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Cammynator
Cammynator
Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 5:48 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 5:48 PM EST
Ok so i started a fanfiction, tell me what you guys think. Oh and correct me if I make spelling errors. English isn't my native language.

Beware, my fanfiction is very Jameron 2  out of 2 found this valuable. Do you?    
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Pharazon
Pharazon
1. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 5:53 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 5:53 PM EST
"Ok so i started a fanfiction, tell me what you guys think. Oh and correct me if I make spelling errors. English isn't my native language.

Beware, my fanfiction is very Jameron"
nice work Cammynator. It's pretty fast moving, but I like. Do you think you could say when exactly this occurs in our timeline? That would help me get better situated in it. good work =)

Oh, and the last couple lines are really the best. "What happened to his face?" hehehehe....hell hath no fury... Do you find this valuable?    

Buchholzer
2. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 6:00 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 6:00 PM EST
Nice work dude.

 Do you find this valuable?    
Cammynator
Cammynator
3. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 6:02 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 6:02 PM EST
"nice work Cammynator. It's pretty fast moving, but I like. Do you think you could say when exactly this occurs in our timeline? That would help me get better situated in it. good work =)

Oh, and the last couple lines are really the best. "What happened to his face?" hehehehe....hell hath no fury..."
It's AU, so it cannot be situated in TSCC, but it takes place after Samson and Delilah. After Cameron received the damage to her chip Do you find this valuable?    
Cammynator
Cammynator
4. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 6:02 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 6:02 PM EST
"Nice work dude.

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thanks :) Do you find this valuable?    
Pharazon
Pharazon
5. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 6:20 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 6:20 PM EST
"It's AU, so it cannot be situated in TSCC, but it takes place after Samson and Delilah. After Cameron received the damage to her chip"
k, that's all I really wanted to know. It's good to have a starting point, especially when reading five different fanfics updated around the site. Nice job. =) Do you find this valuable?    

DeadpooI
6. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Jan 20 2009, 7:42 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 20 2009, 7:42 PM EST
Good job.
You keep up. Me keep nom-noming.

Tasty shizzle. Do you find this valuable?    
TerminatorCharles
TerminatorCharles
7. RE: Cammynator's Fan Fiction
Mar 5 2009, 2:49 PM EST | Post edited: Mar 5 2009, 2:49 PM EST
Throws you right in the middle of the action from the start -- I approve. Your English writing is very good, particularly considering it is not your native language. Seriously, many of my old high school classmates would be hard-pressed to write as well, let alone better.

I loved the way you used Cam's eyes and involuntary crying to illustrate the strength of her emotion. Her powerful emotions granting her increased strength and resolve lends her an even more human feel. After all, emotion can drive humans to perfom feats that normally lie beyond their abilities.

Great stuff. Do you find this valuable?