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NordWest |
81. RE: It will be our secret
Sep 25 2009, 5:39 PM EDT
ken, what I also like about your story is that Cameron is very careful about how to deal with John and she is not behaving like John expects his new protector bot to behave. Cameron keeps some distance or at least tries to but obviously fails, when John sees her crying. Also in the show Cameron was always quite subtile and careful and as she said once: "No one likes a nag."
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eon8 |
82. RE: It will be our secret
Sep 26 2009, 12:28 AM EDT
Excellent update. I especially liked the future scenes, and how you portrayed John's conflicted feelings alongside Cam's sadness/confusion. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 6.
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talli |
83. RE: It will be our secret
Oct 11 2009, 12:35 AM EDT
Any chance there will be a new chapter posted soon? Not that I have any place to complain--I'm lucky if I get a chapter up every two weeks.
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kencrum373 |
84. RE: It will be our secret
Oct 13 2009, 12:32 AM EDT
"Any chance there will be a new chapter posted soon? Not that I have any place to complain--I'm lucky if I get a chapter up every two weeks."Yeah I'm bad to. I hit midterms like a brick wall and everyone wants a paper about something all of a sudden. I hope to have one soon though :) I want to write it at least half as much as you want to read it. at the very least I should be able to write and post it by this weekend. probably either late saturday or sunday Do you find this valuable? |
uncommoner |
85. RE: It will be our secret
Oct 13 2009, 9:02 AM EDT
"Yeah I'm bad too."Ken, FWIW, if I had an instruction from Mistress Talli, I'd get on with it, tout de suite............ :) brendan Do you find this valuable? |
