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Change: consciencenessconsciousness slowly came back into focus as the test determined she was fine.Cameron's body had defaulted into a full crouched position. Her clothing had been destroyed by the energy bubble. She was in a crater in an empty street.
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Change: "When written in Chinese the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger, and the other represents opportunity." -John F. KennedyMajor General Perry had relayed the message to meet John Connor in the temporal bubble room. As always, Cameron had immediately complied. She had watched
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Change: fumedfumes and fuel smell became more powerful, as the room became hotter, as the safely distanced turbines built up to three hundred degrees. Vibration that would subtly rattle the teeth of the average human began filling the whole room.Cameron stood barefoot on the
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Change: T850T800 that John unconsciously based his poker face on? She closed within six feet and waited for John to respond. Something was off about him. She would have been able to tell exactly what it was from
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Change: board, you have to Breakbreak the rules."She didn't understand. Cameron could only think, "Please don't do this John..." Panicked memories of all the time she spent with him flooded in the back of her mind. John continued screaming, "We talked about this. You know all
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Change: Major General FranklinPerry had relayed the message to meet John Connor in the temporal bubble room. As always, Cameron had immediately complied. She had watched John send people through time before. Missions weren't uncommon, but they weren't exactly every day either.Every soldier sent back
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Change: fuel smell became more powerful, as the room became hotter, as the safely distanced turbines built up to three hundred degrees. Vibration that would subtlely rattle the teeth of the average human began filling the whole room.Cameron stood barefoot on the cold pad
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Change: Thursday,Friday, December 10, 2027General Franklin had relayed the message to meet John Connor in the temporal bubble room. As always, Cameron had immediately complied. She had watched John send people through time before. Missions weren't uncommon, but they weren't exactly every day either.Every soldier sent
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Change: Thursday, December 10, 2027General Franklin had relayed the message to meet John Connor in the temporal bubble room. As always, Cameron had immediately complied. She had watched John send people through time before. Missions weren't uncommon, but they weren't exactly every day either.Every soldier sent
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