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Change: "Looking at the cake is like looking at the future, until you've tasted it what do you really know? And then, of course, it's too late. [Arthur takes a bite.] Too late." -Merlin, ExcaliburThe facility was noisy with the sounds of
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Change: aa friend not recovered.He was silent for most of the walk into the inner compound tunnels. For five minutes he didn't say a word.Like usual, John hid his internal feelings and joked, "Am I about to get bitched out?"Cameron dryly responded, "No one likes a nag."
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Change: As an infiltrator, she had been programmed on how to be intimate with someone. It was the only information she had to go on with the subject, but John would have sensed anything false. He would have found it wrong.John's heart began to thunder in his chest. The
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Change: Saturday,Sunday, November 14, 2027The facility was noisy with the sounds of a celebration. There hadn't been a massive victory, so it must have been an obscure holiday of some type.Cameron might have had more interest in the activities
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Change: Saturday, November 14, 2027The facility was noisy with the sounds of a celebration. There hadn't been a massive victory, so it must have been an obscure holiday of some type.Cameron might have had more interest in the activities or
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Change: FebruaryNovember 28,14, 2027The facility was noisy with the sounds of a celebration. There hadn't been a massive victory, so it must have been an obscure holiday of some type.Cameron might have had more interest in the activities
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Nov 20 2008, 6:39 PM EST
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Change: "That smile is a lie John. If it isn't fair for me to lie, it isn't fair for you to lie. You aren't happy." The words sounded harsh, but she simply tried to state she was aware he wasn't showing her the real him. She also wanted him to
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Change: What I Left BehindLos Angeles, California132nd DefCom DecemberFebruary 10,28, 2027Return to Main page
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Change: What I Left BehindLos Angeles, California132nd DefCom December 10, 2027Return to Main page
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