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nonprodigal |
20. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 17 2008, 9:54 AM EST
"okay, so i've done what i shouldn't. i went ahead and posted two new scenes. there is not a story line to connect the original beginning of my fanfic to these.one last bump before i go to work...hope someone reads this today Do you find this valuable? |
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21. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 17 2008, 1:37 PM EST
"one last bump before i go to work...hope someone reads this today"Very, very good vignettes, my dear! Short, but capturing the essence and emotions of the moment successfully. If doing short pieces are your strength, keep at it. I too have a hard time with fully developed story arcs, unlike say Veran, who can create entire novels effortlessly. My favorite is "A Scene A Dream." Cam's crawl up the bed was very sensual, and your descriptions created a vivid scene in my mind. I was disappointed as John was that it was a dream. For some reason, every time I read fanfic where they get so close, I wonder what Cameron smells like. Does she use fragrance? Anyway, keep at it nonprodigal. I really love everything you write, so you always know you have at least one reader of your work, though I know many others do as well. See around the Club, sweetie! 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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22. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 17 2008, 1:48 PM EST
"one last bump before i go to work...hope someone reads this today"Ah Sarah always spoils the Jameron moments when it comes to fan-fics :P I very much enjoyed those, as Sidspappy already stated, your descriptions create a vivid scene that's easy to picture in the mind. I can't get over how similar your writing style is to mine. Very hard to describe, but I can see that you take the systematic proceeding of events like I do (this leads to that, and then to that etc.). Which I feel is a very good style to take with a Terminator story, since they work systematically as well, it kinda captures the moments in the way a Terminator fan would expect. To summerise, all I can say is keep up the good work. Whether you choose to write small scenes, or a full on story, I'm sure it will turn out be a brilliant read. Can't wait for more :) Sure I'll be seeing you around the club a bit later once you finish work. *Begins setting up the Anti-Grav room* :P 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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23. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 17 2008, 6:06 PM EST
"one last bump before i go to work...hope someone reads this today" You did very well with both. Scenes don't have to be huge, they just have to have impact and you did that with both. If you can evoke all of those moments out of your head, you can knit them together when you choose to later. Writing doesn't have to be linear in the creative process. You are doing much better than you think. =) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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24. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 17 2008, 7:35 PM EST
"Very, very good vignettes, my dear! Short, but capturing the essence and emotions of the moment successfully. If doing short pieces are your strength, keep at it. I too have a hard time with fully developed story arcs, unlike say Veran, who can create entire novels effortlessly.aww, thanks guys!! my biggest fans. ;-P i really wanted to share these random pieces....it was driving me crazy keeping them to myself. glad you enjoyed. =-) Do you find this valuable? |
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25. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 29 2008, 12:17 PM EST
I've added a link called "the future" which is a short scene that i've imagined repeatedly from what i believe to be john and cameron's future together. it could be an intro to a much more detailed explanation of the future relationship...if i pursue it. we'll see. this'll take no more than 3 minutes to read, check it out and let me know what you think.
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26. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 29 2008, 12:41 PM EST
"I've added a link called "the future" which is a short scene that i've imagined repeatedly from what i believe to be john and cameron's future together. it could be an intro to a much more detailed explanation of the future relationship...if i pursue it. we'll see. this'll take no more than 3 minutes to read, check it out and let me know what you think." Very nice scene, you painted a plausible new future. I really liked it. =) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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27. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 29 2008, 12:56 PM EST
"I've added a link called "the future" which is a short scene that i've imagined repeatedly from what i believe to be john and cameron's future together. it could be an intro to a much more detailed explanation of the future relationship...if i pursue it. we'll see. this'll take no more than 3 minutes to read, check it out and let me know what you think."That was short and sweet. Nice one. :) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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28. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 29 2008, 1:51 PM EST
"thanks you guys 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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29. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 29 2008, 6:52 PM EST
"I've added a link called "the future" which is a short scene that i've imagined repeatedly from what i believe to be john and cameron's future together. it could be an intro to a much more detailed explanation of the future relationship...if i pursue it. we'll see. this'll take no more than 3 minutes to read, check it out and let me know what you think."Whoa! Talk about a tease, prodigal! I am very interested in reading what happens! Don't keep us in the dark, sweetie. Do you find this valuable? |
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30. RE: Nonprodigal: First ever fanfiction
Nov 30 2008, 12:33 AM EST
"Whoa! Talk about a tease, prodigal! I am very interested in reading what happens! Don't keep us in the dark, sweetie."it was a bit of a tease huh? ;-P i want to develop it...this part has just been jumping to get out. Do you find this valuable? |