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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 6:10 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 6:10 PM EDT
Hey gang! I've started my first short story. It's a new twist on the backstory of Alison Young. Twisted, is more like it.... =)

Enjoy!
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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
1. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 6:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 6:12 PM EDT
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs-+Fan+Fiction

Sorry! There's the link.
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The_pretender
The_pretender
2. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 6:15 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 6:15 PM EDT
"Hey gang! I've started my first short story. It's a new twist on the backstory of Alison Young. Twisted, is more like it.... =)

Enjoy! "
very good fic
not the alison i was thinking about
but nice
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Veran
3. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 6:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 6:47 PM EDT
"Hey gang! I've started my first short story. It's a new twist on the backstory of Alison Young. Twisted, is more like it.... =)

Enjoy! "
Dude...

What the hell was going through your head when you wrote that? :)

Maybe you ought to stick with your brilliant love fics that you're so good at writing. Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go see a psychologist to get the onomatopoeia of that bird's neck snapping out of my head.
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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
4. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 6:57 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 6:57 PM EDT
"Dude...

What the hell was going through your head when you wrote that? :)

Maybe you ought to stick with your brilliant love fics that you're so good at writing. Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go see a psychologist to get the onomatopoeia of that bird's neck snapping out of my head."
I'm channeling my inner Stephen King. LOL!
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Veran
5. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 7:17 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 7:17 PM EDT
"I'm channeling my inner Stephen King. LOL! "
No, I think your avatar has rubbed off on your personality.
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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
6. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 7:18 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 7:18 PM EDT
"No, I think your avatar has rubbed off on your personality."
Victory Is Mine! [scampers off]
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The_pretender
The_pretender
7. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 7:23 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 7:23 PM EDT
"I'm channeling my inner Stephen King. LOL! "
Stephen King. RULES
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Veran
8. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 7:32 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 7:32 PM EDT
"Victory Is Mine! [scampers off]"
Now you remind me of that episode when Stewie and the dog go looking for his teddy bear and their helicopter starts to crash. The dog is panicking and looks over at Stewie, who has suddenly changed into a devil outfit and is laughing hysterically.
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Stampguy17
Stampguy17
9. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 9:21 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 9:21 PM EDT
"Dude...

What the hell was going through your head when you wrote that? :)

Maybe you ought to stick with your brilliant love fics that you're so good at writing. Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got to go see a psychologist to get the onomatopoeia of that bird's neck snapping out of my head."
God, that is gross about the bird.
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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
10. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 9:39 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 9:39 PM EDT
"God, that is gross about the bird. "
That's what I was going for, so thank you! =) Alison Young is not a kindly person... she's the demented and mentally unstable one this time around.
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Stampguy17
Stampguy17
11. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 9:42 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 9:42 PM EDT
"That's what I was going for, so thank you! =) "
Ummmmmmmmmm.............You're welcome.......I guess.....
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Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
12. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 10 2008, 10:02 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 10 2008, 10:02 PM EDT
"Ummmmmmmmmm.............You're welcome.......I guess....."
If it makes you feel any better... I have something in mind for Alison as a kind of pay back. She won't look at birds the same way again. =)
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Victisomega
Victisomega
13. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 12:26 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 12:26 AM EDT
I really enjoyed reading that, and I'm looking forward to the next segment. When it comes down to it with the bird, after watching Japanese Cyberpunk (I thought, hey the japanese culture in Cyber-punk..... heh, uhh no.) movies like Akira and Tetsuo: The Ironman (Not real diverse with their villains in Japan are they? :P) there isn't a whole lot that really bothers me. Anyways I just came to say bravo on the interesting read, I'm eagerly awaiting the next part. 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
intrepid
intrepid
14. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 3:01 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 3:01 AM EDT
I thought my fan fic was dark, but yours is pitch black!

I guess Alison didn’t make a good impression on you from episode 4, oh well.

Anyway, I/m glad you’ve managed to get in touch with your inner evil genius, more please! ;)
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Veran
15. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 6:45 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 6:45 AM EDT
"If it makes you feel any better... I have something in mind for Alison as a kind of pay back. She won't look at birds the same way again. =)"
Respectfully, I think I'll pass on that one.

Don't get me wrong, I've gone to some dark places in my fics. I've had John tortured a dozen times with Cameron chained up and crying out to him. I've killed off Derek, Sarah, Cromartie, even John (in an alternate universe).

But reading about a bird, a Robin no less, being crushed in sweet and innocent Allison's hand. Gyaahhh! Now that crosses the line between Blair Witch and Clockwork Orange.
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Stampguy17
Stampguy17
16. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 9:34 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 9:34 AM EDT
"Out reading about a bird, a Robin no less, being crushed in sweet and innocent Allison's hand. Gyaahhh! Now that crosses the line between Blair Witch and Clockwork Orange."
I agree with Veran on this.
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ScotWithOne_t
ScotWithOne_t
17. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 11:24 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 11:24 AM EDT
I like it so far. Nice to read a different twist on the story, and I love darker theme...especially when 99.98% of all TSCC fics are light and fluffy (not that those are bad either...just nice to have some variety).

And WTF Cuckoo?? Where is the soundtrack listing for this? I was fully expecting to see "In this scene, XX song is playing" complete with a youtube link, and lyrics listing. haha J/K
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Koudijs
Koudijs
18. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 11:50 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 11:50 AM EDT
I like were you are going... Alison bad... Cameron the good one? keep up the good stuff!! 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
Cuckoo4CocoaPuffs
19. RE: Cuckoo's first fan fic!
Oct 11 2008, 12:00 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 11 2008, 12:00 PM EDT
"Respectfully, I think I'll pass on that one.

Don't get me wrong, I've gone to some dark places in my fics. I've had John tortured a dozen times with Cameron chained up and crying out to him. I've killed off Derek, Sarah, Cromartie, even John (in an alternate universe).

But reading about a bird, a Robin no less, being crushed in sweet and innocent Allison's hand. Gyaahhh! Now that crosses the line between Blair Witch and Clockwork Orange."
However, I think you've expected us fan fic writers to stay true to exactly what we're seeing on the tube. This is my own take on things.

Hurting innocent animals is a sign of psychotic and sociopathic behavior, and because there weren't the normal hospitals and doctors around because of the war to medicate our dear Alison after she started showing these tendancies... her parents couldn't properly medicate her. She may be a villianess in my story, but she isn't 100% to blame.

This point comes in later... I'll say no more because I don't want to spoil the surprise.
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