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kingsteve
kingsteve
KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 12 2009, 6:50 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 12 2009, 6:50 PM EST
Howdy! Well, someone suggested that I start a thread pertaining to my fanfics, so here it is! Anything anyone wants to discuss about them, just fire away!

I'm having some problems with the site, getting my fanfics on here, but they're on FanFiction.net as well (though I think pretty much everyone who's read my fics has done so on there anyway, so this might be a moot statement)

I've also got some ideas for other fics after Judgement's Dawn, including a sequel - which will be the first one I write.

So, any questions or comments, or general discussion (and hopefully no flaming) is welcome!
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Shaty
1. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 7:05 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 7:05 AM EST
Whens your next chapter coming out? Do you find this valuable?    
FrenchFanofTSCC
FrenchFanofTSCC
2. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 7:09 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 7:09 AM EST
i read Training ,its great story,keep workling so ! love it !! Do you find this valuable?    
JMHthe3rd
JMHthe3rd
3. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 8:42 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 8:42 AM EST
Up to chapter eight on Judgment's Dawn.

Derek is a real dick. I'd kill him after what he tried to do in ch.8.
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kingsteve
kingsteve
4. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 2:36 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 2:36 PM EST
I'm going to reply to all three messages on this forum at once, so bear with me.

Shaty; not sure exactly when Chapter 13 will be posted; I've been swamped at work and been working pretty much every day recently. I've got a 3 day weekend at the end of next week, so I'm aiming to have something posted then.

FrenchFanofTSCC: Glad you liked it; I had to take a shower after I wrote Training because killing Cameron left me feeling dirty. I've got another idea for a oneshot where Cameron sacrifices herself for John; it'll be bittersweet, but I can't bring myself to write it at the moment.

JMHthe3rd: Yeah, Derek's a real ass at the moment, and John was tempted to. Bearing in mind though, that Derek's lived through Judgement Day twice now, and also went through the shock of seeing John and Cameron having sex. Thats' gotta mess with his head pretty bad! In Liberation Day though, he's accepted Cameron - even if he still doesn't really like her - so there's a point where Derek will start to accept Cameron. It will happen, but I won't say when.
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Shaty
5. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 2:46 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 2:46 PM EST
Awesome ill stay tuned. And I understand what you said about not being able to write another story will Cameron dies. I guess its our love for Cameron but when she dies it always sucks. Do you find this valuable?    
kingsteve
kingsteve
6. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 3:23 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 3:23 PM EST
"Awesome ill stay tuned. And I understand what you said about not being able to write another story will Cameron dies. I guess its our love for Cameron but when she dies it always sucks."
Any oneshots I write where Cameron dies are meant to more show John's anguish at her death.

I've got other fics planned in the pipeline as well. There's a sequel to Judgement's Dawn, and also another, unrelated fic that will be called "Continuum," which hopefully should be pretty epic. But that won't be written until after I've finished Judgement's Dawn and the sequel. I only write one fic at a time because I don't want to end up losing focus on one in favour of another; which I know I would do.
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Shaty
7. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 4:20 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 4:20 PM EST
Haha im writing one and its hard enough to keep focused at time, i can't imagine multiple projects at one time. Do you find this valuable?    
kingsteve
kingsteve
8. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 4:29 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 4:29 PM EST
"Haha im writing one and its hard enough to keep focused at time, i can't imagine multiple projects at one time."
Well, on FanFiction.net, the writer Flatlander, who I speak with a lot, was writing several fics at once (The Path of the Saviour, I could have been more, Swordsman and the huntress, and a few others; and he kind of burnt out a bit and hasn't written anything in months.

Continuum should hopefully be a good one when I get round to it; it's about Cameron - who's spent 20 years with John and is his wife - gets sent back to protect his younger self again, to find the past has been drastically altered. But it'll be a while before I write that.
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Shaty
9. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 13 2009, 10:54 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 13 2009, 10:54 PM EST
Well I look forward to it, keep up the great writing! Do you find this valuable?    
The_Turtle
The_Turtle
10. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 14 2009, 12:43 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 14 2009, 12:43 AM EST
"Well, on FanFiction.net, the writer Flatlander, who I speak with a lot, was writing several fics at once (The Path of the Saviour, I could have been more, Swordsman and the huntress, and a few others; and he kind of burnt out a bit and hasn't written anything in months.

Continuum should hopefully be a good one when I get round to it; it's about Cameron - who's spent 20 years with John and is his wife - gets sent back to protect his younger self again, to find the past has been drastically altered. But it'll be a while before I write that."
Hell i got burn out reading more than one fic at a time.I´m glad you finnally made a thread dedicated to your fics.I don´t really have any suggestions since i don´t think you need them...Well just one thing..it´s not really a suggestion more a char i didn´t like you put...it´s..´´S´PÓILERS´ for the people who hasn´t read his fanfics.Like i was saying i didn´t like Cromartie...i want new chars...new deadly terminators but then again it´s my lowly turtle opinion.You have wrote one of the best Jameron fics i have read.So keep doing what you do man. heheh
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Brovane
Brovane
11. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 15 2009, 1:07 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 15 2009, 1:07 AM EST
I liked your fanfics especially Liberation Day. It was good especially bringing out the character interaction after all the years together.

One quibble on Judgment Dawn. While depressing knowing the world is going to end the next day. However the Cheyenne mountain complex is just to big a target to survive judgment day. Despite the fact that the facility is mothballed the Russians will have several missiles targeted at the facility. Basically Cheyenne mountain was designed in the early 1960's to resist first generation ICBM with CEP measured in miles. However newer generation of ICBM are much more accurate with CEP measured in 100's of yards which could knock out a facility like Cheyenne mountain. That is why the US has moved to Airborne nuclear command centers.

A much better location IMHO to lead the resistance from is Alaska. Rugged enough to be far away from Skynet forces during the initial attacks and rural enough to survive the nuclear attacks. Major cities and military facilities will be hit however there is numerous small towns that will escape attention and Alaska is extremely large which provides a lot of area to hide in. Also in the population in Alaskan you are more likely to find people with the survival skills necessary to survive a nuclear war.
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kingsteve
kingsteve
12. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 15 2009, 6:03 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 15 2009, 6:03 AM EST
"I liked your fanfics especially Liberation Day. It was good especially bringing out the character interaction after all the years together.

One quibble on Judgment Dawn. While depressing knowing the world is going to end the next day. However the Cheyenne mountain complex is just to big a target to survive judgment day. Despite the fact that the facility is mothballed the Russians will have several missiles targeted at the facility. Basically Cheyenne mountain was designed in the early 1960's to resist first generation ICBM with CEP measured in miles. However newer generation of ICBM are much more accurate with CEP measured in 100's of yards which could knock out a facility like Cheyenne mountain. That is why the US has moved to Airborne nuclear command centers.

A much better location IMHO to lead the resistance from is Alaska. Rugged enough to be far away from Skynet forces during the initial attacks and rural enough to survive the nuclear attacks. Major cities and military facilities will be hit however there is numerous small towns that will escape attention and Alaska is extremely large which provides a lot of area to hide in. Also in the population in Alaskan you are more likely to find people with the survival skills necessary to survive a nuclear war. "
That's true, although Cheyenne could likely survive anything but a direct hit. But also, they'd survive in Alaska but they'd be fairly isolated and have a harder time taking the fight back to Skynet. In terms of survival, Alaska would be a better option, but putting them in Colorado means they're in a better position - geographically, and in terms of surviving military personnel - to fight back.

I chose Cheyenne Mountain for a number of reasons: firstly that because it's in Colorado, there's a lot of military bases around and the survivors have linked together under John to form the core of the resistance. Also, I thought it a little ironic because in T1 Kyle Reese tells Silberman that Skynet was house in NORAD - which is in Cheyenne Mountain. And also, Colorado's a bit more practical for the purposes of my story - in terms of the mission to Nevada.

Anyway, I hope that you enjoy the story and what I've got planned. I won't reveal much, but I'll say one thing; things are going to get worse for everyone!
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kingsteve
kingsteve
13. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 15 2009, 6:43 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 15 2009, 6:43 AM EST
Cheers for the input though, Brovane. I Appreciate it. Do you find this valuable?    
TK-MR
TK-MR
14. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 24 2009, 1:05 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 24 2009, 1:05 AM EST
kingsteve. oh man, i'm still waiting for the next chapter of Judgement's Dawn. ^^
anyway take your time.
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kingsteve
kingsteve
15. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 24 2009, 6:21 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 24 2009, 6:21 PM EST
"kingsteve. oh man, i'm still waiting for the next chapter of Judgement's Dawn. ^^
anyway take your time."
Hopefully I'll be able to post chapter 13 this weekend. I'm also trying to create a petition to send to FOX and WB to help keep the show alive (hint; sign it please) and have been circulating email addresses for FOX and WB, and bugging people to write them.

There's likely to be 17 chapters of Judgement's Dawn in total; that's how I've got it planned out in rough notes, anyway. But there's also going to be a sequel to it, the name of which I shall not divulge until the final chapter of Judgement's Dawn. To say anything about the sequel now would give a BIG spoiler away.

Things are going to really move along quickly in the next few chapters though; it won't be an easy time for John and Cameron.
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Shaty
16. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 24 2009, 7:22 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 24 2009, 7:22 PM EST
I look forward to reading it this weekend than, it sucks that people can't accept Cameron especially after everything she has done for them. Also where is this petition I will sign it! Do you find this valuable?    
Brovane
Brovane
17. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 24 2009, 10:55 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 24 2009, 10:55 PM EST
"That's true, although Cheyenne could likely survive anything but a direct hit. But also, they'd survive in Alaska but they'd be fairly isolated and have a harder time taking the fight back to Skynet. In terms of survival, Alaska would be a better option, but putting them in Colorado means they're in a better position - geographically, and in terms of surviving military personnel - to fight back.

I chose Cheyenne Mountain for a number of reasons: firstly that because it's in Colorado, there's a lot of military bases around and the survivors have linked together under John to form the core of the resistance. Also, I thought it a little ironic because in T1 Kyle Reese tells Silberman that Skynet was house in NORAD - which is in Cheyenne Mountain. And also, Colorado's a bit more practical for the purposes of my story - in terms of the mission to Nevada.

Anyway, I hope that you enjoy the story and what I've got planned. I won't reveal much, but I'll say one thing; things are going to get worse for everyone!"
Unfortunately the accuracy of the current generation of nuclear weapons is just about going to guarantee a direct hit on Cheyenne mountain. Believe it our not the facility is not built strong enough to survive a direct hit from a nuclear weapon. However if that is how you are writing you story go for it.

The reason that I suggested Alaska is that the most practical explanation of events leading up to judgment day and after judgment day I have seen where laid out in the Terminator book "The Future War" by S.M Sterling. This book has the Connors taking refugee in Alaska in the years leading up to judgment day and overall has a very well laid out logic reasons for why. The initial years after judgment day are going to be about building a base of operations and building a network to help carry the fight to Skynet. Basically the Connors are going to need to run a Guerrilla war against Skynet. A long running Guerrilla war that will stretch into decades.

I look forward to reading more of you story.
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TK-MR
TK-MR
18. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 25 2009, 8:44 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 25 2009, 8:44 AM EST
Hah, so much complicate :D put up a story then a prequel for it then one more one between the two. You're making me hungry for your work. ^^
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kingsteve
kingsteve
19. RE: KingSteve Fanfiction
Feb 25 2009, 1:56 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 25 2009, 1:56 PM EST
"Hah, so much complicate :D put up a story then a prequel for it then one more one between the two. You're making me hungry for your work. ^^
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Thank you; I'm glad to hear it. And it should be up this weekend, with luck.

When I wrote Liberation Day I hadn't had the idea for Judgement's Dawn; that came about a week or so after I finished it. And the "threequel" idea came about a month after chapter one of Judgement's Dawn. Though as far as I've planned; it's just the three. Don't want to overdo the "Liberation Day" verse.

Got other ideas as well though, which I'll do afterwards.
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