"I just rea all 4 chapters and I liked it, it was better than the pilot. I hope you continue the story and be original. as for the nickname of cam, on the show he mostly called her cameron, and sometimes he could call her cam, the rest of time cameron is better.
I to am curious to see how sarah reacts, because she was liking her , and john having a girlfriend. this makes things alot different. I would like to see more interaction between these 3 before a terminator shows up. and hopefully you will have a different setup for the T when it shows up, I never liked the at school as a teacher with gun in his leg thing.
hopefully you will change alot of things in the story, that would make it way more interesting. you have a good start so keep it going."

"Ken,

Just one thing you might think about.

You are the least public of all the writers worth reading in this genre.

I almost missed this update through not being notified of its existence, and I am keen to follow this story. It is interesting, charming and deals with oft used themes in a fresh way.

You might, as do others, just drop a note into the Jameron thread when you update.

I'll review the chapter later, but genuinely: your work is good and you could bang the drum a bit louder:)



brendan"

"Ken,

Just one thing you might think about.

You are the least public of all the writers worth reading in this genre.

I almost missed this update through not being notified of its existence, and I am keen to follow this story. It is interesting, charming and deals with oft used themes in a fresh way.

You might, as do others, just drop a note into the Jameron thread when you update.

I'll review the chapter later, but genuinely: your work is good and you could bang the drum a bit louder:)



brendan"

"I have no problems with her emotions; I just wish the story was updated faster. :)

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter."