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TheTimeMachine |
61. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 25 2009, 8:18 PM EDT
"LOL yes of course... there will definitely be more climactic and mutually fulfilling battle scenes.Sounds good. Waiting for the conclusion and the sequel... Do you find this valuable? |
ElusiveSanity |
62. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 8:09 PM EDT
Just put chapter 17 up
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Cammynator |
63. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 8:39 PM EDT
"Just put chapter 17 up"Good man. Good chapter. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
64. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 8:44 PM EDT
"Good man. Good chapter."Awesome chapter... Damn sucks for John Henry. Do you find this valuable? |
wilson_low |
65. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 8:46 PM EDT
just reading it now... =)
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PyroDude |
66. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 9:30 PM EDT
"Just put chapter 17 up"Good chapter. Hilarious. The Wal-Mart and TV scene were classic. I really like this new Derek. He's very original and a nice break from the "I hate machines RAAAAR!!!" Derek. Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
67. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 9:38 PM EDT
"He's very original and a nice break from the "I hate machines RAAAAR!!!" Derek."hahaha.... that had me laughing. raaaaar! anyway, thanks. I always kind of saw him as a missed opportunity on the show. They could have had so much potential with his character, but, as you said... all he got to do was raaaarrr... Do you find this valuable? |
Blazar |
68. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 26 2009, 11:46 PM EDT
I just read your story couple days ago and just noticed that you have page here too, so I will comment it here.Your story is absolutely unbeliavable amazing, ElusiveSanity! Then you have got another Fan. There are many great moments and it's really hilarious. I don't remember the last time when I would have laughed as much as laugh with your story. It's full of good moments and humour is fantantic in this story. Then this is your first fanfic story ever. It's really hard to believe and really mean it. It's so well written and it have been proved by every chapter. Then there is good combination with character development, tension, drama and of course John and Cameron relationship. Then I like your stories characters and that how you describe them. This new Derek is really hilarious, but the best charters is still Cameron. She has changed to more human (which I like), but still not too much. That's why Cameron and how you describe her is so great. I just can't wait your new update. Do you find this valuable? |
NordWest |
69. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 27 2009, 12:41 PM EDT
Obviously Cameron is very different to the show with her emotions and some kind of sex drive. Especially the later is a problem. The story may turn Jameron in most about sex. Also why does Cameron need any special programming for emotions? TSCC has always suggested that she has emotions. They are just different to humans. The character concept is a problem too but this seems to change in later chapters: Many season 3 fanfics just go on with season 2 characters - especially Weaver and John Henry. They have been evolving characters in season 2 but there story has reached a final point with BtR. They are no longer suspecious and interesting. Weaver is too powerful. Her fights in season 2 have been boring because she has not had any real challenge. Chapter 16 might be absurd, but it may also be one of the funniest TSCC fanficton chapters so far. Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
70. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 27 2009, 1:30 PM EDT
"Obviously Cameron is very different to the show with her emotions and some kind of sex drive. Especially the later is a problem. The story may turn Jameron in most about sex. Also why does Cameron need any special programming for emotions? TSCC has always suggested that she has emotions. They are just different to humans.She doesn't need special programming. What gives her emotions is the programming Skynet gave her. There were adjustments made to allow her to feel more, that's it. The chapter 17 fix was to tweak it again, that's all. And no... absolutely not. The sex is being thrown in for entertainment opportunities only. How boring would it be if Jameron was only about getting laid? No no no... I took what, 15 or 16 chapters for them to have sex? I honestly wasn't even planning on doing it, until the idea for a funny chapter popped into my head, and i just HAD to... they won't turn into Nymphos. And she doesn't really have a sex drive, per se. She simply wants to please John, just as she always has in one way or the other. John was taking a long time at first, and she thought it may have been something to do with her... so Cosmo helped lol. Even the hotel... who initiated? John. and yeah, JH and Weaver are lame... that's why they got cut in ch. 17. I got sick of writing them in. . Do you find this valuable? |
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TheTimeMachine |
71. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jun 30 2009, 11:07 PM EDT
Bump justo to ask : Any new chapter coming soon? ;-)Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
72. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 2:25 AM EDT
"Bump justo to ask : Any new chapter coming soon? ;-)Yup. It's taken a bit long cause I've had a cold, on top of trying to fight off bird mites which found their way into my bedroom... and into my computer... I swear to you I think they're terminator bugs. I spray them with insecticide, and they appear to shut down for about 120 seconds... then reboot and start running again. So far the hardcore stuff maintenance sprayed in here seems to be working, but there's still a few rogue bots, i mean bugs, running around... I'll be sleeping on the couch for a few more days until they're all good and terminated. Anyway, what was I saying? Yes, new chapter... If it's not up tonight, it'll be up by tomorrow at noon... um, EST lol Do you find this valuable? |
IvyMike |
73. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 2:38 AM EDT
"Yup. It's taken a bit long cause I've had a cold, on top of trying to fight off bird mites which found their way into my bedroom... and into my computer... I swear to you I think they're terminator bugs. I spray them with insecticide, and they appear to shut down for about 120 seconds... then reboot and start running again. So far the hardcore stuff maintenance sprayed in here seems to be working, but there's still a few rogue bots, i mean bugs, running around... I'll be sleeping on the couch for a few more days until they're all good and terminated. Anyway, what was I saying? Yes, new chapter... If it's not up tonight, it'll be up by tomorrow at noon... um, EST lol"Quit with the excuses, excuse-girl; just make with the new chapter... ;-) (I hope it's clear that I'm being silly and that I'm a fan...) Do you find this valuable? |
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PyroDude |
74. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 3:10 AM EDT
"Yup. It's taken a bit long cause I've had a cold, on top of trying to fight off bird mites which found their way into my bedroom... and into my computer... I swear to you I think they're terminator bugs. I spray them with insecticide, and they appear to shut down for about 120 seconds... then reboot and start running again. So far the hardcore stuff maintenance sprayed in here seems to be working, but there's still a few rogue bots, i mean bugs, running around... I'll be sleeping on the couch for a few more days until they're all good and terminated. Anyway, what was I saying? Yes, new chapter... If it's not up tonight, it'll be up by tomorrow at noon... um, EST lol"Bird mites? I've been having problems with these little bug things that kind of look like centipede but aren't. Hard to describe. Finding the blasted things everywhere and I have no idea why! But anyway... is this a new story/part or Chapter 18? Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
75. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 4:12 AM EDT
"Bird mites?OMG we have the damn same centipe-wannabe bugs too. I live on the top floor, so I really don't know how they're getting in, but it never fails... every morning i find them on my kitchen floor. This is chapter 18 update. Chapter 19 will be the last chapter before the new story, and i'm quite excited about it. Chapter 18 is admittedly not my best, but writers block must have been a symptom of the rhino virus... oh well, everyone wanted a heavy Jameron chapter anyway... Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
76. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 4:22 AM EDT
"Quit with the excuses, excuse-girl; just make with the new chapter...lol be as silly as you want. but yeah, it's excuses alright... writers block hit me along side the cold, and I sat staring at the same paragraph for days. People wanted a heavy Jameron chapter, but as much as I love Jameron... i find too much of it boring. But... I promised, and tried to deliver without poking my eye out. Next chapter... I'm super excited about. Derek and John will have some guy time out alone, a disgruntled Cameron gets dangerously bored, and Sarah finds herself in a very... unexpected situation. And of course, there's always Jameron. *end teaser* lol Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
77. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 5:04 AM EDT
Loved the new chapter.
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Cammynator |
78. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 12:00 PM EDT
"Loved the new chapter. "Me too Do you find this valuable? |
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wilson_low |
79. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 12:19 PM EDT
"Loved the new chapter. "I thought the bit about Savannah's request to see the glowing eyes was uber-cool. Good stuff... keep it up, it's the home stretch now! Do you find this valuable? |
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ElusiveSanity |
80. RE: Subtle Jameron fanfic
Jul 1 2009, 1:12 PM EDT
"I thought the bit about Savannah's request to see the glowing eyes was uber-cool.thanks :-) I thought it was about time she started figuring things out. They're going to have to fill her in and start training her eventually, regardless of her age. John was young, too... Do you find this valuable? |
