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hypno_0924 |
Chapter 2: Hang Fire
May 19 2008, 2:59 AM EDT
Thanks for reading my fan fic. If you liked the first chapter, please do check out the next one : http://sarahconnor.wetpaint.com/page/Chapter+2%3A+Hang+Fire
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Cameron
Derek
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mg.mikael |
1. RE: Chapter 2: Hang Fire
May 19 2008, 10:30 PM EDT
Another EXCELLENT fan fiction, hope their's another one after this. Loved how you included the engineer, and said that it was a "she." Great chapter 2, your fan fiction is evolving nicely. Can't wait for chapter 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2. Chapter 2: Hang Fire
May 20 2008, 6:48 AM EDT
hi mg.mikael.. I'm really glad that you liked it. thanks again. chapter 3 coming soon.
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3. RE: Chapter 2: Hang Fire
Aug 20 2008, 8:50 AM EDT
Nice job on the first chapter. Only thing I can say it try to put breaks inbetween conversations. it's easier on the eyes. It helps because this site doesn't do it for you.
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