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JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 3:59 AM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 8:06 PM EDT
Here I'm presenting the first chapter in my very first fan fiction. It's called "In the Hands of an Angry Machine."

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/1/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine

Or:

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/JMHthe3rd%27s+Fan+Fiction

I'd appreciate any feedback.

Here it is on CameronandJohn.net: http://cameronandjohn.com/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=61 Do you find this valuable?    
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Pharazon
Pharazon
1. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 4:18 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 4:18 AM EST
"Here I'm presenting the first chapter in my very first fan fiction. It's called "In the Hands of an Angry Machine."

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/JMHthe3rd%27s+Fan+Fiction

I'd appreciate any feedback."
Hey JMH, great to see a new fan fic. Sorry though I think I'm going to read it later today (it's 1:17 in the morning and I need my sleep). I'll definitely be sure to give you feedback once I read it!

Just thought I would let you know. Look forward to reading. G'night. =) Do you find this valuable?    

DeadpooI
2. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 5:42 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 5:42 AM EST
"Plez, sir... Can I haz sum moars?" Do you find this valuable?    
daemondark
daemondark
3. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 8:53 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 8:53 AM EST
Pretty good for your first fic. :)
Lookin forward to the next chapter.

One question though. Any Jameron in your stories future?. If not thats cool. i still enjotyed it and will read the next chapter. i was just wondering. Do you find this valuable?    
Dr._Allison_Cameron
Dr._Allison_Cameron
4. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 11:39 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 11:39 AM EST
That's tight!! Very kewl. Ur good at this.

I expecialy liek knowing the characters thots. The TV show is so inscrewtible, this is great.

Thanx! Do you find this valuable?    
Brovane
Brovane
5. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 1:16 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 1:16 PM EST
"Here I'm presenting the first chapter in my very first fan fiction. It's called "In the Hands of an Angry Machine."

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/JMHthe3rd%27s+Fan+Fiction

I'd appreciate any feedback."
Thanks I just read through it and I liked it. I was originally kind of put off that it followed the series so closely. However I enjoyed being able to read the thoughts of the characters which was nice.

It looks like you are kind of going down the same road that I was thinking about. The future that Derek comes from Cameron doesn't spend Decades with John. Jesse comes from that different future. I think John by putting Cameron's chip back into her head changed the future. Cameron was supposed to die. John put Cameron's life above his own. This is what she meant that people would be upset. Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
6. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 1:43 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 1:43 PM EST
"Thanks I just read through it and I liked it. I was originally kind of put off that it followed the series so closely. However I enjoyed being able to read the thoughts of the characters which was nice.

It looks like you are kind of going down the same road that I was thinking about. The future that Derek comes from Cameron doesn't spend Decades with John. Jesse comes from that different future. I think John by putting Cameron's chip back into her head changed the future. Cameron was supposed to die. John put Cameron's life above his own. This is what she meant that people would be upset. "
Your idea is similar to mine but not quite the same. I laid out my what I think the different timelines' might look like in another post: http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/thread/2259029/Was+Allison+lying+about+everything%3F?offset=60&maxResults=20#reply69

That's more or less the general framework I'm using for my fic.

As for whether I'll have Jameron or not, probably, but not until a bit later in the story. A lot has to happen before I think that can become viable, I think.

Thanks for the comments. Do you find this valuable?    
Pharazon
Pharazon
7. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 16 2009, 2:35 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 16 2009, 2:35 PM EST
"Your idea is similar to mine but not quite the same. I laid out my what I think the different timelines' might look like in another post: http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/thread/2259029/Was+Allison+lying+about+everything%3F?offset=60&maxResults=20#reply69

That's more or less the general framework I'm using for my fic.

As for whether I'll have Jameron or not, probably, but not until a bit later in the story. A lot has to happen before I think that can become viable, I think.

Thanks for the comments."
Great work JMH! I like your approach to the whole timeline thing, it seems to work pretty well. Now you've got me worrying that things might go wrong.... Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
8. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 22 2009, 4:03 AM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:06 PM EDT
I just put Chapter two up. Let me know what you think. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/2/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine

And I see Deadpool has a new fic. I'm going to go read that now. Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
9. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 27 2009, 2:26 PM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:07 PM EDT
I've put up the third chapter. Let me know what you all think.

Chapter Three: A Second Chance: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/3/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine

I probably won't start on Chapter four until Thursday or Friday. I need a break.

Right now I'm reading King Steve's excellent "Judgement's Dawn."

It could be found here

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4411569/1/Judgements_Dawn

If you haven't read it I really recommend it. It's really good. Do you find this valuable?    
Pharazon
Pharazon
10. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 27 2009, 2:26 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 27 2009, 2:26 PM EST
yay

=) Do you find this valuable?    

DeadpooI
11. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 27 2009, 2:49 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 27 2009, 2:49 PM EST
I f**king love you - platonically of course...
But seriously, I love the dialogue, the distinct variations in style between inner thoughts, the pace, the detail, the lack of superfluous, "fatty" material (as is the case in my fanfic.) Not a line is wasted. Everything seems to say something of importance. I also like the direction of course, and given all the Riley-Cam arguments that are going on now I particularly loved the bimbo's "and you love me!"

Well that's what I think anyway. :) Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
12. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Jan 31 2009, 11:28 PM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:08 PM EDT
Just posted Chapter Four: Plan B

Tell me what you guys think.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/4/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
13. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 5 2009, 3:08 PM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:09 PM EDT
Chapter Five is up. Let me know what you think. Feedback welcome.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/5/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
14. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 9 2009, 4:11 PM EST | Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:09 PM EDT
Chapter Six is up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/6/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine Do you find this valuable?    
ClaudeFTW
ClaudeFTW
15. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 9 2009, 4:29 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 9 2009, 4:29 PM EST
Lol, and I was looking for it on FF.net. Thanks for the heads-up, I'm loving it, just so you know. ;) Keep up the good work. Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
16. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 9 2009, 4:37 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 9 2009, 4:37 PM EST
Okay, just put it up on FF.net

I wonder if I should even bother with CameronandJohn.com. Putting in all the italics in over there is a bitch, and I'm not if that many people go there anyway. Do you find this valuable?    
john121984
john121984
17. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 9 2009, 6:51 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 9 2009, 6:51 PM EST
"Okay, just put it up on FF.net

I wonder if I should even bother with CameronandJohn.com. Putting in all the italics in over there is a bitch, and I'm not if that many people go there anyway."
Thats where I found it, I was looking at that site the other day your story was the newest one posted. what I have read so far has been really good. Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
18. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 9 2009, 7:29 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 9 2009, 7:29 PM EST
Okay, in that case I just put Chapter Six over there. I kind of wish I didn't have to type in all the HTML code for itlaics though. Do you find this valuable?    
milrom
milrom
19. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 10 2009, 8:29 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 10 2009, 8:29 PM EST
really cant wait for the next chapter :D Do you find this valuable?    
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