"I read up to your current episode on McFly's "emotions." Good stuff there, Krazy! Having the Connor's neighbor turn out to be a closet scientist who helped design Time Travel was a touch of genious! Maybe Cameron influenced Sarah to pick that neighborhood to stay in in some sneaky fashion. Speaking of Cameron, she sured did seem freakier than ever. Whenever she would stare at me like she did David in your story, I'd probably wet myself. LOL!!!

By any chance did David's father have any relations to Marty McFly and his father George's family? =) I thought that was a cool homage to Back to the Future!

Derek Reese to David in one of the bunkers rooting through David's personal cooler: "Hello McFly?? I just wrecked your armored Humvee, McFly... I could have been killed and ruined a perfectly good Tech-Com jacket! And all you have for me is LIGHT BEER??!!

David could almost be the "monk" of the show since he's always quoting scripture. Boy, if Sarkissian had been in a bad mood it would have been lights out... or another nice bullet wound to show for the encounter!

Gotta see what kind of Future he winds up in! 'Til next episode! Same Bat Time, Same Bat Channel! =)

Again, keep up the great work."

"I thought the dialogue was a bit oriented on religion. You sempt too pro Jehova's witness.

Good overall, especially with what you have to work with. And, lastly, no offense but I don't think Cam's that much of a skank... I think that's where you're going with this, in my opinion.."

"I didn't think they were oppressed... And now that we know there's a twist, we know she's not going to sleep with him. I think...."

"Actually I've learned that they were at a time oppessed by Hitler in Germany along with the Jews.
I learned it in my history class that they were one of the minority groups that were oppessed at that time. Also in Russia in the 60's. I'm just trying to say that they are good people and should be respected. And that's what I hope people will understand.
And with regard to Cameron I guess you will have to find out.."