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Munter |
20. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jun 29 2009, 1:51 PM EDT
Finally got round to reading your Fanfic...........yeah I'm just basically idle.Like Bruteforceboy, I read it in one go, didn't intend to but I got hooked and couldn't stop. Excellent story, well structured.........and of course..........it's Jameron...yay! It was nice to 'see' Morris again (damn you Fox) but I would have prefered a less 'final' treatment for him (but that's just my preference). Found myself welling up a couple of times. Good job no-one else was in the room, lol. Good to see Sarah warming to Cameron. I always thought JF overplayed her hate of 'metal'. Sure she should hate the 'metal' that were trying to kill John, but in T2 Sarah saw Uncle Bob as a replacement father figure. She trusted him with John's life and was sad to see him go. In TSCC, Sarah didn't like Cameron from the get go, and that was *before* she 'went bad'. Can't wait to read the sequels. (well actually I can......because I'm idle.....but I will read them........soon) . Do you find this valuable? |
Bruteforceboy |
21. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:26 AM EDT
ok so since i read the story on cam i was so hooked that i spent like the last two weeks reading the rest of your fan fics and it is extremely sad for me to say that i fell so much in love with your style of writing or jus the plot of your stories that i almost find it hard to read other peoples fanfics( i was poking around just to see what some other people came up with....) anyhow i loved your writing and im also very glad that i came onto it so late cause i got to read so muvh of your work plus i think that waiting around while you were getting your stories finished would have drove me crazy anyways at the end of your story judgement it says your working on another story called hope could you update me on your progress pretty please.................also if i could simply make just one little suggestion and not to be rude in anyway but you do use eternity an awful lot in your stories it seemed maybe you could use hours to desrcibe seconds or days to describe hours like i said though no offense loved your work also i voted for your story for the show down which is what got me started with your work in the first place thank you for the great work sorry if im dragging on ha ha thats why i leave the story teling to you......!!!!!!!!!
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kaotic |
22. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:49 AM EDT
Bruteforceboy. This is also one of my favorite stories; Veran has a great writing style and I find myself reading this, and his other story Quadrillogy quiet often. I never get bored of reading them. If you haven't read TurnCoat I would recommend reading it as well- it's the Prequel to Cameron's Redemption. I hated that this story ended, but we have Hope (last story of The Quadrillogy) to look forward too which I bet will be amazing.
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23. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 2:53 PM EDT
absolutly i cant wait and i definetly look forward to its post!!!!!
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TOK792 |
24. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 4:42 PM EDT
"ok so since i read the story on cam i was so hooked that i spent like the last two weeks reading the rest of your fan fics and it is extremely sad for me to say that i fell so much in love with your style of writing or jus the plot of your stories that i almost find it hard to read other peoples fanfics( i was poking around just to see what some other people came up with....) anyhow i loved your writing and im also very glad that i came onto it so late cause i got to read so muvh of your work plus i think that waiting around while you were getting your stories finished would have drove me crazy anyways at the end of your story judgement it says your working on another story called hope could you update me on your progress pretty please.................also if i could simply make just one little suggestion and not to be rude in anyway but you do use eternity an awful lot in your stories it seemed maybe you could use hours to desrcibe seconds or days to describe hours like i said though no offense loved your work also i voted for your story for the show down which is what got me started with your work in the first place thank you for the great work sorry if im dragging on ha ha thats why i leave the story teling to you......!!!!!!!!!""...after what seemed like an eternity." Yup, I do have a tendency to over play that word. lol Now in regards to Hope; I'm still planning it at the moment. I had a LOT of free time when I wrote the first three stories and was practically working on them every day without much pre-planning. However, I'm taking more time to plan this one because it's going to be roughly 30-50 chapters long and will tie up the entire story arc. So far I've planned the first three chapters and I'm currently writing a rough draft of Chapter 01 due to demand from readers like yourself. It's going to take a while, but I'm getting there. Do you find this valuable? |
MetalShifter |
25. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 4:52 PM EDT
@TOK792: Even as an AJ I have to admit you have some very good points in your story. As I am not a fanatic AJ I think there could be a way even if I thought some parts are ... aarrrgghhhh ... Believe me or not I read it!
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TOK792 |
26. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 4:53 PM EDT
"@TOK792: Even as an AJ I have to admit you have some very good points in your story. As I am not a fanatic AJ I think there could be a way even if I thought some parts are ... aarrrgghhhh ... Believe me or not I read it!"Wow, I caught the attention of an AJ?! I'm honoured. :P Do you find this valuable? |
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MetalShifter |
27. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 4:58 PM EDT
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"Wow, I caught the attention of an AJ?! I'm honoured. :P"I would even say (hoping nobody listens *lol*) I enjoyed your story somehow, because it is very good written. Do you find this valuable? |
thecrusadingknight |
28. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 5:19 PM EDT
Lotta great moments with this one. Right from the beginning with the way Cameron's glitch ends. Also love the moment where he tells her he won't destroy her. Also the part where it explains how John would want to go to the prom with Cameron. The love scene worked really well, as did the ending. This is one of my favorite fan fics.
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kaotic |
29. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:07 PM EDT
""...after what seemed like an eternity."I didn't know it's was going to be that big of a story. Now I really can't wait. Do you find this valuable? |
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TOK792 |
30. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:15 PM EDT
Okay, here's a teaser from the VERY rough draft of Hope (Chapter 01):The road became steeper and less inviting as they gradually ascended the mountain, off-road pathways being what they were. Derek had to admire Sarah’s genius for choosing such a location, despite its taxing distance from the city central. Though as a particularly rough bump resulted in his head colliding with the door frame, he had to wonder why she hadn’t at least chosen an easier and more direct path to the safe-house. Would be too easy, he reminded himself. In his opinion, she was becoming a little paranoid ever since… “I’m surprised you believed her.” Derek looked over at his nephew, who was facing him properly for the first time during the long journey home. “What?” he asked. “Cameron. When she told you about… it… I’m surprised you took her word for it”, John elaborated. Derek scratched the stubbly hair on his chin and narrowed his eyes at the road as he spoke, “I saw the scan just like you did. We checked, double checked, and triple checked to be sure it wasn’t a hoax. I may not understand how, but it simply is. We all just gotta accept and move on.” “Accept and move on”, John repeated unconvinced. “And what do you think about that? You still wanna hold me down while mom castrates me?” he joked, remembering Derek and Sarah’s initial reaction to the news that he’d not only slept with a machine (Cybernetic Organism, Cameron reminded them), but made her pregnant with some pseudo love-child. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
31. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:19 PM EDT
Not bad- But that's a little mean Veran- Now I want to read more. :/Do you find this valuable? |
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MetalShifter |
32. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:23 PM EDT
"Not bad- But that's a little mean Veran- Now I want to read more. :/Agreed! Do you find this valuable? |
eon8 |
33. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:37 PM EDT
"Not bad- But that's a little mean Veran- Now I want to read more. :/I do as well. Do you find this valuable? |
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TOK792 |
34. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:37 PM EDT
"Not bad- But that's a little mean Veran- Now I want to read more. :/Continued from the above extract: The corners of Derek’s mouth twitched as he recalled that day several long months ago. “I might consider it if I catch you two at it again. Once is bad enough”, he replied with a hidden smile. “Yeah, you and mom know all about that”, John reminded him snidely. Derek fell silent as he tried to blot that memory away forever. The crunching of gravel became more prevalent as the corner of the cabin came into view behind the wall of trees and thick green foliage. Derek swung the Chrysler into the drive and brought it to a stop, switching off the engine and letting out a sigh as he relieved his foot from the gas. It had been a long drive… too long. He glanced up and spotted the swishing of brown hair in the kitchen window as a figure moved into the lounge. Turning to his right, Derek saw a brief glimmer of panic in John’s face, but it was quickly replaced with wavering resolve. “I’m not ready for this”, he whispered to himself, briefly unaware of Derek’s presence. “No father ever is”, he replied before kicking the door open and stretching his legs for the first time in hours. John remained in the car and took a deep breath, wishing more than ever that he was back at the academy and far away from here. He wasn’t ready… Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
35. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 6:49 PM EDT
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This looks like it's going to be really fun to read, but like I told tallib I think you're a little evil for posting teasers. I can't wait to see where this story will go and I'm sure it's going to be great- And you were talking about how you don't have as much time as you did when you wrote the other stuff well don't worry about us take your time and make a good story.
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Blazar |
36. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 7:31 PM EDT
Those very really good teasers. I like them both. If that real chapter is going to be like those and even better, this is going to be as epic fic story as your other one's. But like kaotic mentioned you are really evil for posting teasers, Veran. Though that make it sure that readers wanted to read complete chapter. Still take all the time what you need and want and make a good story. Do you find this valuable? |
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TOK792 |
37. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 7:39 PM EDT
"Those very really good teasers. I like them both. If that real chapter is going to be like those and even better, this is going to be as epic fic story as your other one's.I can honestly say without ego, that the finale for this entire story is going to be brilliant. I've got a real twist coming up for one of the main characters and it's gonna totally change everything I've written before. I daren't say more, cos' chances are one of you might figure it out, but I can't wait to write that part of the story. Suffice to say the last chapter is going to be nothing short of epic. Do you find this valuable? |
NordWest |
38. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 7:44 PM EDT
Season 2 John as a father? This needs some thought to imagine. And Cameron as a mother? Hm??? This could be interesting. There exist another fiction with Cameron sort of a mother. It is LuckiiBeckiis. But in that story it is baby Allison. So it is different but still interesting how she deals with a baby. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
39. RE: Cam's Redemption Fav. Moments & Quotes
Jul 3 2009, 7:44 PM EDT
I wouldn't expect anything less than epic after reading Harbinger and Judgment which I thought were just amazing.
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