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JMHthe3rd |
20. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 10 2009, 8:57 PM EST
Thanks. I just started "Chapter Seven: Stranger and Stranger" and am currently 429 words into it. I should have it done by Thursday, hopefully.
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JMHthe3rd |
21. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 12 2009, 11:04 PM EST
| Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:11 PM EDT
Just posted Chapter Seven: The Banality of Evilhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/7/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine (Evidently I lied about it being called "Stranger and Stranger") Do you find this valuable? |
warriormind |
22. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 13 2009, 12:09 AM EST
Great story so far. I think you've done a good job capturing the thought processes of each character, especially Cameron.I also really enjoy your alternate future. Its an interesting twist on what post-judgement day may be like, but seems perfectly logical given Cameron's character. I can't wait till the next chapter. Do you find this valuable? |
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JMHthe3rd |
23. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 16 2009, 4:26 PM EST
| Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:11 PM EDT
"Chapter Eight: Orpheus" is up.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/8/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine Do you find this valuable? |
ClaudeFTW |
24. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 16 2009, 4:46 PM EST
Tell me she's not dead or that she'll survive and I won't throw some plasma grenades at ya.
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JMHthe3rd |
25. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 16 2009, 5:02 PM EST
You should find out on Thursday. Or maybe Friday if I'm lazy.
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DeadpooI |
26. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 16 2009, 5:05 PM EST
"You should find out on Thursday. Or maybe Friday if I'm lazy."Not if he's thrown a plasma grenade at you by then ;) Great job by the way. My hat goes off to your style, original direction, and... well everything word you wrote. Do you find this valuable? |
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JMHthe3rd |
27. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 4:35 AM EST
| Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:12 PM EDT
"Chapter Nine: Without Her Consent" is uphttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/9/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine Do you find this valuable? |
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ClaudeFTW |
28. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 4:58 AM EST
Awesome chapter. You are spared. For now.
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MrsReese |
29. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 11:14 AM EST
Only up to Chapter 6 but I'm hooked! Keep it up JMH. Not only is it well written, ur stuff helps me pass the time between episodes. I'm a fan of fan fiction!
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JMHthe3rd |
30. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 11:17 AM EST
Thanks.BTW: I think I'm going to do a bit of an overhaul on Chapter Nine. I think it needs more spit and polish; I probably shouldn't have promised it by Thursday. I may have rushed things too much. I'd like to thank Metroid13 on FF.net for giving me some advice on this. Do you find this valuable? |
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JMHthe3rd |
31. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 4:29 PM EST
Did a revision on Chapter Nine. Not perfect, in my opinion, but it's not quite as bland either.
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Blazar |
32. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 20 2009, 10:11 PM EST
Absolutely awesome story and it's getting better and better by every chapter. Now it would be great to see how Derek will react on, when he actually see his *brother* also that upcoming interrogation will be interesting. Thanks to many different timeline :) Do you find this valuable? |
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JMHthe3rd |
33. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 21 2009, 12:05 AM EST
"Absolutely awesome story and it's getting better and better by every chapter.Yeah, Kyle is basically an Anti-Derek. I don't think Kyle and Derek are going to get along very well. Do you find this valuable? |
Sierra-3 |
34. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 24 2009, 3:39 AM EST
Good story Sir, good interaction and a cool setting. Keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter.S3 Do you find this valuable? |
FrenchFanofTSCC |
35. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 24 2009, 3:42 AM EST
oh wow,you Great Man,i love your fan Fiction ! Chapter Nine: Without Her Consent ! you genius !
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JMHthe3rd |
36. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 26 2009, 2:47 AM EST
| Post edited: Mar 18 2009, 7:12 PM EDT
"Chapter Ten: No Brother of Mine" is up. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4809923/10/In_the_Hands_of_an_Angry_Machine This is sort of a "beta." I may have someone beta-read it before I put it up on FF.net. i don't plan on changing all that much, if anything. In any event, it'll be on FF.net before this weekend begins. I plan to start work on Chapter Eleven in three days, and I want Ch. Ten to be up on FF before I do, beta-read or not. Let me know what you think. Do you find this valuable? |
TK-MR |
37. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 26 2009, 4:17 AM EST
Nice work on story.But the POV seems mess up. it has both 3th and 1st mix up make some part felt awkward after read it. like John's part, where kind of too much "Mom" as Sarah. keep update! what John and Cam are going to do after stitched her up? Do you find this valuable? |
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Sierra-3 |
38. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 26 2009, 4:38 AM EST
Another good chapter Sir ! Can't wait for the follow-up...S3 Do you find this valuable? |
Zable_Fahr |
39. RE: JMHthe3rd's First Fan Fiction
Feb 26 2009, 7:00 AM EST
Interesting chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
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