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talli
talli
20. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 27 2009, 11:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 27 2009, 11:03 PM EDT
"I liked this chapter, their date was endearing. It seems (to me anyway) like Cameron wants to come clean with John but is afraid of what he will think. I’m eagerly awaiting Chapter three."
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kencrum373
kencrum373
21. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 28 2009, 5:10 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 28 2009, 5:10 AM EDT
"ditto"
that mean a lot talli especially since everyone loves your fics, including me.

btw I am working on ch 3 which will be called "you lied to me" I plan to have it up by wednesday night. Do you find this valuable?    
NordWest
NordWest
22. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 28 2009, 8:10 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 28 2009, 8:10 AM EDT
I like the idea of the story having John spend more time with Cameron without knowing what she is.

I think, that it would help if thoughts of characters are somehow marked. May be you should also describe more what is going on. Sometimes it feels as if the story jumps to fast from scene to scene.

The question is, why does Cameron not tell John? May be she got the order from future John to only stay close to teen John as long as there is no danger. This would help John to have a more usual life.

The story could go on similar to the Riley plot in S2 with John becoming suspecious, following Cameron and finally knows what she is.

It might be interesting to have some interaction between Sarah and girl Cameron.
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talli
talli
23. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 28 2009, 2:03 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 28 2009, 2:03 PM EDT
"I think, that it would help if thoughts of characters are somehow marked. May be you should also describe more what is going on. Sometimes it feels as if the story jumps to fast from scene to scene.
"
The way I do it is to italicize it, so you could try that. Do you find this valuable?    
NordWest
NordWest
24. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 28 2009, 3:12 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 28 2009, 3:12 PM EDT
"The way I do it is to italicize it, so you could try that."
Some authors put them in single quotes but either way ... Do you find this valuable?    
emawind
emawind
25. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 29 2009, 12:45 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 29 2009, 12:45 PM EDT
Nice work Ken very nice story, i like it, i'm waiting for another chapter :D Do you find this valuable?    
kencrum373
kencrum373
26. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 29 2009, 8:44 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 29 2009, 8:44 PM EDT
"Some authors put them in single quotes but either way ..."
I thought I did put them in italics but maybe that didn't take from word to the wiki. I'll make sure they are better marked next time and when I have time I'll fix the first two. glad you all like the plot so far. Sorry about the jerky parts I'm working on it. visual description is hard for me but I'm working on it.

Oh and for nord Sarah meets Cam soon. Do you find this valuable?    
talli
talli
27. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 29 2009, 10:33 PM EDT | Post edited: Jun 29 2009, 10:33 PM EDT
"I thought I did put them in italics but maybe that didn't take from word to the wiki. I'll make sure they are better marked next time and when I have time I'll fix the first two. glad you all like the plot so far. Sorry about the jerky parts I'm working on it. visual description is hard for me but I'm working on it.

Oh and for nord Sarah meets Cam soon."
Yeah, formatting doesn't transfer from word (or anything) to the Wiki. You have to go in and manually add them. Sucks, but it's worth it. Do you find this valuable?    
kencrum373
kencrum373
28. RE: It will be our secret
Jun 30 2009, 5:57 AM EDT | Post edited: Jun 30 2009, 4:48 PM EDT
I'll probably fix the others when I post chapter three. Do you find this valuable?    
Prolorn
Prolorn
29. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 3 2009, 8:37 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 3 2009, 8:37 PM EDT
Hey, nice story! I signed up for an account just to tell you how glad I am to hear that you're continuing it. :)

I read another work with a similar basic premise elsewhere, but it was put on hold before it ever got around to exposing Cameron's secret. I hope that won't be the case here! Much as I love their innocent interactions, the revelation is stronger draw.
Good luck! I look forward to the expose, whether it's by Cameron's choice or circumstance. Do you find this valuable?    
toasty2
toasty2
30. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 7 2009, 1:19 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 7 2009, 1:19 AM EDT
"Yeah, formatting doesn't transfer from word (or anything) to the Wiki. You have to go in and manually add them. Sucks, but it's worth it."
You could use fanfiction.net. I decided to start with it from the get go. Do you find this valuable?    
TK-MR
TK-MR
31. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 7 2009, 5:14 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 7 2009, 5:14 AM EDT
Very nice work on chapter 2.

Keep update ASAP. Do you find this valuable?    
kencrum373
kencrum373
32. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 7 2009, 8:09 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 7 2009, 8:09 PM EDT
I'm sorry for the huge delay. I have been off line for a while. WILL UPDATE SOON I PRomise 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
kencrum373
kencrum373
33. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 12 2009, 5:15 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 12 2009, 5:15 AM EDT
Chapter 3 is up!!!!
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+3%3A+You+lied+to+me

I'll try to have Chapter 4 up ASAP. 2  out of 2 found this valuable. Do you?    
TK-MR
TK-MR
34. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 12 2009, 7:40 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 12 2009, 7:40 PM EDT
"I'll try to have Chapter 4 up ASAP."
GREAT!

i've comment for the new chapter at ff.net. Do you find this valuable?    

m1919
35. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 12 2009, 7:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 12 2009, 7:47 PM EDT
"Chapter 3 is up!!!!
http://terminatorwiki.fox.com/page/Chapter+3%3A+You+lied+to+me

I'll try to have Chapter 4 up ASAP."
Great chapter Ken! Do you find this valuable?    
Casobs2
Casobs2
37. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 12 2009, 10:35 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 12 2009, 10:35 PM EDT
I like this chapter and story, very nice! Sometimes it cool just to have john/cam interaction instead of NEAR DEATH BY TERMINATORS!!!!! lol keep it up! Do you find this valuable?    
NordWest
NordWest
38. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 13 2009, 3:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 13 2009, 3:48 PM EDT
What about introducing new characters like a cowboy type of school boy?

It might be interesting to see how Cameron and John deal with each other if they are together with other guys from school.
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wilson_low
wilson_low
39. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 15 2009, 8:20 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 15 2009, 8:20 AM EDT
"I like this chapter and story, very nice! Sometimes it cool just to have john/cam interaction instead of NEAR DEATH BY TERMINATORS!!!!! lol keep it up!"
This!

Really going back to basics here which is GREAT. No Derek, cancer, Turk or Cromartie. I think Ellison might rock up eventually, but for now i like the character-driven arc this is taking.

It's great to see a refreshing 'normal' friendship developing, and even Sarah being unsuspecting for the time being. It's like being under a magic spell. I hope when that when the spell 'breaks', it'll be worth it (i can't imagine how disappointed John/pissed off Sarah will be)

I've got high expectations (especially the developing Jameron) for this AU storyline. Keep it up! Do you find this valuable?    
GERmeron
GERmeron
40. RE: It will be our secret
Jul 15 2009, 2:13 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 15 2009, 2:13 PM EDT
Thanks to poeple like you I still have so much to read.
This helps to reduce the pain of the big loss I am still suffering from.

Thank you very much :-)

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