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Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
40. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 9:13 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 9:13 PM EDT
""I yelled, “What do you guys want? I'm just your neighbor! I was trying to get help! What in the world in going on?” "

I lol'ed"
Hey I fix that I put it as

"I yelled, “What do you guys want? I'm just your neighbor! I was trying to get help! What in the world is going on?” "
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Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
41. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 25 2008, 9:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 25 2008, 9:17 PM EDT
""I yelled, “What do you guys want? I'm just your neighbor! I was trying to get help! What in the world in going on?” "

I lol'ed"
It's nice to know you all like it.

The next chapter I'm double checking before I post it is called: Chapter 6: "Turning Point to Serendipity"
The name was inspired by the Soundtrack to the movie Vantage Point. Do you find this valuable?    
pb67
pb67
42. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 26 2008, 4:56 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 26 2008, 4:56 AM EDT
"Who is Eliza? No I didn't.
Can you please explain?"
Eliza was one of the first human-computer interaction programs. It was a simulation of a psychotherapist type person.

Sure you know the sort; people pay them $200 an hour for them to just sit and ask "So tell me why you you feel that way" ...

It would be going too far to call Eliza a basic AI, but many people were fooled by its responses, at least on some level, and started responding to it as though it was human. So its quite famous (within geeky Computer Science circles anyway :o) as the forerunner of proper AIs.

Cameron's responses in the counsellor scene were very similar to the sort of responses that Eliza uses to elicit information, I think someone else mentioned that on another thread.

Your writing of her dialogue when she answered the door captured the same format perfectly, especially the "why do you answer my question with a question".

There's an online version you can play with here if you want to see what I mean :

http://www.manifestation.com/neurotoys/eliza.php3
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Finney23
43. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 26 2008, 6:15 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 26 2008, 6:15 AM EDT
sorry mate about not tell you how good your Fan fiction was so i will tell you now its very good keep up the good work mate !!!!! we love it and we also love it when people contribute to the official Terminator Sarah Connor Chronicles Fan site cool !!!! Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
44. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 26 2008, 9:20 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 26 2008, 9:20 AM EDT
"Eliza was one of the first human-computer interaction programs. It was a simulation of a psychotherapist type person.

Sure you know the sort; people pay them $200 an hour for them to just sit and ask "So tell me why you you feel that way" ...

It would be going too far to call Eliza a basic AI, but many people were fooled by its responses, at least on some level, and started responding to it as though it was human. So its quite famous (within geeky Computer Science circles anyway :o) as the forerunner of proper AIs.

Cameron's responses in the counsellor scene were very similar to the sort of responses that Eliza uses to elicit information, I think someone else mentioned that on another thread.

Your writing of her dialogue when she answered the door captured the same format perfectly, especially the "why do you answer my question with a question".

There's an online version you can play with here if you want to see what I mean :

http://www.manifestation.com/neurotoys/eliza.php3
"
Oh now I know what you mean. I've actually heard about that but I did know the name of it. That why I ask. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
45. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 26 2008, 9:23 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 26 2008, 9:23 AM EDT
"sorry mate about not tell you how good your Fan fiction was so i will tell you now its very good keep up the good work mate !!!!! we love it and we also love it when people contribute to the official Terminator Sarah Connor Chronicles Fan site cool !!!! "
So you really think my story is any good? So far.
Because if it's not good. Now the next chapter everyone will hate me for. This is what I'm getting nervous about. But anyways... I've been hard at work lately on this fan fiction. page wise the story is around 20 pages single spaced. Krazy huh? Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
46. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 26 2008, 9:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 26 2008, 9:04 PM EDT
Here we go people the next chapter is in.
Chapter 6: Turning point to serendipity.
This is the chapter where everything will change for David Tam McFly.
Here is a link to chapter one if you haven't ever read the story yet.
http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
mg.mikael
mg.mikael
47. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 9:40 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 9:40 AM EDT
Guess what ........................................................ Chapter 6 was GREAT, no wait freakin FANTASTIC!!!!!! 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
48. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 10:18 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 10:18 AM EDT
"Guess what ........................................................ Chapter 6 was GREAT, no wait freakin FANTASTIC!!!!!!"
Good. Now we will see what the rest of the readers will think. Do you find this valuable?    
pb67
pb67
49. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 2:50 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 2:50 PM EDT
"Good. Now we will see what the rest of the readers will think."
Well I'm going to hang on until next weekend and hopefully there will be 2-3 episodes to watch, er, I mean read by then :-)) I can't bear the waiting otherwise! Do you find this valuable?    
john121984
john121984
50. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 3:55 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 3:55 PM EDT
Chapter 6 was great. They all have been great. This has been a really good story. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
51. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 8:14 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 8:14 PM EDT
" I can't bear the waiting otherwise!"
That's what I like to hear.
My cliffhanger endings work! Muahha.... ha....... ha!

You can thank the movie Vantage Point and LOST for how I'm writing this story. Huh, Sounds like deja vu as I write this sentence again. Hope to continue to intrigue you readers out there as I continue to proof read my next chapter. Will it end? Only one can guess. But you will see where this story will go from here. And I've actually created a very interesting ending that will appease all my readers!
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Michelle67D
Michelle67D
52. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 8:14 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 8:14 PM EDT
Great job. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
53. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 27 2008, 9:00 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 27 2008, 9:00 PM EDT
"Great job. "
Thanks hopefull the rest of my fans will think the same way about this chapter too Michelle67D. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
54. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 1:27 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 1:27 AM EDT
WOW it's been an amazing write so far and I
JUST ADDED CHAPTER 7: WORKING TO MY FATE! The next finishing chapters are longer but I have to say the vivid details will make it more convicing for you readers.
CHECK IT OUT AND SHARE YOUR OPINIONS HERE!
Here is a link to chapter 1 : http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
55. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 2:26 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 2:26 AM EDT
Hope you guys will read it. Or are you guys waiting for me just to finish it so that you can read the whole story in one sitting? If you are how am I supposed to know if you don't tell me.

Because I post chapters as I see fit and satisfied that I'm not going to have to edit it anymore. Because somtimes when I work on newer chapters things don't match up with what I wrote so I have to change stuff in the previous one. So if your waiting for the end. I just let you know that it's around 9 to 10 chapters and that is as much information I will give. But I do have to say that my story has a very contraversial twist that I think you guys will love. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
56. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 2:43 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 2:43 AM EDT
When I'm writting this story. It remind me of the saying John Connor said. "When a code is stuck in your head. It has to come out" And that's true. I came up with this story (my theoretical code) in my head one night. And it has been keeping me up all night some times. This story is sort of becoming a long labrith of ideas that I've come up with since the time I've been on this website. So I would have to say that this story is inspired by you fans! Especially when I read Michelle67D's story the voice. I never thought of John's love for Cameron that way. And I loved the way you ended it. But, that not to say that my ending has anything to do with Michelle67D's. It doesn't! But her ideas helped me come up with a totally different idea that I think has never been thought about before. And the way this story will end will leave you guys wishing that this was the show. Or a miniseries tangent of the show!

Here are my inspreations so far:
-Vantage Point (Movie)
-Lost (TV series)
-Deja Vu
-Terminator: SCC
-"24"
-HG Wells the Time Machine
-Mission Impossible: III
-Terminator 2
-Michelle67D fan fiction stories
-Science Theories
-Journey Man (TV series) Do you find this valuable?    
Michelle67D
Michelle67D
57. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 11:50 AM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 11:50 AM EDT
lol my fanfiction helped to inspire you - just don't let it get your head all twisted - some of my stories are a little weird.

Sorry. I didn't have the chance earlier to read your next part - family stuff and I'm also working on another story of my own but I've read yours now and I must say it's getting really interesting with the Derek stuff - won't say any more about that because others haven't read it yet - but very interesting.

Oh and I loved this line from John - She means that you were fooled by a robot David. Great job. Do you find this valuable?    
john121984
john121984
58. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 1:39 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 1:39 PM EDT
"WOW it's been an amazing write so far and I
JUST ADDED CHAPTER 7: WORKING TO MY FATE! The next finishing chapters are longer but I have to say the vivid details will make it more convicing for you readers.
CHECK IT OUT AND SHARE YOUR OPINIONS HERE!
Here is a link to chapter 1 : http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat"
Great job on chapter 7. Do you find this valuable?    
Krazykaleb
Krazykaleb
59. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
Apr 29 2008, 9:04 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 29 2008, 9:04 PM EDT
Hi all I just added chapter 8: Burden of the World.

This is one of my more contraversial chapter's Hope you will let me know what you feel about what I wrote.
HEre is a link to chapter 1 http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+1%3A+Curiosity+Killed+the+Cat
By the way because of this chapter I've had to rename my story and chapter 7 title a little bit. Do you find this valuable?    
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