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aceplace57
aceplace57
Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 20 2008, 10:55 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 20 2008, 10:55 AM EST
A quiet Saturday morning at Denny's turns into a moment of extreme terror for Sarah and John.
Injured and separated from his mom & protector cyborg can John survive on his own?

Posting Schedule
Chapter 1 Sat, Dec 20
Chapter 2 Mon, Dec 22
Chapter 3 Wed Dec, 24

Chapter 1
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Breakfast+At+Denny%27s+Chapter+1
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LarryDAB
1. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 20 2008, 11:11 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 20 2008, 11:11 AM EST
"A quiet Saturday morning at Denny's turns into a moment of extreme terror for Sarah and John.
Injured and separated from his mom & protector cyborg can John survive on his own?

Posting Schedule
Chapter 1 Sat, Dec 20
Chapter 2 Mon, Dec 22
Chapter 3 Wed Dec, 24

Chapter 1
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Breakfast+At+Denny%27s+Chapter+1
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I can understand that if you have ever seen inside the kitchen at a typical Denny’s here in Florida (I have). All of that filth, but they make up for it with food that tastes like damp cardboard.

I would be terrified to if I was there.


Adios, Larry -- Central Floridays
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aceplace57
aceplace57
2. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 20 2008, 7:06 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 20 2008, 7:06 PM EST
"I can understand that if you have ever seen inside the kitchen at a typical Denny’s here in Florida (I have). All of that filth, but they make up for it with food that tastes like damp cardboard.

I would be terrified to if I was there.


Adios, Larry -- Central Floridays
“I aim to misbehave . . .”"
LOL I guess the waitress from hell that I wrote about would feel at home in Florida.

We have 5 Denny's in the metro area. Three of them are pretty bad. Two are good. We have 2 IHOPS and one of those sucks. Do you find this valuable?    
aceplace57
aceplace57
3. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 22 2008, 10:01 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 22 2008, 10:01 AM EST
Chapter 2 is posted.
Please let me know if you're enjoying the story.
I welcome constructive feedback.

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aceplace57
aceplace57
4. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 23 2008, 1:48 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 23 2008, 1:48 AM EST
I couldn't stand the ugly white text and black background.

I used snag it to capture the word pages in Preview mode. Cropped and re-uploaded to the wiki.
Making certain it didn't go into the photo gallary.

Now, the posts look like normal text on paper. Just like it does in a word processor.
Let me know if there's any problems viewing / reading the story. Do you find this valuable?    
t5000
t5000
5. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 23 2008, 2:32 AM EST | Post edited: Dec 23 2008, 2:32 AM EST
"I couldn't stand the ugly white text and black background.

I used snag it to capture the word pages in Preview mode. Cropped and re-uploaded to the wiki.
Making certain it didn't go into the photo gallary.

Now, the posts look like normal text on paper. Just like it does in a word processor.
Let me know if there's any problems viewing / reading the story."
the text is large and is better black on white.
so all good there .
I read the first 2 chapters and it is not bad, awaiting chapt 3. Do you find this valuable?    
aceplace57
aceplace57
6. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 26 2008, 5:38 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 26 2008, 5:38 PM EST
Chapter 3 is posted.

I found it the most interesting to write because I wanted to explore how Sarah would deal with failure. Sarah is her own harshest critic. She pushes herself beyond reason and she's paying the price mentally and physically.

I also wanted to contrast the John's harsh life with an idealized life he could have with a girlfriend, children and home.
John has decide if it's worth giving that up to stop Skynet.
It's the same decision Sarah had to make after Kyle dies.

I suggest starting with Chap 1 and using the Prev / Next Chapter buttons to navigate through the story.
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Breakfast+At+Denny%27s+Chapter+1

or you can jump right to Chapter 3 here...
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aceplace57
aceplace57
7. RE: Fan Fiction: Breakfast at Denny's
Dec 27 2008, 1:22 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 27 2008, 1:22 PM EST
I'm planning another story using the Terminator that attacked the Connor's at Denny's.
It'll be a new story that picks up after the Connor's get back to LA.

The attack (at Denny's) shakes up Sarah and it will help shape the relationship between John and Sarah.
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