"thank you. i'm just starting here, thinking about running with the concept. They would have a harder time hiding developing feelings now if they'd already showed more in the beginning. plus, john and cam will develop a more "conversational" relationship. Talking things over (instead of just glaring at each other. lol) will help their relationship develop as well."

"i want more this is great10/10 :)"

"thanks. i'm not great with the grammar part, i just like creative writing (putting yourself in their shoes) if you'd like to proof it, that would be fine. (can't promise i'll make the changes though. hehe. but i'll give it a good look and i don't mind suggestion) you're a pretty good source sidspappy, i might let you see a preview as i work on more fic. that way, i could possibly get it proofed before i post it.
thanks again"

"thanks. i'm not great with the grammar part, i just like creative writing (putting yourself in their shoes) if you'd like to proof it, that would be fine. (can't promise i'll make the changes though. hehe. but i'll give it a good look and i don't mind suggestion) you're a pretty good source sidspappy, i might let you see a preview as i work on more fic. that way, i could possibly get it proofed before i post it.
thanks again"

"thanks for the recent responses you guys. i have been working on more but i'll admit to being incredibly busy and not wanting to settle for second rate writing just to get something up. i want to continue to improve with the concept as i write more (i think the first part was rushed even a little bit). i thank you for your patience and support. ;-P i have some great scenes worked out for down the line that i'm dying to get to and it's killing me, in a way, to have to wait until it makes sense story-wise to post. trust me, though, great things to come. thanks again. love!"