon!Chapter 25: Storming the Gates of Hell rough draft completeChapter 26: Survival of the Fittest rough draft 60% progressChapter 27: The Price of Victory rough draft 50% completeAdded full Chapter
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Change: Bob" to 1997 when something goes wrong after the time transfer. Judgment Day wasn't stopped - it was only changed. Reports come in, Sky Net
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Change: 2027, Day 47 John Connor returns to base. Kyle is reunited with Derek. On arrival they get some good news. John makes his apologies to Allison and gets his head stitched
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Change: get some good news. John makes his apologies to Allison and gets his head stitched by none other than Kate Brewster. In a meeting with
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Change: The play list for Dark Sanctuary was created when I was seeking some sad but beautiful music for Chapter 20 of Reunion, Two Goodbyes. Though
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Change: 2027, Day 47 John Connor is rescued by Cameron, who has a few choice words with him, but the T-600's soon find them. Kyle is still
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Change: by Cameron, who has a few choice words with him, but the T-600's soon find them. Kyle is still searching for John. Derek comes up
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Change: The playlist for Dark Sanctuary was created when I was seeking some sad but beautiful music for Chapter 20 of Reunion, Two Goodbyes. Though I
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Change: in the garage. The two T-888's that were on Palomar follow close behind in a Humvee. Behind them, someone follows on a motorcycle. Kyle and
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Oct 13 2009, 11:36 PM EDT
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Change: completerewritesChapter 24: Into the Abyss rough draft completeChapter 25: Storming the Gates of Hell rough draft 95% completeChapter 26: Survival of the Fittest rough draft in10% progressChapter 27: The Price of Victory rough draft 40% completeAdded full Chapter 20 with description.Added
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Change: a memorial service for Sarah Connor. Catherine tells John that they must leave now if John wants to send Cameron back to 2009. Leaving his
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Oct 8 2009, 8:51 AM EDT
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Change: This story is still being written! I'm working towards a big climax at the end of Part 2. Depending on how certain things get written
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Change: that and the story gets so much more complex in Part 2, that it was no longer feasible to tell John Connor's story strictly from
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Change: Long before John traveled to the future to recover Cameron's chip, where he met Allison, he learned something about Allison from Cameron and Derek. This Interlude take place immediately after the present day story in "Allison from Palmdale." On the way home, John questions
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Change: questions Cameron about her actions that day and why she claimed she was someone called, Allison. The following day, John asks Derek about Allison Young
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Change: I hope to find some that contain more modern sound effects but these set the scene. If you can offer any suggestions, I am open to them.-- The1Russter 10-01-2009Part 2 ARMAGEDDON 2027: John Connor has been appointed leader. His first
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Change: learns too late not to be so trusting. There is a huge fight at the end of the ceremony. Natalie is revealed to have been Kreilley moments,this whole time. John firmly takes hold of his role as leader, and a fatally wounded Sarah passes her mantle
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Change: is a very complex chapter. Some plot threads get wrapped up while new threads are laid in for future chapters. Because of that, a lot
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Change: news for Savannah. Through a series of dramatic, joyous, active, suspenseful, tragic, and humorous moments, John firmly takes hold of his role as leader, and Sarah passes her mantle of protector to Allison.Interlude 2 A Glimpse Into the Recent Past rough draftComing proofreadingSoon!!!Sneak Peek posted
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