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T100010
T100010
20. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 6:39 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 6:39 AM EDT
""I don't need leasons in loyalty by a lying meatl b**ch!" Derek replies. "I will protect John as I see fit and from who I see he needs it from, with my life if need be." "It may come to that if you get in my way again Derek" Cameron replies and walks over to Charlie's car opens the door and after a few minutes starts the car and drives away. Derek turns toward the door to see Sarah standing there. "Where is she going?" Sarah asks. "Not the question I thought you were going to ask, but to answer I don't know." Derek replies and then walks past her into the house and back to the bedroom to check on John.
The boy is still asleep, but breathing. With a sigh Derek turns out the lights and sits down in a chair to look out at the full moon and quiet night. He remebers nothing until the blazing morning sun and John's painfilled cry wakes him the next morning."
Cool job so far Saphire what direction should this keep going? Remeber we have to try to
expose what there connection is? Also make them have you somekind of truce so what do you think about that Saphire?
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T100010
T100010
21. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 6:42 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 6:42 AM EDT
"Cool job so far Saphire what direction should this keep going? Remeber we have to try to
expose what there connection is? Also make them have you somekind of truce so what do you think about that Saphire?"
Oh one more thing shouldn't my name be up there too? You know Saphire and T100010-FanFiction? Just a throught!
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
22. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 8:18 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 8:18 AM EDT
I agree that your name should be up there but I am not sure how to put it there! If you know go ahead and do it. Do you find this valuable?    
saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
23. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 3:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 3:22 PM EDT
Hey T100010 I found out how to add your name on the location part!! Do you find this valuable?    

KrelleK
24. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 4:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 4:12 PM EDT
Uuuhhh it is close i think, keep it coming keep it comming Do you find this valuable?    
AugustusM
AugustusM
25. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 4:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 4:12 PM EDT
Hey great wrtting! I think you guys are onto something r e a l l y interesting here.
Would it be ok, if gave you an idea about it?
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KrelleK
26. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 4:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 4:17 PM EDT
UUUhhhh cant wait to find out why Derek is afraid what he knows Cameron did him and the others, should make her change back to before reprograming

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T100010
T100010
27. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 4 2008, 7:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2008, 7:41 PM EDT
"Hey T100010 I found out how to add your name on the location part!!"
Thanks Saphire oh did you check your PM? Well Augtusts I don't know me and my writing partner have talk or anything will let you know cool? Thanks again for putting my name up there evevn dough yours is first it doesn't matter you could be on top as long on the bottom
I don't mind if a woman on top of me ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
28. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 8:05 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 8:05 AM EDT
""I don't need leasons in loyalty by a lying meatl b**ch!" Derek replies. "I will protect John as I see fit and from who I see he needs it from, with my life if need be." "It may come to that if you get in my way again Derek" Cameron replies and walks over to Charlie's car opens the door and after a few minutes starts the car and drives away. Derek turns toward the door to see Sarah standing there. "Where is she going?" Sarah asks. "Not the question I thought you were going to ask, but to answer I don't know." Derek replies and then walks past her into the house and back to the bedroom to check on John.
The boy is still asleep, but breathing. With a sigh Derek turns out the lights and sits down in a chair to look out at the full moon and quiet night. He remebers nothing until the blazing morning sun and John's painfilled cry wakes him the next morning."
Derek jumps up and turns to look at John. He is trying to sit up by himself in bed. Derek goes over and helps him up a little. He puts pillows behind him to rest against. "How do you feel?" "Like I got hit by a semi" John replies. "Where are we?" "Charlie's he fixed you up after the accident." Derek looks away a moment, as John looks up into his uncles face "why do you and Cameron always fight?" "She's not what you think she is." Derek replies. "Then tell me about the Cameron you know." Derek walks over to the window with his hand on his head and sighs. Then he pulls the chair upto the side of John's bed. "I hope that this will help you in the future it is the only way I can think of to warn you so listen up, because I do not want to have to tell you twice. I know you have feelings for her ..." John looks a little surprised and amused at this but dosen't interrupt. "Okay, Kyle and I went out on a security detail. We were tust making sure that none of the machines broke any of the defenses we had set up. We were about four miles from camp on one of the old highways. There were cars and junk all around us." He voice takes on that of a storyteller of old, but he sees everything in his mind. He can even smell the dank burnt air of the place. Hear Kyle's laugh as he jokes with him. Feel the stones crunch under his feet. The weight of the rifle in his hand, the med pack , ammo and supplies that he carries on his back. The air is hot, it is July , everything was still. It felt like they were alone in the world, no machines, no more killng, just the two of them. It had been a long time since they were able to be by themselves. Derek was greatful to John for letting him do this alone with Kyle.
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
29. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 8:22 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 8:22 AM EDT
"Hey did you hear something?" Kyle asks, looking around. "No.." Then they heard a crash. Spinning around they saw a bunch of cars that were pilled up fall over. The screams came soon after. Little voices calling for help, children crying. The brothers run through the junk as fast as they can. Climbing over the pilled up heaps of metal. Then they see them five or six kids trapped benneath a pile of cars. One dosen't look like she is breathing. Kyle pulls out the radio to tell base what they found as Derek works himself down to where the children are. He grabs the closet one, a boy about five years old and hands him up to Kyle. Then he needs to shift some junk out of the way to get to the others. Next a girl about six, another boy slightly older, then two girls possibley twins, then he is next to the on that is trapped. She is lying on her back, she had not said anything yet, but Derek can tell that she is breathing. "Hang on I will get you out' He then needs to move a car that is ballanced on two others, this is pinning the junk on top of the girl. "Hey Kyle can you get over to this car and help me move it. There is a girl trapped down here." Looking down at the girl he sees that she is about 16, pretty under all the dirt and grime. "Where are you from?" He asks, just then Kyle replies. 'I am on my way I will let you know when I get there." "Ok" Derek yells back up. He kneels down next to the girl. She looks up at him. He pushes he hair out of her face and smiles. "It will be alright." He keeps talking saying anything that comes ot mind to keep her calm. She has not said anything yet, just looks up at him with those solem eyes. "Ok the calvary has arrived!" Kyle jokes as he looks down through the metal at his brother. 'Lets try and move this stuff." Derek states. With alot of effort the two brothers move the car enought to get the girl out. Do you find this valuable?    
saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
30. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 8:39 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 8:39 AM EDT
"Thank you" She says as she pulls her shirt back down and unties a jacket form around he waist and puts it on. The other children are huddled together a few feet away. They are dirty and look tired but otherwise unhurt. "Are you okay?" Derek asks the girl that was trapped. "I'm fine" she replies curtly. "Okay troops lets head out!" Kyle calls over to the other kids. He picks up the smallest one and puts her on his back and heads out. The others follow. Derek stays back talking to the oldest girl as they walk back to camp. He found out that she was not apart of the group of children originally but joined them earlier that day. She had been with her mom and sister, but the machines caught them about two weeks ago. Her name was Cameron. She had been wondering around alone since then. The other children and Kyle were now sining songs a little ahead of them.
The camp lights came into view at the same time the sun started to rise. The children looked tired and had stop talking long before. Once in camp they led the children down to the bunks so they could get some water and sleep. Over the next few day Derek hung out with the young Cameron a lot. She had a nice smile and easy laugh. She talked little of her family and Derek did not want to pressure her into thinking about them. He knew how hard it was to be alone. The two worked on a lot of jobs together, Kyle teasing Derek about the only reason for him to do the laundry was because of Cameron. Derek just laughed and walked away. He finally found a friend who understood him. Cameron's mother had been ill for some time and she had to take care of her younger sister. Derek found thid out after telling her about Kyle and himself.
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
31. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 8:57 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 8:57 AM EDT
For someone who has hardly know peace, this was a peaceful time for Derek. He felt alive again. It wasn't all about the war anymore. But as in the case of war it always comes back to rear its ugly head. One day about a month after Cameron's arrival John Connor calls him into headquarters. "Derek, glad you could make it." John states with a smirk as Derek is the last to arrive. There are about ten others in the room, eight men (one is Kyle) and two women, besides John and Derek. "OK guys, and gals.."John starts "We think we have found a major strong hold of the machines. We are only sending the twelve of us in. We belive that a small group will be able to sneak in under their radar and blow the place up." He then gives the troop their jobs for the mission and the location of the building. Derek leaves and goes to tell Cameron that he will be gone for a while, so that she won't worry about him. As he is talking to her he places the plans that John gave him into his flak jacket pocket, and tosses the jacket onto his bunk to go wash up. When he returns Cameron is gone. Thinking that she must hate good byes Derek picks up the jacket and goes to meet the rest of his troop.

"It was the machine that sent my dad back, that's what they found right?" For the first time John intertupts Derek's story. Derek blinks and looks at John. He had almost forgotten where he was. He nods "Yeah it was the last time I saw Kyle, but not the last I saw of Cameron."
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
32. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 9:16 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 9:16 AM EDT
Derek explains about how the mission went down, how Kyle entered the biulding behind John then the place blow up. How the rest of them had to fight to get out, but only four made it. He told John how him and the others where caught and taken to a shed and chained to the floor. How when the machines took you to the basement you were never the same when you came back. "Then one of them came for me..." again he was back there the music playing sounded like the music from a music box (the kind with the little ballarina dancing in the top). How the wood smelt, the hands draging him down the stairs, and then he saw her. He has never known fear as he did in that moment. She turned to look at him, she looked the same but what was she doing here. Why wasn't she chained up with the others. The hands strapped him into the chair and then they left. He could not take his eyes off of her. She turned to look at him again, and for the first time he saw what she really was. Her eyes glowed red, for the breifest of moments. "Now Derek, Tell me who was sent back, who dose John trust the most, Who is his father?" She said them in a soft coaxing voice, but something in the chair was steadily sending more and more pain through Derek's body. "I'll never betray John Conner you lying metal b**ch!!!" He shouted through the pain into her face. Then she dispensed with being nice at all.

Derek stoppped talking and stared into spcae, she had betrayed him, she had tried to destroy him, all of them. How to get this through to John who sat staring at his uncle, not wanting to stop his story again.
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T100010
T100010
33. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 11:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 11:22 PM EDT
John with his eyes a red from the tears he was sheding as Derek countine the story.
Derek says ''she keep asking me about who was your dad and also who was sent back?''
''I give her nothing then she took a knife cut the strapps off the chair and punch real hard in my face knock me out blood on my nose blinding one of my eyes. ''I was on the floor
when i notice that that same chair I was tied to she is cutting out a hole throw the bottom of the chair then I said to her you lying bitch I save your life I cared for you this what you do to me! I loved you!!!!!!!!! with tears of anger in my eyes all felled with blood from my nose''.

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T100010
T100010
34. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 6 2008, 11:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 6 2008, 11:52 PM EDT
Then after Cameron finished cutting out the hole under the chair she walked over to where
Derek was at on the floor she get real close to his face and said with a slight smile on her face'' I fooled you!!!!!! Derek'' Then he spit in her face she moved away from his face slowly
then give him another big smack on the left side of his face while he trying to rcover from that smack he notice that Cameron was pulling his pants off and his underwears too.
She then grab him took him back to his chair with hole on the bottom chain him down real hard enough that it would cut the blood circultion throw his hands and foot thats how tight it was she pulled out this large metal anal probe Cameron ask him in more louder voice
''Where's John Connor? Who got sent back? Who does John trust?'' Derek says''Go to hell
you metal bitch go screw yourself''!!!!!!!! She says ''It's not me thats going to get screwd''
Derek screams ''NO''!!!!!!!!!!!!! as it she applys in from under the chair with the hole and his butt exposed. Then Derek stops talking becouse he's crying over his words when he's telling John the story what his haterd is towards Cameron John stares at Derek with his eyes full of tears too.
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T100010
T100010
35. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 12:09 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 12:09 AM EDT
He touches Dereks hand the one thats not crushed pulls him close for a hug they hug eachother real tight crying in eachother arms. Derek telling John''I don't have my parents or
your dad you'll all I got left I love you John'' He replies''I do to your the only part of my father I got left''. Little to Derek and John surprize Sarah was in the hallway outside the room with tears in her eyes too it turns out she been listening to Derek's story she's comes in puts her arms around both of them. Then Cameron walks in ''John are you ok?'' The three of them look up at her with that same look that Dereks been giving her of haterd. The look on Cameron's face is almost hartbreking its like what I did to them look.
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KrelleK
36. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 4:45 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 4:45 AM EDT
UUHHH not exactly sure I like where this is heading, I thhink they should tell her(Cameron) why they now all three looks at her with hatred in there eyes, Hopes you can, find a way for her to show them that she is no longer this bad and evil skynet controled robogirl. please find a way, please!!!! Do you find this valuable?    

KrelleK
37. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 5:33 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 5:33 AM EDT
after this, dark chapter she could experience, after she had heard them tell her why they now all look at her with hatred in there eyes, she could be like, she do not believe it herself, saying no! no! its not true! and yet after the time(seconds) goes by, she unwillingly sees the possibillity of her doing it(she herself said her memory was swiped before reprograming, but then she is told, she migt put the pieces together, or maybe she haves a subconcious, that is trickered, to let the truth show it self to her, then run to her room tears running down her face, closes the door and throw herself on the bed, and then either have her have a dream during a possible sleep mode, or just a daydream where she sees herself being there in that room were the bad things happened, and she can see and hear everything happening, but is not able to stop it from happening, and therefor she is forced to be a silent unlooker, locked inside her pre-repro endo, due to the fact it is dream. when she could dishelved wake up or, raise herself from the bed, going looking for them, there could either have gone minuts, or maybe a few hours, she either finds them still with John, might have her telling them all, i now know what I did, have just had a dream(or if you want it this way recovered an erased file) during sleepmode, and I understand it now, and you may never be able to forgive me, but I am very sorry for doing it. and I will do what I can for you to be able to trust me again, or something like that. Do you find this valuable?    
T100010
T100010
38. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 7:50 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 7:50 AM EDT
"after this, dark chapter she could experience, after she had heard them tell her why they now all look at her with hatred in there eyes, she could be like, she do not believe it herself, saying no! no! its not true! and yet after the time(seconds) goes by, she unwillingly sees the possibillity of her doing it(she herself said her memory was swiped before reprograming, but then she is told, she migt put the pieces together, or maybe she haves a subconcious, that is trickered, to let the truth show it self to her, then run to her room tears running down her face, closes the door and throw herself on the bed, and then either have her have a dream during a possible sleep mode, or just a daydream where she sees herself being there in that room were the bad things happened, and she can see and hear everything happening, but is not able to stop it from happening, and therefor she is forced to be a silent unlooker, locked inside her pre-repro endo, due to the fact it is dream. when she could dishelved wake up or, raise herself from the bed, going looking for them, there could either have gone minuts, or maybe a few hours, she either finds them still with John, might have her telling them all, i now know what I did, have just had a dream(or if you want it this way recovered an erased file) during sleepmode, and I understand it now, and you may never be able to forgive me, but I am very sorry for doing it. and I will do what I can for you to be able to trust me again, or something like that. "
Don't worry somes things have to down in order for it go up besides we herd Dereks side
maybe we will hear Cameron's side? To be honest I was worried how some of you all was going to respone to the violence that Derek went throw? I was thinking maybe thats why he hates her so munch KrelleK she had maybe lied and violated him in horrorable way imaginable. But I have somewhere in season 2 that secreat will be revealed it might be more worst then what I wrote. No maybe not? knowing Josh so far the contint maybe is to violent for T.V. thank god I hate sences like that on T.V. and movies I rather watch someone head being blown off then see a rape secne in a movie.
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saphireblueelf
saphireblueelf
39. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 10:53 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 7 2008, 10:53 AM EDT
"He touches Dereks hand the one thats not crushed pulls him close for a hug they hug eachother real tight crying in eachother arms. Derek telling John''I don't have my parents or
your dad you'll all I got left I love you John'' He replies''I do to your the only part of my father I got left''. Little to Derek and John surprize Sarah was in the hallway outside the room with tears in her eyes too it turns out she been listening to Derek's story she's comes in puts her arms around both of them. Then Cameron walks in ''John are you ok?'' The three of them look up at her with that same look that Dereks been giving her of haterd. The look on Cameron's face is almost hartbreking its like what I did to them look."
Cameron looks around at them all. Then holds up a small white paper bag in one hand and a large plastic gorcery bag in the other. "I got John's medicine." She then tosses the bag onto the bed next to John. "And donuts for your breakfast." They are still starring at her noone has spoken yet. Then Sarah struggleing to find her voice says "Where were you all night." Cameron looks at them puzzled. "I was here until Charlie asked me to get the medicine." she replies. "When did he ask you that?" John said. Cameron tilts her head thinking. "At 9:05 p.m. last night." She then looks puzzled again. "What's the matter?" John asks. Cameron looks at them all "What happened between 9:05 last night and 7:30 this morning? I have no memory for that time." John jumps off the bed and gets close to her face. "What do you mean you have no memory?" "I do not have any memory of the hours between those times. Did you shut me down, reprogram me? What did you do John?" Sarah grabs the gun from beside John's bed and points it at Cameron. "Are you lying to us again. How could your memory be erased?" "I am not lying, high energy feilds or someone reprogramming me could erase all my memories. But I have them all from the time I met John until now except the hours last night!!" What could be happening to her. John wondered. Then Derek moved acroos the room faster than anyone could react and hit Cameron with an exposed electrical cord enough to shut her down. "Where did you get that?" John asksed. "Never mind we have bigger problems. Someone got a hold of her last night and reprogrammed her. We do not know who, or what she is going to do. But someone else knows that she is not human." They all starred at Derek then John says "well lets find out. I can pull her chip and see where she might have gone."
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