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Enigma6482
Enigma6482
60. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 2 2009, 6:00 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2009, 6:00 PM EDT
Oooohhhhh, nice pic for the "I'm not your enemy" Chapter...Makes me sad to look at it though. But I REALLY wanna see where it goes. Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
61. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 2 2009, 6:06 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2009, 6:06 PM EDT
That chapter six image of Alison is so sad. Do you find this valuable?    
t5000
t5000
62. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 2 2009, 10:43 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2009, 10:43 PM EDT
"Very nicely done, Casobs. Nice way with words. Good description. And a good subtle reveal about the characters we see. Instead of saying John Connor drives down, we guess at who it is until someone calls it that. And describing Catherine Weaver by her red hair, also works well.
I read part of ch 2 , and it looked good so will read the others , so no comments yet.

Interesting that you are working backwards from John finding Cameron, to the ending of Born to Run.

Only things that I think need improving is your use of space. When you get to another paragraph, I would put an extra space between the next line, it makes it easier to read. Particularly it would help when you go into the flashback, to help make it clear that we are jumping back in time. Also, be careful with tense confusion. In the beginning you switch between past and present tense.

The whole thing ran as a good teaser for me leaving me to want more. Keep it up :)
"
you should edit your first post and put a link to the main page where all the chapters are listed. I had to click on the ch 2 link and go from there to find main page since your post is first the link should go there too.
here is the link to the main page :
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Terminator%3A+Rebirth
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Casobs2
Casobs2
63. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 2 2009, 11:56 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 2 2009, 11:56 PM EDT
"you should edit your first post and put a link to the main page where all the chapters are listed. I had to click on the ch 2 link and go from there to find main page since your post is first the link should go there too.
here is the link to the main page :
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Terminator%3A+Rebirth
"
thanks for reposting the main page... hope you read it...
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t5000
t5000
64. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 3 2009, 6:51 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 3 2009, 6:51 AM EDT
"thanks for reposting the main page... hope you read it..."
I just read all 5 chapters, and it is pretty good, you gave more about allison than the other fanfics I have read. it seems all of them have john not being interested in allison , and being obseesed with cameron. I would think that with her looking just like cam there would have to be a attraction to her.
so I like what you have dne with allison, and at frst I thought you killed her !!
and I was no dont do that, but then JH/cam saves her so good deal.
I am sort of waiting for john to show these people how to organize and fight, hope that happens.
A good story though, and this is what I thought the first part of S-3 might be like if show had been renewed.
looking forward to chapter 6
I too am reading several other fanfics, and it is hard to keep them seperate in my head
also I liked the long chapter all about one thing , not jumping back and forth from past to future.
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Casobs2
Casobs2
65. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 4 2009, 7:05 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 7:05 PM EDT
"I just read all 5 chapters, and it is pretty good, you gave more about allison than the other fanfics I have read. it seems all of them have john not being interested in allison , and being obseesed with cameron. I would think that with her looking just like cam there would have to be a attraction to her.
so I like what you have dne with allison, and at frst I thought you killed her !!
and I was no dont do that, but then JH/cam saves her so good deal.
I am sort of waiting for john to show these people how to organize and fight, hope that happens.
A good story though, and this is what I thought the first part of S-3 might be like if show had been renewed.
looking forward to chapter 6
I too am reading several other fanfics, and it is hard to keep them seperate in my head
also I liked the long chapter all about one thing , not jumping back and forth from past to future."
glad you liked it! Ill keep your comments in mind

Im drafting chapter 6, should be a few days!
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Myrrdin
Myrrdin
66. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 4 2009, 7:33 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 4 2009, 7:33 PM EDT
Awesome!

I finished the new poster for your fan fic by the way :)
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Enigma6482
Enigma6482
67. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 10 2009, 10:10 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 10 2009, 10:10 AM EDT
Paces back and forth waiting for chapter 6...
lol
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Rikscha
Rikscha
68. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 10 2009, 10:22 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 10 2009, 10:22 AM EDT
"Paces back and forth waiting for chapter 6...
lol"
I feel exactly the same :D
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Enigma6482
Enigma6482
69. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 11 2009, 7:01 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 11 2009, 7:01 PM EDT
When can we expect the next chapter? 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
70. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 12 2009, 12:54 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2009, 12:54 AM EDT
"When can we expect the next chapter?"
sorry for the looooooong wait, the past week has been HELL!!! but I plan to update by this week. Again, I apologize to my fans for the long wait!
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kaotic
71. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 12 2009, 1:01 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2009, 1:01 AM EDT
"sorry for the looooooong wait, the past week has been HELL!!! but I plan to update by this week. Again, I apologize to my fans for the long wait!"
Can't wait Casobs, and welcome back.
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Casobs2
Casobs2
72. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 12 2009, 1:40 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 12 2009, 1:40 AM EDT
"Can't wait Casobs, and welcome back."
thanks... good to be back!
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Enigma6482
Enigma6482
73. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jun 17 2009, 10:07 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 17 2009, 10:07 PM EDT
Any word yet? Do you find this valuable?    
toasty2
toasty2
74. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jul 4 2009, 2:12 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 4 2009, 2:12 AM EDT
Bump. This is a good fic. Do you find this valuable?    
Enigma6482
Enigma6482
75. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jul 5 2009, 8:58 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 5 2009, 8:58 PM EDT
Wish he'd post another chapter though...I hope this isn't a fan fic that fades away.... Do you find this valuable?    

kaotic
76. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jul 5 2009, 9:22 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 5 2009, 9:22 PM EDT
"Wish he'd post another chapter though...I hope this isn't a fan fic that fades away...."
Agreed.
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thecrusadingknight
thecrusadingknight
77. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
Jul 5 2009, 9:39 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 5 2009, 9:39 PM EDT
Last I heard he was busy with work. Hopefully he'll come back and continue with what he started. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
78. I AM BACK!
Jul 8 2009, 2:11 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 8 2009, 2:11 AM EDT
I REALLY APOLOGIZE FOR BEING ABSENT

As Knight has said, I have been extremely busy... if you were in my shoes, you would be going crazy too.

But this fic will NOT fade. Chapter 6 rough draft is finished and off to the editors! I hope to post in a few days!

Again, I apologize, but I am very thankful to have fans like you!
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kaotic
79. RE: I AM BACK!
Jul 8 2009, 2:13 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 8 2009, 2:13 AM EDT
"I REALLY APOLOGIZE FOR BEING ABSENT

As Knight has said, I have been extremely busy... if you were in my shoes, you would be going crazy too.

But this fic will NOT fade. Chapter 6 rough draft is finished and off to the editors! I hope to post in a few days!

Again, I apologize, but I am very thankful to have fans like you!"
I'm just glad the story is going to be continued, Now I should probably read the thing again so I will have a clue what's going on when chapter 6 is released. lol it's been a while since I've read it.
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