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PyroDude |
20. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 24 2009, 3:29 PM EDT
""Congratulations man...120 seconds."What's he supposed to do for those two minutes? Maybe lay back and smoke a cigar or something? Talk about awkward..... Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
21. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 24 2009, 3:36 PM EDT
Yeah I was thinking the exact same thing.
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ElusiveSanity |
22. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 24 2009, 11:05 PM EDT
"What's he supposed to do for those two minutes? Maybe lay back and smoke a cigar or something? Talk about awkward....."HAHA.... yeah... or freak out that you've killed your girlfriend. It's not like it's going to happen every time (at least, for me personally mind blowing, earth shattering, 120 second reboot sex happening every time is just a dream). Plus she's still learning to handle it all, remember? BTW, sorry for fooling everyone into thinking this was going to be a 'subtle' jameron fic... I'd have mentioned earlier but I just created an account today. I was just lurking around one day looking for new stuff to read and I was like, "hey, that's my story they're talkin 'bout!" Do you find this valuable? |
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PyroDude |
23. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 24 2009, 11:20 PM EDT
"HAHA.... yeah... or freak out that you've killed your girlfriend. It's not like it's going to happen every time (at least, for me personally mind blowing, earth shattering, 120 second reboot sex happening every time is just a dream). Plus she's still learning to handle it all, remember?Yeah, but she could always fake it. ;) It's a great, funny story. Hopefully the next part will be up soon... eh? eh? ;) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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ElusiveSanity |
24. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 1:12 AM EDT
Lol... she'd be a great faker too... Update soon. Not tonight though. Probably tomorrow night. I actually had to do all the homework I've been putting off this week. It's half done, just on pause. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Timeloop |
25. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 1:53 AM EDT
The best line is "Kill me.. please."
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NordWest |
26. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 2:49 AM EDT
Ok the story is absurd but I have never laughted so hard while reading fanfiction and "subtle" has got a new meaning.Also the character constellation is a problem. In various s3 fanfictions JH and Weaver lurk around John but they together with the Connor crew is a bit boring. There is no suspicion and John should not have 3 terminators as allys. 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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ElusiveSanity |
27. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 3:00 AM EDT
"Ok the story is absurd but I have never laughted so hard while reading fanfiction and "subtle" has got a new meaning.Thanks... I think. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Spawn77 |
28. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 3:09 AM EDT
I'm really enjoying this story, cant wait for the next Ch. Keep up the outstanding work!
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kaotic |
29. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 3:26 AM EDT
"I'm really enjoying this story, cant wait for the next Ch. Keep up the outstanding work! "What Spawn said. Great job on this fan fic. Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
30. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 3:26 AM EDT
I just wanna say thanks to everyone here (and not here) who's actually reading my deluded story. It's my first time, so I'm just impressed more than 5 people even looked at it! Also, if anyone has any suggestions, I always consider them. I mean, I actually have an entire plot, but if there's anything you'd personally like to see, or any suggestions whatsoever, I'm game. A lot of the little scenes in my story were fan suggestions. They said "hey this would be cool" and I ran with it. Sometimes halfway around the world with it, but eh. It's mine, I can do what I want :-) I'm also keeping track of who's suggestions I use, to give thanks at the end of the story for their great help, ideas, and support. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
31. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 3:32 AM EDT
"I just wanna say thanks to everyone here (and not here) who's actually reading my deluded story. It's my first time, so I'm just impressed more than 5 people even looked at it!I'm pretty sure there's a good number of people reading it, we were talking about it on twitter. Hell Tallib and I pm'd each other at the same time about chapter 16. We had a good laugh about chapter, and the fact we pm'd each other at the same time and about the exact same thing. Do you find this valuable? |
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t5000 |
32. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 4:05 AM EDT
"I just read Chapter 16 right as I was about to head to bed. I couldn't stop laughing my ass off. It was hilarious.I think it is on chapter 6 not 16 ?? I have read 1-5 and it is good.I am hoping in this one alison doesnt die to make cam. Do you find this valuable? |
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TheTimeMachine |
33. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 7:38 AM EDT
"ElusiveSanity wrote:ha ha ha No problem at all. Your fic is a very good reading and a lot of fun. Yes, we´re talking about it a lot... because it´s freaking good! :) I like that Connor-Terminators house and all their interaction. Your Derek is a 360 turn considering the Derek we saw in the show, but it´s hilarious. How plausibe is it? Well, I don´t really mind. As you said, it´s *your* fic and you can do pretty much what you want with it. Keep it going. So far so good (very good, indeed). Do you find this valuable? |
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34. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 9:19 AM EDT
"I think it is on chapter 6 not 16 ?? I have read 1-5 and it is good.I am hoping in this one alison doesnt die to make cam."Nah, 16 was correct. I was up til almost 4 am trying to get all of it up here, just wasn't happenin! The chapters are up now, just not linked together yet except on one page. All 16 chapters are on fanfiction.net right now if you want to go there. If not, I should have everything hunky dory later today. http://www.fanfiction.net/~elusivesanity Do you find this valuable? |
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NordWest |
35. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 9:22 AM EDT
"You probably meant 180 turn? And I think all characters are different to the show but it is fanfiction. Do you find this valuable? |
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36. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 9:27 AM EDT
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"You probably meant 180 turn?Yes, of course ha ha ha You got me on that! The fingers were faster than the brain :) Thank you for explaining. Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
37. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 9:27 AM EDT
"I'm pretty sure there's a good number of people reading it, we were talking about it on twitter. "Oh wow. I've been twitted? tweeted? twittered? about and I don't even twitter? lol I was always curious about that site but I'm afraid it'll suck me in like MySpace did... took me 4 years to escape that. Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
38. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 9:42 AM EDT
"ha ha ha No problem at all. Your fic is a very good reading and a lot of fun.It sounds corny, but I'm actually kinda honored every reads and talks about it. Makes me kinda blush lol. Derek was a last minute, on the drive home from work idea. I had even already written half the chapter he was introduced in before I decided to bubble him into the picture. As for his 180... part of it was because he did come from a different more "happy together" kind of future, another part... because writing him as a total a*hole was kinda fun. Plausible.. hehe I figure if some people can get away with Cam getting knocked up, implanted with human parts, and all other sorts of things, I can write about kittens and "good days" lol I have no idea where "indeed" started coming from. It popped in my story one day out of nowhere and won't leave. It's infiltrated my life and I can't stop saying it now. :-p Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
39. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 12:25 PM EDT
"Oh wow. I've been twitted? tweeted? twittered? about and I don't even twitter? lol I was always curious about that site but I'm afraid it'll suck me in like MySpace did... took me 4 years to escape that. "Haha, yes you've been. :/ Do you find this valuable? |