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thecrusadingknight
thecrusadingknight
20. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 10:57 PM EDT | Post edited: May 10 2009, 10:57 PM EDT
Kudos for you for tackling such a difficult topic. The hardest thing in writing a Season 3 fan fic, in my opinion, is explaining what the heck happened when John Henry took Cameron's chip. At first I didn't think I was going to like the way you did it when Cam said of JH "He's in here." At first I thought that they were still both sharing Cameron's chip, but then I thought it was cool how JH eventually dissolved. And it does well for Cameron's evolution. I personally don't think that she can ever completely get rid of her "terminate John Connor protocol," but I like how you described it and explained how it worked.

I also like the conversation between John and Cameron where she says "I need you" and John doesn't quite know what she meant by that. I'm eager to find out.

Very well done. Keep it coming!
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Blazar
Blazar
21. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 10:58 PM EDT | Post edited: May 10 2009, 11:15 PM EDT
Chapter 3 was magnifisent.
This is really interesting story. :)

Edit: Actually I'm also curious what that "I need you" means.
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Casobs2
Casobs2
22. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 10 2009, 11:03 PM EDT | Post edited: May 10 2009, 11:03 PM EDT
"Kudos for you for tackling such a difficult topic. The hardest thing in writing a Season 3 fan fic, in my opinion, is explaining what the heck happened when John Henry took Cameron's chip. At first I didn't think I was going to like the way you did it when Cam said of JH "He's in here." At first I thought that they were still both sharing Cameron's chip, but then I thought it was cool how JH eventually dissolved. And it does well for Cameron's evolution. I personally don't think that she can ever completely get rid of her "terminate John Connor protocol," but I like how you described it and explained how it worked.

I also like the conversation between John and Cameron where she says "I need you" and John doesn't quite know what she meant by that. I'm eager to find out.

Very well done. Keep it coming!"
Thanks man, really appreciate it! And actually that is exactly I was looking for, for the reader to think that at first they share the chip. But then throw a curve. I think dealing with that evolution is important to realize where Cameron went after she left. And I understand what you mean about the terminate JC protocol, but I decided that I needed to do that.

And the I need you conversation... hehehehehehehehe
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john121984
john121984
23. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 12:44 AM EDT | Post edited: May 11 2009, 12:44 AM EDT
Chapter 3 was great. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
24. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 12:54 AM EDT | Post edited: May 11 2009, 12:54 AM EDT
"Chapter 3 was great."
Thanks man, I appreciate it a lot! The more encouragement, the more motivated I get!
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Casobs2
Casobs2
25. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 11 2009, 11:21 AM EDT | Post edited: May 11 2009, 11:21 AM EDT
Thanks again for all the support guys!!!! Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
26. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 12:11 AM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 12:11 AM EDT
Hey guys, just to let you know, Ive updated my fanfiction with Chapter 4: Into the Fire

http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+4%3A+Into+the+Fire

Sorry for the long wait, enjoy!
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Casobs2
Casobs2
27. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 9:57 AM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 9:57 AM EDT
I know this is from star trek, but play in the background, this should be our theme song for the ultimate victory of TSCC!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgkMGGyacSg

this could also be my fanfic theme song! hehe
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Casobs2
Casobs2
28. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:27 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:27 PM EDT
In light of the cancellation of Terminator. I invite everyone to read, comment, and discuss my fanfiction. This is what could have been... Do you find this valuable?    
Spawn77
Spawn77
29. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:30 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:30 PM EDT
NEED CH 5!!!! fanfics are all I have left in life... Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
30. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:32 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:32 PM EDT
"NEED CH 5!!!! fanfics are all I have left in life..."
wow, that was quick! lol, dont worry, you'll get chapter 5 soon enough!
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Spawn77
Spawn77
31. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:35 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:35 PM EDT
yeah! lol. I've read your story on fanfiction.net. I love it so far, Camerons POV was done really well. Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
32. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:36 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:36 PM EDT
"yeah! lol. I've read your story on fanfiction.net. I love it so far, Camerons POV was done really well. "
you think so, I some people said it might have been a little confusing, so I mentioned it in the A/N
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Spawn77
Spawn77
33. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:41 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:41 PM EDT
"you think so, I some people said it might have been a little confusing, so I mentioned it in the A/N"
I had no trouble following it.
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Casobs2
Casobs2
34. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:45 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:45 PM EDT
"I had no trouble following it."
awesome, that is good to hear, I was little bit worried that my loyal readers might not follow it. I hope that the cliffhanger was good, as well as Cameron's emotional development. I want to make it slow to allow for the greatest plot development!
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serginio
35. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 2:56 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 2:56 PM EDT
Terminator:Sarah Strike's Back! Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
36. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 3:01 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 3:01 PM EDT
"Terminator:Sarah Strike's Back!"
dont worry... sarah does make it into the story...
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Casobs2
Casobs2
37. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 18 2009, 8:46 PM EDT | Post edited: May 18 2009, 8:46 PM EDT
So Im guessing people want updates to their fan fiction... any idea that you would like to see, since it now all out in the open? Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
38. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:21 AM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2009, 1:23 AM EDT
CHAPTER 5

MAY 27

BE THERE
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kaotic
39. RE: Terminator: Rebirth
May 26 2009, 1:23 AM EDT | Post edited: May 26 2009, 1:25 AM EDT
"CHAPTER 5

MAY 26

BE THERE"
How could you update it now- I'm was about to goto sleep. Ah well I'll read it in the morning... I was about to stay up and read it, but It wouldn't make any sense right now I'm way to tired. lol

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chapter five doesn't even link to anything yet... I feel so dumb- sleep will do that to a person.
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