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Orsino |
160. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 20 2009, 8:23 PM EDT
"Middle of next week, great then it becomes an early birthday present for me."Happy Birthday Do you find this valuable? |
Enigma6482 |
161. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 20 2009, 9:41 PM EDT
"Don't OD!Feels faint upon seeing the news Do you find this valuable? |
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Enigma6482 |
162. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 20 2009, 10:41 PM EDT
:-o :-0 :-o :-0That was a great chapter. The love scene between John and Cameron was AWSOME. I wasn't quite sure it could be done that way, that well but you really pulled it off. I think I have an idea of where you're taking this; but I'm not 100% sure. Very good Chapter. Do you find this valuable? |
Mike70056 |
163. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 20 2009, 10:47 PM EDT
"Happy Birthday"Nice job. =) Do you find this valuable? |
Ban_D |
164. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 21 2009, 3:47 AM EDT
Great chapter again!Nice idea with the kids taking down the trucks - actually i was thinking first they'll blow with explosives or so. This is way more funny and original to take SkyNet down. Maybe some 'JC was here' tag could add more fun to that once taking down a SkyNet factory :-D Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
165. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 21 2009, 6:36 AM EDT
Orsino, that was another fantastic chapter; you're a brilliant writer.
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Jim23 |
166. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 21 2009, 3:07 PM EDT
Thank you Orsino that chapter made a great birthday present. You never fail to make the Jameron moments awesome. I salute you.
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bryan011 |
167. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 21 2009, 3:53 PM EDT
I liked that, it was great. The kids taking down the trucks was a nice twist. I was expecting them to torch the place. Sugar in the gas tanks and vandalism was something out of left field, nice.
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Belial69699 |
168. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Oct 25 2009, 5:44 PM EDT
I just finally got around to reading it, been so busy lately. I was really pleased with this chapter. I especially liked the scene where they get off the plane and Sarah gave John a hug then invited Cameron into her embrace. Wish we had a scene like that in the show but I guess it wasn't the time for it. Great chapter, definitely looking forward to the next one!
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Jim23 |
169. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 9 2009, 6:05 PM EST
Bump, when do you think 11 will be up.
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Orsino |
170. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 9 2009, 8:06 PM EST
"Bump, when do you think 11 will be up."Mea culpa. I am sorry for the delay but for reasons that will become apparent, I have found this to be a very difficult chapter to write. I am aiming for next week but I do not want to make a promise that I may not be able to keep. Do you find this valuable? |
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Enigma6482 |
171. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 9 2009, 9:36 PM EST
"Mea culpa. I am sorry for the delay but for reasons that will become apparent, I have found this to be a very difficult chapter to write. I am aiming for next week but I do not want to make a promise that I may not be able to keep."Twitches.... Is this the last chapter? Do you find this valuable? |
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Ban_D |
172. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 10 2009, 4:23 AM EST
'Is this the last chapter?'I hope not ... Do you find this valuable? |
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Orsino |
173. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 10 2009, 4:50 PM EST
"'Is this the last chapter?'I appreciate the sentiment. My original outline of the story envisioned ten chapters. As the narrative developed the scope of the story expanded somewhat more than I expected.As of now I believe that chapter eleven will be the last full length installment although there will also be a concluding epilogue. I am unsure whether I will post them together or separately. Do you find this valuable? |
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Jim23 |
174. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 10 2009, 5:05 PM EST
"I appreciate the sentiment. My original outline of the story envisioned ten chapters. As the narrative developed the scope of the story expanded somewhat more than I expected.As of now I believe that chapter eleven will be the last full length installment although there will also be a concluding epilogue. I am unsure whether I will post them together or separately."Aw it's always sad to see a great story end but every story has to end. Well I'll keep my eyes open for it. Do you find this valuable? |
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Enigma6482 |
175. RE: New Orsino Story is Finally Here!
Nov 10 2009, 5:12 PM EST
"I appreciate the sentiment. My original outline of the story envisioned ten chapters. As the narrative developed the scope of the story expanded somewhat more than I expected.As of now I believe that chapter eleven will be the last full length installment although there will also be a concluding epilogue. I am unsure whether I will post them together or separately."Now I'm really nervous as to what is going to happen...lol Do you find this valuable? |
