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Koudijs
Koudijs
Too Little, Too much
Feb 5 2009, 3:27 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 5 2009, 3:27 PM EST
Hey everybody, yes even me has giving it a try. Fanfiction, it's a jameron story because well i like them and they are easy to write (i like to think so). Please tell me what you think and be nice :p. Do you find this valuable?    
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Pharazon
Pharazon
1. RE: Too Little, Too much
Feb 5 2009, 4:01 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 5 2009, 4:01 PM EST
I like it. I think the best part is seeing John struggle with how he feels and how he should be feeling.

Personally, I think it's a mite fast (John being nice and all), but I still like it. If you continue with the whole relationship thing, I'd be interested to see how that develops maybe so Cameron has a better understanding of what John really means. Thanks for the Jameron, by the way. Do you find this valuable?    

Shaty
2. RE: Too Little, Too much
Feb 5 2009, 4:18 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 5 2009, 4:18 PM EST
I like it but did Cameron kiss him because she felt it was what she should do or was it something else? I hope you continue. Do you find this valuable?