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DeadpooI	80. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 20 2009, 8:59 PM EST "Thanks for love. But Deadpool, don't expect me to be writing you any 'Predazon' stories XD" Have some more love. I love the way you deal with John's reactions to Cameron's endoskeleton, both in these new chapters and the "I'd still love you if you were just an endoskeleton" part. Maybe I'll write the Predazon fic for you two...? :P Creepy. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
ClaudeFTW	81. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 20 2009, 9:08 PM EST Awesome. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
daemondark	82. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 20 2009, 10:08 PM EST Great stuff. I like how you gave John and sarah a little break. Ill just be drooling all over myself waiting for the next chapter. :) Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	83. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 5:14 PM EST Just added 181-182. Not much there, though. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Pharazon	84. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 5:26 PM EST "Just added 181-182. Not much there, though." absolutely brilliant...you really have a way of bringing humor into it. The last part of the update is hilarious. Keep up the great work. =) Post reply Do you find this valuable?
ClaudeFTW	85. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 5:44 PM EST Nice, so do you plan on adding more then 2 chapters a day? Eh? Eh? EH? Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Pharazon	86. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 5:46 PM EST "Nice, so do you plan on adding more then 2 chapters a day? Eh? Eh? EH? " He's probably holding them back, just to make us anxious. xD good work. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
JMHthe3rd	87. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 8:02 PM EST My god you're prolific! You've written one chapter after the next everyday, while I'm still hammering away on my second chapter (though I'm almost done, I may finish tonight). You have a knack for dialogue. And I eagerly await your next chapter. If I were to give any criticism, it'd be that it seems John had absolutely no problem killing Riley. It seems out of character. I mean, she did lie to him, and she might have been a gray (no proof of this), but he did spend a lot of time with her, and they did have sex. Him shooting her and making wise cracks about it afterwards seemed rather harsh. Glad Riley's dead though. And Cameron worrying about killing civilians? Is this the same Cameron who executed three baffoons because they happened to know where she lived (and stole her jacket?) Not really a complaint, per se, but I can't see Cameron caring about Joe Blow down the street. Anyway, your's is my favorite fic, so keep up the good work! Feeds Predaking pancakes Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	88. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 9:10 PM EST "1) If I were to give any criticism, it'd be that it seems John had absolutely no problem killing Riley. It seems out of character. 2) I mean, she did lie to him, and she might have been a gray (no proof of this), but he did spend a lot of time with her, and they did have sex. 3) Him shooting her and making wise cracks about it afterwards seemed rather harsh. 4) Glad Riley's dead though. 5) Cameron worrying about killing civilians? Is this the same Cameron who executed three baffoons because they happened to know where she lived (and stole her jacket?) 6) I can't see Cameron caring about Joe Blow down the street." 1) It wasn't supposed to seem like he cared. It was supposed be sort of from Derek's perspective. It was tainted by what Derek thought was going on. I gave no hints as to what John or Cameron were actually thinking or feeling, while making them 'look' as heartless as possible. 2) That's how you're supposed to feel. I avoided yes or no answers so that people would wonder if Cameron gave John the signal simply to get rid of the competition(she didn't). Also, I doubt that John and Riley had sex. He didn't seem very interested in her advances during that episode. Even if they did, that doesn't mean that he had feelings for her. 3) Yep, it sure does. :) 4) So am I. It's too bad that it can't happen again. And again. And again. 5) No it isn't the same Cameron, but 'knowing where she lives' equals 'knowing where John lives'. Also don't touch a girl's things. 6) This one's value of human life comes from behind the scenes events. She only cares about John. If I were John, I would have told her to imagine that every innocent person was 'John Connor'. That's why this one cares, but I didn't want to put that anywhere in the story. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Pharazon	89. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 21 2009, 9:44 PM EST Nice explanations, predaking Oh, and number 4 is pure win, LOL. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	90. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 22 2009, 3:48 AM EST Scenes 183-184 are up. I know that I didn't release as many as usual, but I think that it would be strange to apologize for making daily updates... :) On Riley: Before I decided to release my fanfic, she wasn't even alive in it. This is NOT A JOKE(but it's still funny). Scene 103: 'He did think it was odd that she still seemed to be attempting to get his attention, considering that Riley hadn't been coming around lately.' This is the same part, as it was before I named, numbered, or had any intention of releasing the scene: 'He did think it was odd that she still seemed to be attempting to get his attention, considering that Riley had died in a fire weeks earlier, forgotten by everyone.' Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	91. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 12:58 AM EST Now up to 187. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
daemondark	92. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 2:11 AM EST Fuc&in Awesome. Once again... i reaffirm. yours is my favorite fan fic.... period. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	93. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 2:23 AM EST Thanks! I thought that these were going down hill... Scene 188 is up now. 189 is just being written. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
daemondark	94. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 2:28 AM EST "Thanks! I thought that these were going down hill... Scene 188 is up now. 189 is just being written." downhill.... are you off your nut man?? :) your doin great. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Pharazon	95. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 2:30 AM EST "Thanks! I thought that these were going down hill... Scene 188 is up now. 189 is just being written." are you serious? You write fast man! This stuff is so great. On the note of fan fics, I would be incredibly honored if you would read my fanfic I put up today. It's not very long, and I can't promise an update really soon like you always do. You're very good at what you do, predaking. =) my fanfic, btw: http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Pharazon%27s+Fan+Fiction If you like it you can post your thoughts on the JAMERON thread, and that would be great. You don't have to read it, but like I said, I would be honored. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
daemondark	96. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 2:57 AM EST "Thanks! I thought that these were going down hill... Scene 188 is up now. 189 is just being written." I just wanted to say thank you. because of the cliff hanger ending to 188...Im not gonna be able to sleep tonight >:p Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Pharazon	97. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 3:11 AM EST "I just wanted to say thank you. because of the cliff hanger ending to 188...Im not gonna be able to sleep tonight >:p" ...no kidding... LOL. I swear, he plans all of this. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
predaking50ae	98. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 4:06 AM EST 189 is up. Lol, blame Pharazon's fanfic for distracting me. ;) Post reply Do you find this valuable?
ClaudeFTW	99. RE: Predaking50AE's First Fanfic Jan 23 2009, 6:58 AM EST Intense last chapter. Loved the new ones. Keep'em coming. Post reply Do you find this valuable?

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