Location: Terminator: Rebirth

Discussion: Terminator: RebirthReported This is a featured thread

Category: Discussion Forum / General Discussion
Showing 41 - 60 of 128  |  Show  posts at a time
Previous | 1 2 3 4 5 | Next > Last
Casobs2
Casobs2
40. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:24 AM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2009, 1:24 AM EDT
"How could you update it now- I'm was about to goto sleep. Ah well I'll read it in the morning... I was about to stay up and read it, but It wouldn't make any sense right now I'm way to tired. lol

"
I didnt say I was going to update it now

lol

it will be update within the next day of two, I made mistake and said 26, when I meant 27, haha Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
41. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:26 AM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2009, 1:26 AM EDT
"I didnt say I was going to update it now

lol

it will be update within the next day of two, I made mistake and said 26, when I meant 27, haha"
I didn't see what you said until I posted- I saw the link and thought you updated already. :)
Good Night. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
42. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:34 AM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2009, 1:34 AM EDT
Shameless bump for new page:

CHAPTER 5

MAY 27

BE THERE Do you find this valuable?    
DannyConnor
DannyConnor
43. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 1:24 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 1:24 PM EDT
Still waiting for 27th may chapter 5 -)

The accessable link for chapter 5 atm, appears to be linking to chapter 4.

Amazing story btw m8. Thrilled work. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
44. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 8:18 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 8:19 PM EDT
CHAPTER 5 OF TERMINATOR: REBIRTH

8:30 PM

BE THERE

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+5%3A+Valley+of+the+Shadow+of+Death Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
45. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 8:34 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 8:34 PM EDT
CHAPTER 5: VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH

STARTS NOW

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+5%3A+Valley+of+the+Shadow+of+Death Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
46. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 10:43 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 10:43 PM EDT
"CHAPTER 5: VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH

STARTS NOW

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+5%3A+Valley+of+the+Shadow+of+Death"
Shameless bump... I wonder if anyone feels shame when doing this... Do you find this valuable?    
Enigma6482
Enigma6482
47. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 10:46 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 10:46 PM EDT
Aaaaccckkk!!! Cliffhanger ending!!! NOOOOO!!! Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
48. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 10:53 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 10:53 PM EDT
"Aaaaccckkk!!! Cliffhanger ending!!! NOOOOO!!!"
HAHA, so you liked it eh???

makes you really want more!

What did you think? Was it too long? Do you find this valuable?    
Enigma6482
Enigma6482
49. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 10:59 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 10:59 PM EDT
No it was nice sitting down and reading a big chunk of the story. I was alittle lost in the beginning b/c I wasn't sure if I had forgotten something about a "factory" but by the end I was screaming , "No wait Alison!!!" I love Cameron but I still feel for poor Alison. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
50. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 11:04 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 11:04 PM EDT
"No it was nice sitting down and reading a big chunk of the story. I was alittle lost in the beginning b/c I wasn't sure if I had forgotten something about a "factory" but by the end I was screaming , "No wait Alison!!!" I love Cameron but I still feel for poor Alison. "
you'll see... hehehehe Do you find this valuable?    
thecrusadingknight
thecrusadingknight
51. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 27 2009, 11:40 PM EDT | Post edited: May 27 2009, 11:40 PM EDT
My post for this on another thread. In case Casobs didn't see it.

SPOILER ALERT

Whoa, so in a twist Cameron, the cyborg who once killed Allison in another timeline, in this new timeline she saves Allison.

Gotta imagine Allison's reaction to hearing this "man" say "I'm Cameron." She's gotta be like "WTF?" I kinda think that at this point, Cameron should have had a new endo body. Maybe she will next chapter? Though if Cameron was in a new endo body when John saw her, it wouldn't have the same effect. You've got John seeing JH before he gets knocked out, nice use of irony. Not digging the fact that Allison hears John Henry say "I'm Cameron," I think that makes it too weird. But I definitely look forward to the next chapter.

Great work with John and Allison. When Allison charged forward, I would have liked to have him cry out Cameron's name by accident or somehow have a flashback to something that happened to her.

Nice touch with making the font really small to show how quiet John sounded amidst all the noise.

Love the way that it's through Allison that John comes to terms with his feelings for Cameron. A good conversation between the two of them, as John tries to describe her without mentioning that she was a cyborg.

As I said before in my emails, a strong chapter. Keep up the good work.
 Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
52. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 11:33 AM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 11:33 AM EDT
"My post for this on another thread. In case Casobs didn't see it.

SPOILER ALERT

Whoa, so in a twist Cameron, the cyborg who once killed Allison in another timeline, in this new timeline she saves Allison.

Gotta imagine Allison's reaction to hearing this "man" say "I'm Cameron." She's gotta be like "WTF?" I kinda think that at this point, Cameron should have had a new endo body. Maybe she will next chapter? Though if Cameron was in a new endo body when John saw her, it wouldn't have the same effect. You've got John seeing JH before he gets knocked out, nice use of irony. Not digging the fact that Allison hears John Henry say "I'm Cameron," I think that makes it too weird. But I definitely look forward to the next chapter.

Great work with John and Allison. When Allison charged forward, I would have liked to have him cry out Cameron's name by accident or somehow have a flashback to something that happened to her.

Nice touch with making the font really small to show how quiet John sounded amidst all the noise.

Love the way that it's through Allison that John comes to terms with his feelings for Cameron. A good conversation between the two of them, as John tries to describe her without mentioning that she was a cyborg.

As I said before in my emails, a strong chapter. Keep up the good work.
"
No worries, I say it, and thanks for the ideas. Im not adverse to negative criticism, but I definately see what you mean by that. I'll keep that in mind in future chapters!

Im glad you liked the chapter as a whole, with so much detail its easy to have something slip, so Im lucky to have you guys!!!! Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
53. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 12:32 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 12:32 PM EDT
That wasn't to bad of a chapter. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
54. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:07 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:07 PM EDT
"That wasn't to bad of a chapter."
glad you thought so... lol Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
55. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:11 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:11 PM EDT
"glad you thought so... lol"
lol- np. :) Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
56. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:14 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:14 PM EDT
"lol- np. :)"
any critique? Its a long chapter, so I know there may be some weaker parts than others... Do you find this valuable?    
Blazar
Blazar
57. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:14 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:14 PM EDT
Awesome chapter!

It was really long, but still really good and explain many things.

All John and Allison moment were good. It was great way to make Allison to help John with his feelings for Cameron. It was even better that it happen twice. After that first time John had some time to think about it (At least in sub-conscious level). Then second time make John understand it, not necessary completely accept it, but still. I also liked that how John and Allison worked together in battle. It was short, but they still fight well together.

Then Allison's fate was interesting. I liked the way how Allison "die" (in eyes of John). I could see that John might blame himself for Allison's death or at least for that he couldn't save her. Then the way how Allison meets JH/Cameron was interesting. When Allison hears that "I'm Cameron", I can believe that she will be really surprised. Then, like Knight said, it's sounds little weird, but still it's good and plausible. Cameron controls John Henry's body, so it's not surprise if she says it.

Then John in chapter 5. It was great to see John was determined to do that suggest, which Derek gave him. It was nearly suicide mission, but still John does it. Then it was good that John was scared and panicked during that first encounter with T-800. That was actually his first "alone fight" ever. Then John showed good tactician skills and thinking, when he make that trap to T-800. Still it was good to see that John noticed that he might have done things better (that metal junk on the ground, which he could have use. That would have been much easier) :)

Really interesting chapter and I just can't wait update. Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
58. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:17 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:17 PM EDT
"any critique? Its a long chapter, so I know there may be some weaker parts than others..."
I had no problems with it expect that I had to read the first four chapters because I forgot about what happened this story. I've been reading a few of these and it's easy to get them confused. lol Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
59. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 28 2009, 3:23 PM EDT | Post edited: May 28 2009, 3:23 PM EDT
"I had no problems with it expect that I had to read the first four chapters because I forgot about what happened this story. I've been reading a few of these and it's easy to get them confused. lol"
I can understand. It would be hard to enter this story at this specific moment. And I think it is designed to read almost right after each other, so yea, I can see how it might be a bit confusing because of that. Sorry! I'll try to soften that a bit.

@Blazer: Im glad you liked it!!! I figured that the "I'm Cameron" would have to make sense considering that she is in control, but I understand the weirdness. At the same time, she is in control, JH is only a part of her mind now. No one in this future, except for Keith and John, know about John Henry (Cameron never even said her name was JH to Kieth, just that JH says hi). I may have fix for that in the next chapter, so in the end, I think it will make sense! Do you find this valuable?    
Previous | 1 2 3 4 5 | Next > Last

Related Content

  (what's this?Related ContentThanks to keyword tags, links to related pages and threads are added to the bottom of your pages. Up to 15 links are shown, determined by matching tags and by how recently the content was updated; keeping the most current at the top. Share your feedback on Wetpaint Central.)
The OFFICIAL JAMERON THREAD Part II NEVER-ENDING TSCC WORD GAME Why John sent Cameron back in time.
What would it be like to be Cameron? Now with improved Fanfic Index Mike70056 Fan Fiction Page The Shots Heard Round The World
The Freaking Big Push has launched! THIS IS YOUR CALL TO ARMS! Terminator Fan Fictions Cameron
So Let Us Not Talk Falsely Now Subtle Jameron fanfic Cameron question...