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Krazykaleb |
80. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 2 2008, 2:22 AM EDT
I think I may be done and I will post it later today hopfully.The 10th chapter is approximately 11 pages double spaces so about 5 1/2 single spaced. This is probably the most amazing chapter I've written. I will double check it later today and post it. Then I will begin to double check the ending. See you guys later good night all. Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
81. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 3 2008, 2:43 AM EDT
Sorry everyone I'll be out of town for the weekend so I won't be able to post chapter 10 yet.But when I do post it you all will be very satisfied because it will bring you action drama and suspence. I recently watched the movie I Am Legend with the alternate ending. And I was so impressed that I actually love the movie now. So, I actually got some new insiration for the ending of the story. And contraversial is what you will all love about this story. Yep after I finish this sto Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
82. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 3 2008, 2:45 AM EDT
I mean after I finish this story you fans will be talking about how interesting Krazy Kaleb's mind is. You will definately be saying he is crazy.And if not. Sorry I disapointed you. Which I don't intend to offend anybody but crud somtimes people need somthing interesting to think about. Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
83. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 4 2008, 9:43 PM EDT
Here is a link! to chapter 10 only one more chapter to go!!!!!!!!!!!!http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+10%3A+The+Day+of+the+Nightmare 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Krazykaleb |
84. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 4 2008, 9:51 PM EDT
I think you all will love the twist to this story. Let me know if you like it. It's probably one of the most contraversial chapters ever with tons of action and suspence.Sorry folks that it kind of long. It would have been two chapter but I think it better when you get to read it completely. CHAPTER 11 will be awesome!!! Why? BECAUSE YOU READERS GET TO PICK THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MADE THREE VERSIONS WHICH I WILL POST AND ALLOW THE READER TO CHOOSE A ENDING BASED ON ONE WORD -version DOOM!!!!! -version HOPE!!!!!!!!! -version PEACE!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
85. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 4 2008, 9:54 PM EDT
Each version has it's very own interesting twist!!!!!I was inspired by I am legend with Will Smith because of the new alternate ending of the movie on the blu-ray disc and special edition I loved the alternate ending even better so this is my homage to I AM LEGEND with all the cool alternate endings. Plus in the end of each chapter I have a interesting note about somthing you may think interesting!!!! Hope you will all look forward to my spectacular ending and now enjoy chapter 10 Do you find this valuable? |
mg.mikael |
86. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 4 2008, 10:24 PM EDT
Chapter 10 was AWESOME, SWEET, and LEGENDARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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mg.mikael |
87. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 4 2008, 10:26 PM EDT
Chapter 10 had everything, twists, suprises and a great plot! WOW!!!!!!!!! The best. Do you find this valuable? |
Michelle67D |
88. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 5 2008, 12:19 PM EDT
Truly twisted Krazy. For a minute I thought that other show had bit the dust(trying not to say too much so as to spoil it for others). I liked the way you connected Ellison and Kester subtly into the plot - little things like that really add to the story- those type connections. Nice job.
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Krazykaleb |
89. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 5 2008, 2:23 PM EDT
Thanks you two. Nice to know you still like it.Now it's up to the rest of the readers to provide feedback. Hope they think of it as good. I only have one more chapter and this finnal chapter you audience readers will be able to pick your ending! I have made three versions and each version has it's own interesting twist! Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
90. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 5 2008, 2:31 PM EDT
here is a new link to my page I createdhttp://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/KrazyKaleb-+Fan+Fiction 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Krazykaleb |
91. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 5 2008, 9:15 PM EDT
By the way I'm going to allow the reader to pick there ending hope you all like it.I will give the reader three choices! Each with it own unique twist. Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
92. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 6 2008, 1:54 AM EDT
Well after much thinking. I was never content with the title of my story. A lot of my recent inspiration has come from these thingsI AM LEGEND VANTAGE POINT any time travel movie Back to the future, Deja Vu, LOST the TV series and 24 TV series Terminator:SCC plus other fan fictions! so with that in mind my character needed a interesting title for the story. So with this in mind I'm calling my story the following. Since he is not a main character in the Terminator world I would like to announce the name of the story as: THE LOST LEGEND Plus the endings are still in the works and hope you will enjoy the fact that you can pick your own ending. Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
93. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 6 2008, 2:32 AM EDT
"Well after much thinking. I was never content with the title of my story. A lot of my recent inspiration has come from these thingsCorrection the new title to the story is THE FORGOTTEN LEGEND here is a link to my story http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/KrazyKaleb-+Fan+Fiction 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
john121984 |
94. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 6 2008, 1:15 PM EDT
Just read chapter 10 it was great
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CameronsWiffy |
95. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 6 2008, 5:16 PM EDT
AMAZING! SERIOUSLY! I could seriously picture everything sp perfectly. You did an amazing job. You should be a writer for the show. Your details, your words, everything, perfect. I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Want happens to David in the future???Great job though. I like your focus. My fan fiction only focuses on getting John and Cameron together. lol. Great job. Keep it up! Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
96. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 7 2008, 12:35 AM EDT
"AMAZING! SERIOUSLY! I could seriously picture everything sp perfectly. You did an amazing job. You should be a writer for the show. Your details, your words, everything, perfect. I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Want happens to David in the future???Well CameronsWiffy I will let you know that there is only one chapter left. And here is the twist!!!! YOU GET TO CHOOSE YOUR ENDING!!!! YEP I MADE THREE VERSIONS EACH WITH THERE OWN INTERESTING TWIST I'M WORKING ON THEM AND I HOPE YOU WILL LOOK FORWARD TO IT!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Krazykaleb |
97. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 9 2008, 1:07 AM EDT
WOW!!!GUESS WHAT??????!!!!!!! THE ENDING IS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERE IS A LINK TO THE PAGE GIVE ME FEEDBACK WHEN YOUR DONE AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/KrazyKaleb-+Fan+Fiction Do you find this valuable? |
intrepid |
98. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 9 2008, 6:08 AM EDT
A good effort, I especially liked how you used certain aspects of peoples conversations from the show in your writing, it made the characters very realistic and believable. The middle part of the story wandered a little bit but it paid off with the ending! Bringing in 24 was great idea, while I was reading it I thought of your photo combining the two shows and thinking to myself you should have put it at the start of your chapter, then I “turned the page’ and there it was! LOL!
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Krazykaleb |
99. RE: Krazy Kaleb's NEW FAN FICTION!!!
May 9 2008, 11:00 AM EDT
Which Ending was your favorite?Or did you only read a single version. Do you find this valuable? |
