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finkey	73. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 22 2009, 7:00 PM EDT \| Post edited: Jun 22 2009, 10:04 PM EDT Cameron flinches as Derek smacks John Connor across the face. She knows that slap all too well, and a wave of contempt rolls through her. Weaver cooly reaches out and closes on Derek's forearm like a vise, "Don't do that again." Kyle stands up in his brother's face, "What the hell do you think you're doing? We have enough trouble. You're not in charge of this interrogation. Weaver? Take him outside." As a little puppy, Derek is swiftly hoisted off his feet by the scruff of his collar and put outside the door. Weaver shuts the door quietly and stands guard, back to it, arms crossed. Kyle and Cameron turn to John with growing respect. His scalp makes a little trickle of blood run down his cheek again. "I'm all right..." he says. Weaver speaks, "It's true. SkyNet has developed a way to travel through time. Their mission is to go back to the past, and kill off the future leader of the resistance. The resistance that terminates them. " "How do they know who it is?" asks Kyle. "They have a name of the mother of this leader and a date of birth," says Weaver, "That is all. They have already sent a terminator back to 1984 to kill her before she can have her son." "What is her name?" asks Cameron. "Sarah Connor..." says Weaver, and pointing to John, "...and this is her son." Post reply 5 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
dizzie1	74. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 22 2009, 11:29 PM EDT In the present day: The terminator that has appeared in the desert, causing havoc and showing up on police reports makes it's way into the basement of the Zelra corp where Sarah, Ellison, and Savannah have been holed up, trying to make heads and tails of what has taken place. As the terminator breaks in, they are all scared. Ellison protects the scarred Savannah. Sarah grabs a firearm and blasts away at the terminator who takes the blasts without incident, makes his way to Sarah, and knocks her across the room. In an unexpected move, Savannah rushes at the terminator, breaking away from Ellison! She screams at him, telling him to stop, that she hates him, and that she will not be afraid! He looks curiously at Savannah and continues moving toward the turk, as if she is of no consequence as he drags her on his leg. Meanwhile, Ellison has looked on in awe, realizing that the Terminator is not there to kill them. He pulls Savannnah away and asks him "Why are you here". The terminator looks at them. You see his readout showing "no visible threat, communication unnecessary. He says nothing and goes back to work gathering up the Turk. Sarah, having been knocked into a wall, sees exposed electrical wires. She unplugs them at a socket. She motions Savannah over. She says "Hold this. When I give you the signal, jam this into his leg as hard as you can. Ellison looks over and his facial expression show his mind uncovering their plot. The terminator runs a diagnostic via wifi on the turk that shows in his display. He begins to power up a time travel port. Sara and Ellison distract him. Sarah: "You know that's not the real turk. They only left the decoy. Terminator turns his head and calculated probability. Ellison comes into the picture and steps in close as well. We knew you were coming all along. Now, go! And leave this place. Sarah motions to Savanah. Terminator calculates and continues timetravel sequence, detecting probable lies Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
dizzie1	75. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 22 2009, 11:35 PM EDT from their biological readings. (He has downloaded the turk). As the time sequence begins, Savannah jams the electrical line, unnoticed by the terminator, into his calf, short circuiting him. She holds in in place in her child-like rage for a good 15 seconds, frying him. Slow motion sequence, showing flashbacks in Savannah's past - memories of her mom and dad, of Weaver, John Henry, school. Sarah manages to remove the chip with a nearby tool left by Cameron. Flash to the future where they all emerge, cold and naked, but together. (Sorry, I guess there is no logical reason skynet would need the turk, but at least this gets them all together in the future, albeit in a different geographical location from John, & Weaver) Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
jose_t800	78. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 23 2009, 12:14 AM EDT Somewhere in the desert, near the border, Sarah and Ellison went to an abandoned place. Seems like an old farm covered by the dust. The place was on ruins. They parked the jeep inside the garage and they looked around searching for some kind of life. Nothing. They went to the house and broke the front door. They aim their guns looking for threats. Clear. Sarah: “Anything over there?” Ellison: “Clear” Sarah: “Let’s spread checking the house, we will reunite here in the hall. Be careful” Ellison: “Ok, call me if you found something” Both registered the house inch by inch and they found nothing. Suddenly Sarah went into the kitchen and saw a door between the refrigerator and the furniture near. Was a small one with an electronic key lock. Sarah calls Ellison with a hand sign. Ellison went and he saw the door. He aims his Glock to the lock and tried to shot but they were aware for a noise. Silence. They heard footsteps getting closer to the kitchen door. Quickly, Sarah hides behind the door and Ellison hides inside the big furniture. A figure appears on the kitchen, his red eyes showed something scaring. A terminator enters in the scene. They didn’t move; hold their breath fearing the enhanced capability of his sensors. The terminator took a look around, and he left the kitchen. Until the footsteps left the scene, both quietly comes out and went back to the little door in the kitchen. They behold the door once again and Ellison saw a key card near the door. Post reply 5 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
jose_t800	79. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 23 2009, 12:18 AM EDT Sarah: “?” Ellison: “what?” Sarah: (pointing with the finger) “that” Ellison: “Is a key card” Sarah: “I know, James” Ellison: “so” Sarah: “why a key card on an old farm?” Ellison: “yup, I understand. Maybe is the key for the door” They tried to open the door and they discovered something, a control panel with a small LCD screen, and a small keypad number. It said: INSERT THE KEY CARD Ellison inserted the key card and the screen switched in the next dialog box: KEY CARD CODE REQUIRED Sarah: “what? … a key card code? Do you know it?” Ellison: “I don’t know” Sarah: “let me try” Sarah enter a random code. A bleep sounds and the screen said: WRONG KEY CARD CODE TRY AGAIN Sarah: “is not the key code” Ellison: “my turn, please” Ellison enters another random code. A bleep sounds and the screen said again: WRONG KEY CARD CODE TRY AGAIN Sarah looks on Ellison like he knew the answer. But Ellison replied Ellison: “check the key card, maybe there is something” Sarah took the key card and watched it. She saw all the card and she note the presence of 3 dots like the Cyberdyne Systems logo, and in the bottom of the card, near the bar code, a serial number printed on it. She memorized the serial number retrieved on the card and said to Ellison: Sarah: “could be this one?” Ellison: “do you think is too obvious to be it?” Sarah: “there is one way to find out” Sarah enters the serial number code of the key card and two bleeps and the screens showed the following sentence: Post reply 5 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
jose_t800	80. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 23 2009, 12:21 AM EDT KEY CODE ACCEPTED ACCESS GRANTED They were surprised, and the gate on the floor was opened. A hole and a stairway appeared in front of them. They looked into their eyes and decided to go downstairs to look inside the corridor. Silently they walked down the passage and found a lot of gates, like rooms side to side the passage. All had in their fronts the same Cyberdyne’s logo. “3 dots?” Sarah thought. Ellison: “We must to walk quietly, Sarah” Sarah: “Maybe there is one of those things walking around” Ellison: “maybe, they already know about our presence” Sarah: “How could they keep it if we blew it a long time ago?” Ellison: “?” Sarah: “Cyberdyne, I mean” Ellison: “there is always a copy of something, somewhere… Sarah lookout! ” Ellison grabs to Sarah from her left arm. A machine was coming on their same way. They entered in a room. Closed the door and await until the machine left the passage. Post reply 5 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Valor.D	81. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 25 2009, 4:01 AM EDT John sits inside the little shell of a waiting room and pokes at his food with a bent metal fork, or the stuff which passes itself off as food in this time, John thinks to himself. It bears a strong resemblance to oatmeal, but not as good, he thinks, and is afraid to ask the girl he knows as Allison what's in it, as she serves it to him on a worn metal plate. "Enjoy", Allison says quasi-enthusiastically, as she gently sits the plate on John's lap, and takes a nearby seat with her own plate of post-apocalyptic rations. "So, are you like the designated baby sitter?" John asks, trying to make humorous small talk with the mirror image of Cameron, the cyborg he had come to know so well. John had to keep reminding himself that the girl he was looking at was not her...er...it, but rather the original mccoy, the girl whom Cameron had been made to look like. John can't help but to marvel at the similarity-- every detail was duplicated precisely. "So it would seem", Allison answers snidely. "But, it beats being on the outside, fighting or running for my Life from Skynet." John looks into Allison's eyes captivated as she continues, "I used to have this nightmare all the time about being chased by a metal version of myself, and when she caught me, she wrapped her hands around my throat, and squeezed so hard I would wake up in a sweat, gasping for air choking, not sure of whether it was real or not." "Yeah...", John says after a few moments of silence, "I know that one", he answers sincerely, and appreciates the irony inwardly. Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
daxius_x	82. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 25 2009, 5:42 AM EDT John looked at Allison wistfully. She looked so real. It was as if someone had injected a new essence into the girl he knew as Cameron. Allison ate quietly, the way she spooned the food into her mouth, humourlessly echoing Cameron's own deliberate manner. She finally dropped her spoon, exasperatingly, and glared at him. "Could you stop staring at me? I feel like you're picturing me naked!" John suddenly realised with a flush that technically, he COULD. Post reply 7 out of 7 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Valor.D	83. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 25 2009, 12:25 PM EDT "Sorry", John answers her slightly embarrassed, "You just look very familiar to me." "Yeah", Allison replies more than slightly sarcastically, "Maybe we knew each other in another Life." John smiles, unphased by her obvious sarcasm, knowing all too well that her statement couldn't be more true. Post reply 6 out of 6 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
jose_t800	84. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 25 2009, 6:03 PM EDT The machine left the hall. Both opened the door and run faster thru the hallway until the reached the vigilance room. Sarah saw it familiar. Sarah: "seems like Desert Cantos" she thaught. Ellison: "?" Sarah: "One of the Kaliba's node. Maybe here is hidden something bigger than that" Ellison: "Those guys has the place completely wired" Sarah: "But how they didn't knew we are here?" A siren sounds on the control pannel and they were trapped. a machine comes out from the right door and behind them a man, Sarah was horrified, she saw he look's like... Post reply 4 out of 5 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
Valor.D	85. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY part 3 Jun 27 2009, 1:50 AM EDT A siren sounded on the control panel and Sarah and Ellison were trapped. Suddenly, a machine comes out from the right door and behind them a man. Sarah was horrified as she realized that he looks like the Terminator which tried to murder her in 1984 (and the one who protected her son, John, in 1995). Sarah opened her mouth as if to scream, but no sound came out. Her reaction was to take a few steps backwards, dumbfounded. Could this actually be the same Terminator which tried to kill her before her son was born??-- the thought raced through her mind as she walked back into a wall. Ellison yelled aloud, "Sarah! Come on!", and waited for her. Suddenly, the Terminator reached out and grabbed Ellison by the throat, and stated with an Austrian accent, "You are unauthorized." Post reply 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you find this valuable? Do you?
DarthJoesithlord	86. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 27 2009, 10:02 PM EDT \| Post edited: Jun 27 2009, 10:23 PM EDT Broken Past, by Darthjoe. This is my attempt to write a good season three, please don't try and post anything to continue this yet, I have a lot planned for this, several plotlines are in place already. I will let people know when they can post a something to continue this, until then, have fun reading! Since very few people seem to be following Sarah this story will detail her continuing attempts to stop the birth of Skynet. Lugging Cameron's body was a lot harder then it looked, mostly because of of the metal, Sarah thought grimly. Removing Cameron from the ruins of that building was hard, getting her into the trunk of her stolen car, even harder. Still it needed to be done, if any of her remaining parts fell into enemy hands it would be awful. Sarah was panting and placed a hand on the car's side to steady herself, she had been feeling very tired recently, staying here while John went to thee future for Tin Miss' chip had been one of the most difficult things she had every done. Sarah shook her head walked slowly to the front of the car and began to dig in her pocket's for her cell phone, only to remember that she didn't have one, hopefully Stacy Cotton would be willing to help her out. Sarah pulled up in front of Stacy's place and put her head on the wheel, blackness crept around the edge's of her vision, a loud tapping noise caused her to look up, Stacy, no longer pregnant was banging on her window looking frightened for her friend. Sarah reached over and pulled the lock into its unlocked setting. "Sarah?! Are you alright? Sarah!" Stacy sounded very panicked and worried. Stacy yanked on Sarah's shirt and Sarah promptly fell out of the car onto Stacy who flinched in pain, pushing Sarah off of her and onto the sidewalk on her , Sarah felt her friend's hand grab her wrist, checking my pulse Sarah thought fuzzily. "Fredrick! Over here!" Post reply Do you find this valuable?
DarthJoesithlord	87. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 27 2009, 10:22 PM EDT Sarah rolled her head over to look at this 'Fredrick'. Had she been at one-hundred-percent she would be on her feet running. Fredrick was a very large man, standing over six feet, he had brown hair and a scruffy beard. That wasn't t what worried her though, he was walking to her, with a calm and steady gait, his eye's were blank and they never left her, and a heavy pistol was at his side waiting to be drawn and fired. As she was, tired, weakened by her cancer and bruised and battered, she couldn't even muster the strength to warn Stacy. As blackness crept into her vision, all she could see was the figure marching at her, and Stacy's panicked voice telling her to stay awake until he got over here. Doctor Fredrick 'Rick' Feral had seen a lot in his life, orphaned at the age of six, watching his foster parents get killed at the age of fifteen. Yet somehow, taking a walk at three am to cure his insomnia and running into Stacy bent over a pretty brunette and screaming for his help had never crossed his mind as something that would be likely to occur. Checking to ensure his Desert Eagle was still in its holster, and wincing as he put too much weight on his left leg, his still healing left leg. An orderly had rammed into him with a gurney and broke his leg, now he was on sick leave, him, a doctor. Stacy though it was hilarious, he didn't. Rick did his best to walk in a steady measure pace towards Stacy, he also tried to keep his pain off of his face, keep it blank. He considered trying to run, then decided not to, it hurt like heck as it was. Rick finally reached them, and knelt over the brunette. "What happened?" Rick asked. "I don't know! She just drove up and passed out on me." Stacy exclaimed, panic in her voice. "She's going to be alright won't she?!" Rick looked at Stacy blankly. "I don't even what's wrong with her yet, Stacy, let's get her inside. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
DarthJoesithlord	88. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 27 2009, 10:45 PM EDT Rick had been informed that the women's name was Sarah, Stacey had refused to tell him more. Well, "Sarah' had remained passed out long enough for him to take a blood sample and drive it over to the hospital, several people over there owed him big, poker mostly, and they would ensure that the sample was tested on the QT. Rick saw something off about Sarah, over the course off the past few hours Sarah had simply switched from being passed out to being deeply asleep. Rapid eye movement had ceased, and her breathing had changed for a moment. She was awake but she was trying to act like she was asleep, understandable, she looked like she had been in a fight right before she had arrived, she must have thought whoever had attacked her had taken her somewhere. Rick reached for her shoulder and shook it. "Ma'am?" Rick wheezed as the women shot out of the bed and slammed into his chest with enough force to topple the chair he was in and send them both to the floor. Rick felt her hands grab the pistol on his belt and begin to yank it off, Rick's hands grabbed her wrists her and wrenched them off him, a punch hit his jaw, Rick fought to keep hold of the pistol and get the insane women off of him without hurting her. Rick had gotten into a hundred different wrestling matches and fistfights after the death of his foster parents. A knee slammed into his crotch. Rick would later state that he had never gotten into a fight with a women before, thus there was no way he could have been prepared for that. Ric'sk yell of pain, more of a squawk, split the air. Allowing Sarah to seize the pistol. Rick saw the barrel of his gun, less then an inch from his right eye, knew then and there, he was never going for a walk at night EVER again. Post reply Do you find this valuable?
Valor.D	89. RE: TSCC SEASON 3: YOU WRITE THE STORY! Jun 28 2009, 2:21 AM EDT \| Post edited: Jun 28 2009, 2:22 AM EDT "Broken Past, by Darthjoe. This is my attempt to write a good season three, please don't try and post anything to continue this yet, I have a lot planned for this, several plotlines are in place already. I will let people know when they can post a something to continue this, until then, have fun reading! Since very few people seem to be following Sarah this story will detail her continuing attempts to stop the birth of Skynet. " You're posting this in the wrong place, Darth. This belongs in the Fan Fic as a new thread. This thread is a storyline in progress. Post reply Do you find this valuable?

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