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udm
udm
20. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 6:13 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 6:13 PM EDT
You're scary =(((((((

Kidding, I'll get to work on it later after work Do you find this valuable?    
SusanWillow
SusanWillow
21. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 6:27 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 6:27 PM EDT
"you can only correct the grammar mistakes. This is all I will allow. I'll be watching you if you do anything funny."
LOL wow I hope no one goes all crazy about the grammar in my story when I post it. Maybe a I'll post a warning about my lack of caring for grammar. Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
22. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 7:19 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 7:19 PM EDT
"Can't seem to keep up with the main forum threads myself, much less all the fanfics, videos, and everything else that gets posted. So I don't have much constructive to add except to say that all guys (and gals) should be looking for some way to cash in on your work.

Krazykaleb, IIRC there was a long-ago sitcom, Bewitched, that featured a "normal" person who could never quite convince everyone else of the bizarre goings-on of her supernatural next-door neighbors. Some ideas are timeless..."
lol I didn't think of that but that's a good comparison.

And KrazyKaleb - I like this part even better than the first Chapter. Loved the dialog with Sarkissian - you really did a good job on that part . And(LOL) you called the cops on the Connors - who knew - I hope Sarah doesn't get arrested or something - Cameron may come after you. Loved it. Good job. Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
23. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 7:24 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 7:24 PM EDT
Read chapter three - Cameron does come after you - I loved it - scary robot. Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
24. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 7:30 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 7:30 PM EDT
"LOL wow I hope no one goes all crazy about the grammar in my story when I post it. Maybe a I'll post a warning about my lack of caring for grammar."
Don't worry about the grammar - thankfully this isn't fanfic.net. I like some of the stories over there but they have so many rules. I'm not saying a person can't improve as they get more experience but it's really the content of the story that matters - at least to me - something that sparks the imagination or is entertaining. I'm babbling - just don't worry about it. Do you find this valuable?    
mg.mikael
mg.mikael
25. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 23 2008, 8:45 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 23 2008, 8:45 PM EDT
Freakin sweet so far, I have a feeling I know what Cameron wants him for. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Do you find this valuable?    
udm
udm
26. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 3:08 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 3:08 AM EDT
Just read the latest chapter

Once again, awesome! :D Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
27. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 3:35 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 3:35 AM EDT
Hey everyone I just finished writing my story. I hope to post the next chapter soon maybe somtime tomarrow or today. But, I want to say that I thankyou all for you great support. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
28. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 2:25 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 2:25 PM EDT
Just added chapter 4: Inside the Car!
Hope you guys enjoy it. I'm still double checking the other chapters making sure my plot works. So far so good. Just adding finish details and stuff.
If your a new reader make sure you start from chapter 1
Here is a link to the first chapter again.
http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat
I as always have links to the next chapters at the bottom of each chapter. Do you find this valuable?    
udm
udm
29. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 3:02 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 3:02 PM EDT
Hahaha awesome! Keep the fanfic coming! Do you find this valuable?    
john121984
john121984
30. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 3:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 3:03 PM EDT
great story Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
31. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 4:34 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 4:34 PM EDT
Nice - really like the way you wrote Derek's part. Do you find this valuable?    
mg.mikael
mg.mikael
32. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 4:43 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 4:43 PM EDT
GREAT JOB, on the last chapter, can't wait for the next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
33. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 24 2008, 11:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 24 2008, 11:46 PM EDT
Thanks everyone I hope to shock you all with the next two chapters to my story. Hopfully you all don't get upset or overly critical with what I'm going to do with this story. But as a note to all you fan fictiontion fans. This story was inspired by Terminator: SCC, The cliffhanger drama of LOST and the fairly new movie VANTAGE POINT. Thus the reason why I wanted to do this story from another vantage point. Being that of the neighbor.

I've been working on the cogs of my other chapters making sure they fit within the Terminator universe. You know I don't want to break to many rules about the show. But I intend to put up the next chapter tomarrow. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
34. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 2:56 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 2:56 AM EDT
Hi everyone hope you all liked what I have done so far. You're at my favorite part of the story. And here is the next chapter to my action/thriller. Chapter 5: Feeling death. This could be the big finish!
Here is a link to my first chapter if your a newby here once again. Hope you fan fic fans will love this. Because I think it's great but crud I find that other people never like my stories. Hope like it. Because now that we know season 2 is comming out I hope my idea will be able to work in the backround when the show continues. But hey if only right?

http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
35. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 10:02 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 10:02 AM EDT
Once again I really like Derek's part - you got him down pat. And liked that your peaceful flashback turned into Cameron and her blue eyes(or into a waking nightmare in this case). Good job.

And I can identify with you on wondering if people are going to be upset when you put a fanfic out there. I'm never sure if I'm going to offend someone or not. Do you find this valuable?    
pb67
pb67
36. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 4:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 4:54 PM EDT
Only just found this myself so read all five chapters in quick sucession.

Nicely done - did you actually fire up a copy of Eliza for Cameron's dialogue in chapter one?

Hanging on for the next part now!! Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
37. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 8:13 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 8:13 PM EDT
"Only just found this myself so read all five chapters in quick sucession.

Nicely done - did you actually fire up a copy of Eliza for Cameron's dialogue in chapter one?

Hanging on for the next part now!!"
Who is Eliza? No I didn't.
Can you please explain? Do you find this valuable?    
udm
udm
38. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 8:27 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 8:27 PM EDT
"I yelled, “What do you guys want? I'm just your neighbor! I was trying to get help! What in the world in going on?” "

I lol'ed Do you find this valuable?    
udm
udm
39. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 8:29 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 8:29 PM EDT
"I yelled, “What do you guys want? I'm just your neighbor! I was trying to get help! What in the world in going on?” "

I lol'ed Do you find this valuable?    
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