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thecrusadingknight |
20. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 10:57 PM EDT
Kudos for you for tackling such a difficult topic. The hardest thing in writing a Season 3 fan fic, in my opinion, is explaining what the heck happened when John Henry took Cameron's chip. At first I didn't think I was going to like the way you did it when Cam said of JH "He's in here." At first I thought that they were still both sharing Cameron's chip, but then I thought it was cool how JH eventually dissolved. And it does well for Cameron's evolution. I personally don't think that she can ever completely get rid of her "terminate John Connor protocol," but I like how you described it and explained how it worked.I also like the conversation between John and Cameron where she says "I need you" and John doesn't quite know what she meant by that. I'm eager to find out. Very well done. Keep it coming! Do you find this valuable? |
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Blazar |
21. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 10:58 PM EDT
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Chapter 3 was magnifisent.This is really interesting story. :) Edit: Actually I'm also curious what that "I need you" means. Do you find this valuable? |
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Casobs2 |
22. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 11:03 PM EDT
"Kudos for you for tackling such a difficult topic. The hardest thing in writing a Season 3 fan fic, in my opinion, is explaining what the heck happened when John Henry took Cameron's chip. At first I didn't think I was going to like the way you did it when Cam said of JH "He's in here." At first I thought that they were still both sharing Cameron's chip, but then I thought it was cool how JH eventually dissolved. And it does well for Cameron's evolution. I personally don't think that she can ever completely get rid of her "terminate John Connor protocol," but I like how you described it and explained how it worked.Thanks man, really appreciate it! And actually that is exactly I was looking for, for the reader to think that at first they share the chip. But then throw a curve. I think dealing with that evolution is important to realize where Cameron went after she left. And I understand what you mean about the terminate JC protocol, but I decided that I needed to do that. And the I need you conversation... hehehehehehehehe Do you find this valuable? |
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john121984 |
23. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 12:44 AM EDT
Chapter 3 was great.
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Casobs2 |
24. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 12:54 AM EDT
"Chapter 3 was great."Thanks man, I appreciate it a lot! The more encouragement, the more motivated I get! Do you find this valuable? |
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Casobs2 |
25. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 11:21 AM EDT
Thanks again for all the support guys!!!!
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Casobs2 |
26. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 12:11 AM EDT
Hey guys, just to let you know, Ive updated my fanfiction with Chapter 4: Into the Firehttp://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+4%3A+Into+the+Fire Sorry for the long wait, enjoy! 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Casobs2 |
27. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 9:57 AM EDT
I know this is from star trek, but play in the background, this should be our theme song for the ultimate victory of TSCC!!!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgkMGGyacSg this could also be my fanfic theme song! hehe Do you find this valuable? |
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Casobs2 |
28. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:27 PM EDT
In light of the cancellation of Terminator. I invite everyone to read, comment, and discuss my fanfiction. This is what could have been...
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Spawn77 |
29. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:30 PM EDT
NEED CH 5!!!! fanfics are all I have left in life...
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Casobs2 |
30. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:32 PM EDT
"NEED CH 5!!!! fanfics are all I have left in life..."wow, that was quick! lol, dont worry, you'll get chapter 5 soon enough! Do you find this valuable? |
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Spawn77 |
31. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:35 PM EDT
yeah! lol. I've read your story on fanfiction.net. I love it so far, Camerons POV was done really well.
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Casobs2 |
32. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:36 PM EDT
"yeah! lol. I've read your story on fanfiction.net. I love it so far, Camerons POV was done really well. "you think so, I some people said it might have been a little confusing, so I mentioned it in the A/N Do you find this valuable? |
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Spawn77 |
33. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:41 PM EDT
"you think so, I some people said it might have been a little confusing, so I mentioned it in the A/N"I had no trouble following it. Do you find this valuable? |
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Casobs2 |
34. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:45 PM EDT
"I had no trouble following it."awesome, that is good to hear, I was little bit worried that my loyal readers might not follow it. I hope that the cliffhanger was good, as well as Cameron's emotional development. I want to make it slow to allow for the greatest plot development! Do you find this valuable? |
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serginio |
35. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:56 PM EDT
Terminator:Sarah Strike's Back!
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Casobs2 |
36. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 3:01 PM EDT
"Terminator:Sarah Strike's Back!"dont worry... sarah does make it into the story... Do you find this valuable? |
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Casobs2 |
37. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 8:46 PM EDT
So Im guessing people want updates to their fan fiction... any idea that you would like to see, since it now all out in the open?
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Casobs2 |
38. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:21 AM EDT
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CHAPTER 5MAY 27 BE THERE Do you find this valuable? |
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39. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:23 AM EDT
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"CHAPTER 5How could you update it now- I'm was about to goto sleep. Ah well I'll read it in the morning... I was about to stay up and read it, but It wouldn't make any sense right now I'm way to tired. lol edit chapter five doesn't even link to anything yet... I feel so dumb- sleep will do that to a person. Do you find this valuable? |