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TOK792 |
Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 18 2009, 9:23 PM EDT
| Post edited: Jul 18 2009, 9:25 PM EDT
Okay, so for those of you who read my fan fics and have been asking me for updates; here's a little treat for you. It's a rough draft of the first chapter for my latest fan fic "Hope". I'm still planning the entire story, so this is all you're gonna get for a long time, but it should tide you guys over until then.Enjoy. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5228727/1/Hope Oh, and don't forget to review it. 2 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you? |
CamDer |
1. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 18 2009, 10:32 PM EDT
One word. Excellent.
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kaotic |
2. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 19 2009, 12:11 AM EDT
"One word. Excellent."That was a very, very good chapter and definitely worth the wait. I knew this was going go be awesome, I can't wait to read the the next chapter. Do you find this valuable? |
Blazar |
3. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 19 2009, 6:24 AM EDT
That was a really awesome chapter. It was worth of waiting. Now we only need to wait the next chapter.
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kaotic |
4. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 19 2009, 10:26 AM EDT
"That was a really awesome chapter. It was worth of waiting. Now we only need to wait the next chapter."Waiting for these chapters will most likely kill me. lol Do you find this valuable? |
Tidus666 |
5. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 19 2009, 10:44 AM EDT
Finally! Even seeing your story continue made me smile for the first time today.Really great chapter! Thank you :-D Do you find this valuable? |
Jenkehs |
6. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 19 2009, 11:55 AM EDT
~ Bump ~
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Tidus666 |
7. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 20 2009, 7:52 AM EDT
*ninja bump*
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KrelleK |
8. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 20 2009, 10:33 AM EDT
Cannot wait to see how Jesse is going to react, if she does not allreaady know Cam is pregnant, she did lose a child herself
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NordWest |
9. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 22 2009, 4:25 PM EDT
I guess that Jesse knows and a pregnant Cameron must be too much to her. I think that Jesse could add some nice drama. I like the John Cameron interaction. Although I am not sure if his change makes sense after he finds out the dangerous trees. To me this felt too sudden. John touching her stomach and the baby's reations to his name are very well done. Do you find this valuable? |
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TOK792 |
10. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 22 2009, 5:15 PM EDT
"I like the John Cameron interaction. Although I am not sure if his change makes sense after he finds out the dangerous trees. To me this felt too sudden. John touching her stomach and the baby's reations to his name are very well done.I'll make it more clear in the final draft, but John didn't just spend the month crawling through mud for the fun of it. He thought over EVERYTHING and the reason he was so pissed at Sarah for dragging him back early was because he hadn't finished figuring it all out yet. But when he comes into contact with his child everything clicks into place for him and he accepts his responsibility as a father. Do you find this valuable? |
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11. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 1:21 AM EDT
Gratuitist BUMP
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kaotic |
12. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 2:15 AM EDT
"Gratuitist BUMP"what did you just say? :/ Do you find this valuable? |
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Veran` |
13. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 7:40 PM EDT
"what did you just say? :/I was trying to self-promote. Do you find this valuable? |
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Blazar |
14. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 7:47 PM EDT
"I was trying to self-promote."You know, posting final version would be much better way to self-promote :) Still I can understand if you're busy. So, take your time. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
15. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 7:51 PM EDT
"You know, posting final version would be much better way to self-promote :)Posting chapters 1-10 would be much more acceptable. ;) -- But as Blazar said take your time. There's other fics to read right now, and we can always go back and read your other stories. Do you find this valuable? |
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Veran` |
16. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 7:53 PM EDT
"You know, posting final version would be much better way to self-promote :)The planning stage has recently seen a significant boost in activity. Current chapters planned and ready for drafting: 7 Number of chapter plans remaining (rough est.): 13 Foreseeable level of ass-kickery once completed: High. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
17. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 7:57 PM EDT
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"The planning stage has recently seen a significant boost in activity.That's awesome... I want to see Jason vs Jesse- I would love to see him kill her. And then right after Jason says something that he would only say. lol I.E “I love you, man.” “Shut the fuck up”, Derek sighed. Do you find this valuable? |
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18. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 8:02 PM EDT
"That's awesome... I want to see Jason vs Jesse- I would love to see him kill her. And then right after Jason says something that he would only say. lolFun fact: That particular car scene between Jason and Derek is an error. It is supposed to occur in the second chapter where it makes more sense, so don't expect to see it in the final draft of chapter 01. Jason and Jesse do have many encounters, one of which almost ends in her death, but her fate will be decided by another (and it's not Derek this time). Do you find this valuable? |
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Blazar |
19. RE: Veran's Fictions: Hope (rough draft)
Jul 25 2009, 8:06 PM EDT
"The planning stage has recently seen a significant boost in activity.That's awesome news. I would really want to see how you would handle Jesse, because to be honest, I really didn't anticipate that she would be in this story. But that make it more interesting. Do you find this valuable? |
