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40. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 2:28 PM EDT
"Cameron looks around at them all. Then holds up a small white paper bag in one hand and a large plastic gorcery bag in the other. "I got John's medicine." She then tosses the bag onto the bed next to John. "And donuts for your breakfast." They are still starring at her noone has spoken yet. Then Sarah struggleing to find her voice says "Where were you all night." Cameron looks at them puzzled. "I was here until Charlie asked me to get the medicine." she replies. "When did he ask you that?" John said. Cameron tilts her head thinking. "At 9:05 p.m. last night." She then looks puzzled again. "What's the matter?" John asks. Cameron looks at them all "What happened between 9:05 last night and 7:30 this morning? I have no memory for that time." John jumps off the bed and gets close to her face. "What do you mean you have no memory?" "I do not have any memory of the hours between those times. Did you shut me down, reprogram me? What did you do John?" Sarah grabs the gun from beside John's bed and points it at Cameron. "Are you lying to us again. How could your memory be erased?" "I am not lying, high energy feilds or someone reprogramming me could erase all my memories. But I have them all from the time I met John until now except the hours last night!!" What could be happening to her. John wondered. Then Derek moved acroos the room faster than anyone could react and hit Cameron with an exposed electrical cord enough to shut her down. "Where did you get that?" John asksed. "Never mind we have bigger problems. Someone got a hold of her last night and reprogrammed her. We do not know who, or what she is going to do. But someone else knows that she is not human." They all starred at Derek then John says "well lets find out. I can pull her chip and see where she might have gone.""Ooohhh, this I think could perhaps go both ways, either has she been been reprogrammed by who knows, or perhaps she has for some reason, maybe unknown to herself shut down for some reason, and perhaps had a dream, that she does not remember. If she went into a sleep mode, after she had gotted the medecine, and sat her behind the wheel again, How are they gonna react to see her sit in the car, not doing anything, when they are checking her chip. Do you find this valuable? |
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41. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 2:39 PM EDT
"Cameron looks around at them all. Then holds up a small white paper bag in one hand and a large plastic gorcery bag in the other. "I got John's medicine." She then tosses the bag onto the bed next to John. "And donuts for your breakfast." They are still starring at her noone has spoken yet. Then Sarah struggleing to find her voice says "Where were you all night." Cameron looks at them puzzled. "I was here until Charlie asked me to get the medicine." she replies. "When did he ask you that?" John said. Cameron tilts her head thinking. "At 9:05 p.m. last night." She then looks puzzled again. "What's the matter?" John asks. Cameron looks at them all "What happened between 9:05 last night and 7:30 this morning? I have no memory for that time." John jumps off the bed and gets close to her face. "What do you mean you have no memory?" "I do not have any memory of the hours between those times. Did you shut me down, reprogram me? What did you do John?" Sarah grabs the gun from beside John's bed and points it at Cameron. "Are you lying to us again. How could your memory be erased?" "I am not lying, high energy feilds or someone reprogramming me could erase all my memories. But I have them all from the time I met John until now except the hours last night!!" What could be happening to her. John wondered. Then Derek moved acroos the room faster than anyone could react and hit Cameron with an exposed electrical cord enough to shut her down. "Where did you get that?" John asksed. "Never mind we have bigger problems. Someone got a hold of her last night and reprogrammed her. We do not know who, or what she is going to do. But someone else knows that she is not human." They all starred at Derek then John says "well lets find out. I can pull her chip and see where she might have gone.""Or could it be another Resistance fighter that have come, maybe one she knew shot her down, and erased that exact happening, maybe have her have a sleep time, for how many hours there now went on, and maybe uploaded some of the files there were erased from her when she was reprogrammed, because they might have understood that she needed those, or some of those maybe not pleasant memories(memory files) Is that possibillity? KrelleK hopes they will even believe her side of the story, if she can even explain it, if she does not remember it, that was why I had the thought of the resistance fighter come to upload the, or some of the memories. Do you find this valuable? |
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42. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 2:39 PM EDT
"Ooohhh, this I think could perhaps go both ways, either has she been been reprogrammed by who knows, or perhaps she has for some reason, maybe unknown to herself shut down for some reason, and perhaps had a dream, that she does not remember.I'm glad your enjoying the story KrelleK! Do you find this valuable? |
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43. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 2:43 PM EDT
"Or could it be another Resistance fighter that have come, maybe one she knew shot her down, and erased that exact happening, maybe have her have a sleep time, for how many hours there now went on, and maybe uploaded some of the files there were erased from her when she was reprogrammed, because they might have understood that she needed those, or some of those maybe not pleasant memories(memory files)Ok let me see about that? sounds interesting KrelleK Do you find this valuable? |
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44. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 3:04 PM EDT
"I'm glad your enjoying the story KrelleK!"Thanks, for that, am I the only one reading this? but anyway thanks for writting it, has you or the other, been on the Bluesunroom site(firefly/serenity fansite) there are greath firefly/serenity fanfics, especially a series made by an Author calling himself Hotpoint; in until 4 parts, with between 13 chapters, in each of part 1-2 and 18-20 in 3-4, and it is not yet finished hopefully more comming, also have on in four parts, on Twisting the hellmouth site(buffy/angel fansite) known as compelled to play again, or something like that, you could in both cases search under authors name: HotPoint should lead you directly to the stories, have tried to get him save Primaballerina(Summer first little role, in the angel episode, Waithing In The Wings. from just fading away, without luck, but mentioned it could be either made by him on a little gatthering of stories, that goes on in that buffy/angel timeline, or I could try myself and put it in that little gathering of stories, that he made for others if they had an idea for a little story, that had a little to with that story of his.. Do you find this valuable? |
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45. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 3:16 PM EDT
"Cameron looks around at them all. Then holds up a small white paper bag in one hand and a large plastic gorcery bag in the other. "I got John's medicine." She then tosses the bag onto the bed next to John. "And donuts for your breakfast." They are still starring at her noone has spoken yet. Then Sarah struggleing to find her voice says "Where were you all night." Cameron looks at them puzzled. "I was here until Charlie asked me to get the medicine." she replies. "When did he ask you that?" John said. Cameron tilts her head thinking. "At 9:05 p.m. last night." She then looks puzzled again. "What's the matter?" John asks. Cameron looks at them all "What happened between 9:05 last night and 7:30 this morning? I have no memory for that time." John jumps off the bed and gets close to her face. "What do you mean you have no memory?" "I do not have any memory of the hours between those times. Did you shut me down, reprogram me? What did you do John?" Sarah grabs the gun from beside John's bed and points it at Cameron. "Are you lying to us again. How could your memory be erased?" "I am not lying, high energy feilds or someone reprogramming me could erase all my memories. But I have them all from the time I met John until now except the hours last night!!" What could be happening to her. John wondered. Then Derek moved acroos the room faster than anyone could react and hit Cameron with an exposed electrical cord enough to shut her down. "Where did you get that?" John asksed. "Never mind we have bigger problems. Someone got a hold of her last night and reprogrammed her. We do not know who, or what she is going to do. But someone else knows that she is not human." They all starred at Derek then John says "well lets find out. I can pull her chip and see where she might have gone.""So still feeling a little weak from the gunshot wound John trys to go to the kitchin to find a small sharp knife meanwhile Derek and sarah try to left on to the bed very fast but not so easy for both of them as Derek says''dame she almost as heavy as moving a metal desk'' Sarah says''sit the hell up and get her to the bed we don't have time for jokes before she wakes up''. John walks in very fast just can't run remeber still a bit weak they got her on the bed John is about to a circle to her skill untill her brite blue light shines in her eyes Cameron says in a innocent voice''what happen to me what are you all doing this to me''? John in a scared voice'' look Cameron just take it easy i'm sorry that happen we just need to take your chip out for a minute to see what happen to your memories'' Cameron replys ''Ok John just don't let him near my chip it will in danger the mission''. Derek gives her a mean look then John pulls it out he says''I need my computer so I can read this'' so Sarah and Derek go to there home to get his laptop leaving John alone with Cameron. Do you find this valuable? |
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46. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 3:24 PM EDT
"So still feeling a little weak from the gunshot wound John trys to go to the kitchin to find a small sharp knife meanwhile Derek and sarah try to left on to the bed very fast but not so easy for both of them as Derek says''dame she almost as heavy as moving a metal desk''UUhhh keep it comming keep it comming. Do you find this valuable? |
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47. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 3:39 PM EDT
John looks at her with her eyes frozen open he puts his hand on her face touching it gentlyand talking to her as if see was awake''I don't understand what it is with me? it seems like I feel my love is with the machines I mean I remeber when I was 13 a terminator was her to pretect me too he was tell and strong he ask my question about humans he was like you in a way the more he could the more it would help him understand us''. ''I remember to I got to attach to him in a strange way he was the closest thing to a father to me we blow up cyberdine building we the cpu and a endo aim that they have in there possion me and my mom throw it in the hot melted steel then he had to go in there as well'' John eyes begin to start to get watery as he countines telling the story to a deactived Cameron. Do you find this valuable? |
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48. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 4:06 PM EDT
John with tears in his eyes once again puts the same hand thats touching hear face with he puts it over her eyes closing it so it more like she was asleep then just being deactived. He tells her as he starts crying slowly''I ordered him not to go but he said''I do now understand why you cry but thats something that I can never do''. ''So then I try to put my life back together I meet you for the first time there in the school the way you looked at me and talked to me I felt like my life was normal now''.''But the day that cromaritie shot you the day I found out that you was one of them I was a bit worried becouse here I go again I know I had to tell myself not to get attach to you becouse I know I will have to lose you too in order to stop judgement day from happening I just go throw that again'' ''I'm a little scared what i'm going to find on your chipmaybe seeing who you was before you was reprogremed by me in the future but i have to strong alot of lifes are depending on me''. So John moves in real close to her face and kisses her very gently on lips but pulls away quick when he sees through the window his mom and Derek pull in with his laptop. Do you find this valuable? |
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49. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 4:10 PM EDT
"John looks at her with her eyes frozen open he puts his hand on her face touching it gentlyUUUHHh I like this and the chapter before, it indicates John is not intirely against her, even through what he has heard from Derek. Keep it up, good work KrelleK Do you find this valuable? |
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50. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 4:46 PM EDT
"UUUHHh I like this and the chapter before, it indicates John is not intirely against her, even through what he has heard from Derek.Thanks KrelleK I sent this link to some others maybe they will enjoy this as munch as you? Now the tennis ball is in Saphire's court I'll be waiting for your serve LOL! Yeah I felt i would be good for John to express how he feels about her plus to hear him talk about Arnie was cool. Also remeber he just a 16 yr old boy with type of weight on his shoulders you it have to take his toll on him I mean came on life is hard it that age as it is the fate of the added to that would make anyone cry especilly if his only from of love is from a machine. Do you find this valuable? |
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51. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 5:00 PM EDT
"Thanks KrelleK I sent this link to some others maybe they will enjoy this as munch as you?And it certainly cannot make it easier on him the thought of loosing yet another human freindly terminator, that to boot has the look of very sweet and beatyfull country girl, that now might have changed her clothing style to either goth, or some other pretty colorrich attires, that could have/be his girlfriend, but due to something that might be Sarah that decided it, she is to look the part of his sister. Do you find this valuable? |
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52. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 6:11 PM EDT
"And it certainly cannot make it easier on him the thought of loosing yet another human freindly terminator, that to boot has the look of very sweet and beatyfull country girl, that now might have changed her clothing style to either goth, or some other pretty colorrich attires, that could have/be his girlfriend, but due to something that might be Sarah that decided it, she is to look the part of his sister."You hit it right on the nail! Do you find this valuable? |
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53. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 6:31 PM EDT
Awesome, just awesome! I have read your fan-fiction and i have to say that you doing a great job, all of you.
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54. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 7:03 PM EDT
"Awesome, just awesome! I have read your fan-fiction and i have to say that you doing a great job, all of you."Thanks for the kind words Mal! By the way I loved you in Firefly LOL! Do you find this valuable? |
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55. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 7:08 PM EDT
"So still feeling a little weak from the gunshot wound John trys to go to the kitchin to find a small sharp knife meanwhile Derek and sarah try to left on to the bed very fast but not so easy for both of them as Derek says''dame she almost as heavy as moving a metal desk''her skill untill her brite blue light shines in her eyes Cameron says in a innocent voice''what happen to me what are you all doing this to me''? John in a scared voice'' look Cameron just take it easy i'm sorry that happen we just need to take your chip out for a minute to see what happen to your memories'' Cameron replys ''Ok John just don't let him near my chip it will in danger the mission'' Ooohhh this scene of her asking in complete innocent voice ''what happen to me what are you all doing this to me' it is close bring tears to my eyes. think it could be taken on in a episode, maybe a bit toned down, but i think it could become a good episode. Do you find this valuable? |
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56. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 8:17 PM EDT
"her skill untill her brite blue light shines in her eyes Cameron says in a innocent voice''what happen to me what are you all doing this to me''?Maybe so? But Josh will probly do one way better episode then me and Saphire's story! Do you find this valuable? |
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57. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 7 2008, 8:33 PM EDT
"Maybe so? But Josh will probly do one way better episode then me and Saphire's story!"maybe, remains a mystery not to be known before we see it? LOL But it is good. hopes there soon wil come many more chapters, and seasons too of cause. KrelleK, Do you find this valuable? |
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58. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 12:59 AM EDT
This story is sooo good! Keep it coming. Thank you for mentioning my Kyle.
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59. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 7:54 AM EDT
keep it comming
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