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60. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 10:52 AM EDT
"John with tears in his eyes once again puts the same hand thats touching hear face with he puts it over her eyes closing it so it more like she was asleep then just being deactived. He tells her as he starts crying slowly''I ordered him not to go but he said''I do now understand why you cry but thats something that I can never do''. ''So then I try to put my life back together I meet you for the first time there in the school the way you looked at me and talked to me I felt like my life was normal now''.''But the day that cromaritie shot you the day I found out that you was one of them I was a bit worried becouse here I go again I know I had to tell myself not to get attach to you becouse I know I will have to lose you too in order to stop judgement day from happening I just go throw that again'' ''I'm a little scared what i'm going to find on your chipOnce Derek and Sarah give him the laptop John gets everything set up. He now knows how to manuver around insidet he chip and looks for the right date and time. They see Cameron at the pharmacy getting the medicine for John. All of a sudden Derek lets outa low moan and sits down on the side of the bed. He is starring at the computer screne like he has seen a gohst. "What's the matter?" Sarah and John say at the same time. "Derek points to the screen, it is fozen as Cameron is turning away from the counter and there is another customer behind Cameron. It is a girl with long red hair an army type jacket and jeans. Her head is down and her hair is covering her face. It is this person that Derek is starring at. "Do you know her?" Sarah asks. Derek still unable to speak nods his head yes. He gets up and slowwly walks around the room and then comes back to stand in front of Sarah ans John. "It's hard seeing her without Kyle. The two of them went everywhere together." Seeing the look on Sarah's face he quickly explains: "They were best friends, they met in a resistance camp after the bombs. Her family was all killed she had noone and Kyle just befriended her. They were together all the time after that." "What's her name?" Johns asks. "Kilee, everyone called them the double K's" Derek explains with a weak smile. Do you find this valuable? |
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61. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 11:03 AM EDT
"Well lets see what she is doing here then." Sarah states. John quickly moves to the computer and lets the chip continue to run. There is a breif glimps of Kilee outside with Cameron and then the chip blanks for a moment. When the picture returns it shows Kilee seated in a chair in a metal room. "Okay John I know that you will eventually see this. I know who your father is, but do not worry you and him saved my life to many times for me to betray either of you. He was a good friend." She smiles a soft said smile. "I know that you trust these machines more than most would, but this one has done some horrible things to your unit. She cannot be completely trusted. I ran her memory through some filters and everything is there. Her model the memories do not get erased they are just barried. She may be able to find ways to acces them again. I have tried to bury them deeper and hopefully it will work for know." She looks away to her left a moment. "Derek keep John safe until I can come and help you. I have to complete another mission first. This machine will continue to protect him until I can get there... I hope(she whispers) I will send her back with no memory of this. I can not let her know that I am here yet." Again she glances to her left. "Derek I will be watching you, know that you are safe for now." With that the screen goes blank and then shows Cameron pulling into the driveway and getting out with the bags of medicine and donuts.
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62. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 11:23 AM EDT
"Who is she and why should we trust her?" Sarah states as she jumps up and starts pacing around the room. Derek looks at the angry look on Sarah's face and smirks. "You're jeolus." He states. Sarah rushes at him and pins him to the wall. Derek is trying not to laugh as he lets her hold him there. "Who is she?" Sarah states glarring at Derek. She releases him and goes to sit by John. "How would she know who John's father is?" She asks. Derek shrugs "That just Kilee. She's pretty good at figuring things out." He looks at Sarsh who is still glaring at him. "Okay" Derek says. "She is a resitance fighter, one if not the best we have. John was stupid to send her back." Seeing John on the bed Derek smile "sorry" and continues "She is trained as a fighter but she also helps John reprogram the machines. She is good at everything she does. And.." he adds looking at Sarah "She is completely loyal to only one person. Care to make a guess." "KYLE!!" John and Sarah say at the same time. Derek nods. "You sent him back John, you took him away from her. My guess is if you did not send her back then she came back herself to find him. If you did send her back then you are the one who told her what he is to you. She will do anything to protect those she cares about." "Dose she care about you?" John asks looking at Derek. Derek sighs and runs his hand through his hair. "Well not exactly.. she sortta hates me.. calls me a caveman..." Sarah and John try not to laugh. Derek's face turns a liitle red "It is because I can never talk around her." "You like her!!" John states. Sarah and John laugh and start teasing Derek over the mystery girl. John pulls the chip out placing it back into Cameron. Before they activate her they all agree to keep Kilee a secreat for now. Do you find this valuable? |
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63. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 12:32 PM EDT
""Who is she and why should we trust her?" Sarah states as she jumps up and starts pacing around the room. Derek looks at the angry look on Sarah's face and smirks. "You're jeolus." He states. Sarah rushes at him and pins him to the wall. Derek is trying not to laugh as he lets her hold him there. "Who is she?" Sarah states glarring at Derek. She releases him and goes to sit by John. "How would she know who John's father is?" She asks. Derek shrugs "That just Kilee. She's pretty good at figuring things out." He looks at Sarsh who is still glaring at him. "Okay" Derek says. "She is a resitance fighter, one if not the best we have. John was stupid to send her back." Seeing John on the bed Derek smile "sorry" and continues "She is trained as a fighter but she also helps John reprogram the machines. She is good at everything she does. And.." he adds looking at Sarah "She is completely loyal to only one person. Care to make a guess."''WHOA''!!!!! I see you've been busy Saphire good work you interduce a new character a femile resistance fighter even better with long red hair yep I have a soft spot for redheads LOL! I'll use my famous words to desrcirbe what you posted''I LIKE IT, I LIKE IT''!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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64. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 12:35 PM EDT
""Who is she and why should we trust her?" Sarah states as she jumps up and starts pacing around the room. Derek looks at the angry look on Sarah's face and smirks. "You're jeolus." He states. Sarah rushes at him and pins him to the wall. Derek is trying not to laugh as he lets her hold him there. "Who is she?" Sarah states glarring at Derek. She releases him and goes to sit by John. "How would she know who John's father is?" She asks. Derek shrugs "That just Kilee. She's pretty good at figuring things out." He looks at Sarsh who is still glaring at him. "Okay" Derek says. "She is a resitance fighter, one if not the best we have. John was stupid to send her back." Seeing John on the bed Derek smile "sorry" and continues "She is trained as a fighter but she also helps John reprogram the machines. She is good at everything she does. And.." he adds looking at Sarah "She is completely loyal to only one person. Care to make a guess."Uhh sounds interesting, Hope they can find a way for her to either lose those memory files completely, Or on the other hand, maybe they should let her have them, either by releasing them/opening them for her, just like that, or maybe let things go the way they may, maybe through a dream/daydream sequence, I meen if thry let her know what she was before repograming, she might"grow stronger"(if you will) be able to brake possible hidden programing by skynet, and might truly be free, have a free will, But it might not be a pleasant discovery for her, to see what she was, if lets say she is evolving a bit, at first, feeling guild of leaving the dance instructor and her brother to the gun men, might even have it be just barely bearable for her, and then have this thing come to her, making her fall completely to pieces of guild over it, for doing does horrible things, to Derek and the others, . it might make her so determined to become free of skynet,, to evolve beyond it, and if possible kinda be like a metal human if you can say so, But if you choose make it like this, perhaps you should have John be ready to comfort her, maybe also have John ask Sarah to be ready to atleast give Cameron a little support. if you chose to have John sees how she is beginning to react to actuall feelings of guild of the whole thing about the dance instructor and her brother. Just my thoughts, but please drag it out abit, do not want it to go that fast, and yet i am still kinda anxious to know what happens. P.S how should the memory be able to change her back to be like she was before reprograming, I think the dangers lays in a possible still dormant program. laying waiting as Kilee feared there might be, in the memories Do you find this valuable? |
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65. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 12:43 PM EDT
Could possible make her want to liberate other like her, from Skynet, You Decide it is your story and T100010, and Saphireblueelf
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66. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 3:14 PM EDT
"Could possible make her want to liberate other like her, from Skynet, You Decide it is your story and T100010, and Saphireblueelf"Thanks for your surrport and insight you know Its funny how this fanfic was surpose to be about the connection between Derek and Cameron but its evolve in to something else which is good don't get me wroung. Just what I'm thinking is since the show has been off the air for a while me and Saphire along with you KrelleK as as others on this site really miss these characters on this show so thats why this fanfic is growing so lets now see what direction should this take? Oh by the way KrelleK I sent a friend request yesterday also a PM I didn't get a reply don't know if you knew that? Do you find this valuable? |
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67. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 3:32 PM EDT
No sorry had not seen it, will go in an say yes, and thanks for friend request, by the way what is a PM, no quite a bit about the internet, or so i think, but there are still holes here and there, and by the keep it coming, its good, but it is stil, atleeast to some degree about the connection is it not?KrelleK Do you find this valuable? |
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68. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 4:20 PM EDT
"No sorry had not seen it, will go in an say yes, and thanks for friend request, by the way what is a PM, no quite a bit about the internet, or so i think, but there are still holes here and there, and by the keep it coming, its good, but it is stil, atleeast to some degree about the connection is it not?PM means a prevet message that i sent to your inbox on your profile page when you sign in the wiki. Hope this helped you? No I don't thing its about there connection anymore but something maybe alot bigger just hang in there for a bit I have to eat dinner now maybe try to see have this going to add up? My hat is off to Saphire wow not bad for us begginers uh LOL!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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69. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 4:45 PM EDT
"PM means a prevet message that i sent to your inbox on your profile page when you sign in the wiki. Hope this helped you? No I don't thing its about there connection anymore but something maybe alot bigger just hang in there for a bit I have to eat dinner now maybe try to see have this going to add up? My hat is off to Saphire wow not bad for us begginers uh LOL!!!!!"but anyway, I think it is good, to the about thought of Cameron wanting to "free" others of her kind from skynet, well in that matter i guess carter, if he is still locked in Depot 37, could be the begining, and then there is atleast Cromartie/Kester, not sure if they are able to find him, but if they are, I must say I wonder How he/it will react to see Cameron with a little knife and pliers, in a belt, and a metal pipe in her hands? would you not like to be liberated from skynet. sending him her best smile, and then Jump on him. Do you find this valuable? |
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70. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 4:59 PM EDT
"but anyway, I think it is good, to the about thought of Cameron wanting to "free" others of her kind from skynet, well in that matter i guess carter, if he is still locked in Depot 37, could be the begining, and then there is atleast Cromartie/Kester, not sure if they are able to find him, but if they are, I must say I wonder How he/it will react to see Cameron with a little knife and pliers, in a belt, and a metal pipe in her hands? would you not like to be liberated from skynet. sending him her best smile, and then Jump on him."this was most for fun, but anyway would probably be a course for Cameron to take.if she is allowed to see what she was before, and that along with all the other things she has learned among people. and she decides to help not only humans but also others of her kind, against Skynet. Do you find this valuable? |
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71. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 5:04 PM EDT
and a little thought, she seemed(atleast the way you wrote it)really sad about not being allowed to dance anymore, If it was the music,(it seemed connect Derek/Cameron), could they not ask her to find another musical piece, if it iritated Derek? Do you find this valuable? |
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72. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:12 PM EDT
"and a little thought, she seemed(atleast the way you wrote it)really sad about not being allowed to dance anymore, If it was the music,(it seemed connect Derek/Cameron), could they not ask her to find another musical piece, if it iritated Derek?Thanks for all the support. Keep reading I do like your suggestions, and maybe able to use some. It is werid how this is turning out but fun! Right T100010. I think it is more about the connection of the entire group now not just Cameron and Derek! What do you think T100010 and KellerK? Do you find this valuable? |
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73. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:19 PM EDT
""Who is she and why should we trust her?" Sarah states as she jumps up and starts pacing around the room. Derek looks at the angry look on Sarah's face and smirks. "You're jeolus." He states. Sarah rushes at him and pins him to the wall. Derek is trying not to laugh as he lets her hold him there. "Who is she?" Sarah states glarring at Derek. She releases him and goes to sit by John. "How would she know who John's father is?" She asks. Derek shrugs "That just Kilee. She's pretty good at figuring things out." He looks at Sarsh who is still glaring at him. "Okay" Derek says. "She is a resitance fighter, one if not the best we have. John was stupid to send her back." Seeing John on the bed Derek smile "sorry" and continues "She is trained as a fighter but she also helps John reprogram the machines. She is good at everything she does. And.." he adds looking at Sarah "She is completely loyal to only one person. Care to make a guess."So John puts the chip back inside her skull then in a secound or 2 after putting the it back inside her John tells Derek ''your going to have to forgive her for everything she's then in the future remeber she was only progremed it wasn't personal I know it unforgiveable but you have to try for my sake''. Derek looks at John give a slight smile puts his hands on his shoulders takes a deep brethe and says''ok I know its not good for the mission''.Now Cameron P.O.V shows status check reading 100%her eyes open up with that blue light shows for a split secound Cameron takes a very slow look at John,Sarah and Derek and says ''you all look better at me now did you find another wroung on my chip''? John answered quick ''no Cameron everything is tight'' he said mucking her a bit. She give a slight smile got off the bed and said ''John don't forget to take your meds we have school tomorrow remeber if you don't go you'll be pick up on the redar''. Do you find this valuable? |
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74. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:26 PM EDT
"Thanks for all the support. Keep reading I do like your suggestions, and maybe able to use some. It is werid how this is turning out but fun! Right T100010. I think it is more about the connection of the entire group now not just Cameron and Derek! What do you think T100010 and KellerK?"yeah kinda, and that I think is a good thing, and lets hear more about this other part of the double K´s how her thoughts are on cyborgs, seemed on the file made by her on Cameron, she did not seem to trust Cameron very much, and It could also be interesting to maybe hear about Kyles view on Johns trust of the cyborgs, you could probably do it through Kilee, read a fanfic somewhere that indicated that while Derek, does not trust cyborgs, Kyle might have had a more soft view on them, similar to Johns, but it may not ad up to that of the movie Kyle, just wanted you to know. Do you find this valuable? |
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75. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:28 PM EDT
"Thanks for your surrport and insight you know Its funny how this fanfic was surpose to be about the connection between Derek and Cameron but its evolve in to something elseYeah, i think thats a good point. Its a really good story and i often wait till some of you post a new part so i can read it. When the show goes back online, i will miss some parts that are mentioned here. I hope that we will see how Cameron evolves to more than just a machine, like we can read it here in yours fan-fiction. Do you find this valuable? |
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76. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:37 PM EDT
John smiles but before he can respond Cameron adds "So where was I last night?" They look at each other and Derek answers. "Somehow you switched yourself into a sleep type mode. You went off line came back on this morning and got the donuts and came home. Mystery solved." He then walks past her to the door. Turning he asks "Can we go home now?" Sarah and John smile and Sarah says "Yes I think we impossed enough on Charlie." She add looking pointedly at John. John shrugged and unplugged his laptop and got all his stuff together. When he was ready to head out the door he noticed Cameron standing in the doorway with a glass of water and a pill for him. Smiling he takes the medicine and they walk into the living room together. "Thanks for everything!" Johns says and gives Charlie a hug. "Any time Kid" Charlie says back. Just then his wife walked into the room and hands an envolope to John. "This was on the back pourch it has your name on it." John looks down at the envalope but dosn't recognize the handwritting. Derek standing behind him sees it. The handwrittening he has seen a million times, just they why they used to send messages whenever he tried to ground Kyle, through a third party. He leans forward and whispers in John's ear "It's from her." Cameron turns her head and looks at Derek. 'Who is her?" She inquires. John and Derek look at each other, then John says "Cameron when people are whispering it means that they do not want to be overheard. So try not to listen if it is one of us, but if it is a person we are trying to get information from then you can okay?" She looks at John and then says "Thank you for explaining. Who is her?" With a sigh John looks at Derek and then at Sarah. "A girl I like from school." He lies. Cameron seems to accept this and they walk out to the truck that Charlie got for them.
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77. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:48 PM EDT
As they are heading down the road with Sarah driving, Derek in the front passenger seat and Cameron and John in back, Cameron looks over at John "Is it the girl who you always try to talk to at lunch? The one that always walks away from you?" John looks at Cameron "How do you know about her?" "It is my mission to protect you, I know everything about you." Cameron states and turns to look out the window. john closes his eyes and then shakes his head. Derek seeing this asks "Are you okay?" JOhn looks up and blinks again. "just really tired, head hurts." He says and starts to close his eyes, but they fall onto the envolope in his hand. He puts it into his laptop, a little nervous about opeing it so close to Cameron. This is from his dads best friend. The one person who knew him better than anyone and she was here to protect him. But a part of him thought as he was drifting off to sleep, what if she hates him for sending Kyle back and seperating them like Derek said. What if she is the one that can not be trusted. He remebers nothing until his mother is shaking him awake in front of their house. He follows everyone into the house and heads stright to his room to put his stuff away. He sets his laptop down and then turns to shut the door to his room. Cameron is standing at the end of the hall watching him. he smiles and closes the door. He walks over to his desk and opens the letter.
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78. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:51 PM EDT
I wonder how it would inflict on the story if Cameron would Wake up screaming from a dream, if you 2 chose to let her get acces(at all) to the memories that Kilee, and Derek mentioned to himself, at a time in you story, that they both worried she might get acces to. If she tried to sleep, it could be a little experiment/idea from John when things is normalised a bit to that of before Dereks story, if that is even possible, or it could be like in something similar to that of humans daydreaming. Happening in school of all places, if she either sits up suddenly in middle of class with a pretty high scream, either(the othere happening at home, while she tries to sleep in her bed) followed by a emotional breackdown, It could be something that made her a little unstabel with all the new things she is going through, similar to possibly what many teenagers,(of cause finding you are a killer robot, that like to torture) are going through at that age. and maybe for a little while impair her abillity to fight other robots, the "self secureness" in fighting against robots could then be regained when John is treathened by robots, maybe even Cromartie/Kester, and after that she might choose to ask John if they could try to liberate the others of her kind.Just a thouhgt, KrelleK Do you find this valuable? |
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79. RE: Derek and Cameron What is their connection
Jun 8 2008, 6:53 PM EDT
"So John puts the chip back inside her skull then in a secound or 2 after putting the it back inside her John tells Derek ''your going to have to forgive her for everything she's then in the future remeber she was only progremed it wasn't personal I know it unforgiveable but you have to try for my sake''. Derek looks at John give a slight smile puts his hands on his shoulders takes a deep brethe and says''ok I know its not good for the mission''.Now Cameron P.O.V shows status check reading 100%her eyes open up with that blue lightSarah tells Cameron''look why don't you Derek go take the car and go Loews pick a new door for Charlie afterall you smash his front door to picese'' Derek says''But why me? I didn't break the door'' John and Sara give a very serioius look he pauses himself puts his head and says''alright!!!!!!! but i'm driving you ride shotgun'' Cameron replies''John where's the shotgun I need it for the ride'' John and Sarah smile at eachother even Dereks cracks a slight smile. So her and Derek get in the car and drive away while in the overthere they hit a ttiffic jam Derek seems very uneasy that he'll be stuck with Cameron in the car for a while longer. Cameron asks ''is there anything i can do so we can get there quickly?'' Derek replies in a wiseguy way to her''sure what can you do you going step out of the car and push all the cars out of the way'' he says laughing at her. So shes puts a sad look on face unbuckels her seatbelt and steps out of the car and Dereks steps out of the car and yells''Where are you going to move the cars so we can get there quicky then you don't have to be in my pressance any longer''. Do you find this valuable? |
