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Panzerfaust150 |
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bryan011 |
1. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 13 2009, 12:37 PM EDT
I just finished reading your first chapters. I like it and I think it has some good potential. Sending back a teacher to help John is a good idea. The Colonel was right in his analysis. Sarah is good for small unit tactics, but there needs to be a professional. Derek has been dropping the ball, too.The part with the firewall is interesting and am wondering about that. From the story parts set in the future you're implying John and Cameron were close friends and not together romantically? I'm definitely going to be following your story,I like it. Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
2. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 13 2009, 1:08 PM EDT
"I just finished reading your first chapters. I like it and I think it has some good potential. Sending back a teacher to help John is a good idea. The Colonel was right in his analysis. Sarah is good for small unit tactics, but there needs to be a professional. Derek has been dropping the ball, too.Thanks! As for the Jameron angle...lets just say..wait and see. Remember what Goldman said about the future being in flux... Do you find this valuable? |
Enigma6482 |
3. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 13 2009, 1:41 PM EDT
Boy you hate Derek (and Riley) don't you?lol Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
4. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 13 2009, 1:54 PM EDT
"Boy you hate Derek (and Riley) don't you?Not as much as the story might make you think...Derek needs to remember he's a soldier, not a gunsel. And, that John's in charge. Riley..let me say this much..things may turn out better for her this time around. Do you find this valuable? |
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kaotic |
5. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 13 2009, 1:58 PM EDT
"Riley..let me say this much..things may turn out better for her this time around. "Lets hope not. :\ -- It's a interesting story; I'll keep watching out for this fic. Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
6. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 14 2009, 12:38 PM EDT
Chapter 5 is in the works, and everybody's about to have some headaches coming...and pay attention to Pierce Echo, it will figure somewhat prominently in this story and the sequel I am already planning.
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Panzerfaust150 |
7. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 14 2009, 8:07 PM EDT
Chapter 5 is up
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Panzerfaust150 |
8. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 16 2009, 9:52 PM EDT
Chapter 6 is up
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bryan011 |
9. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 16 2009, 10:15 PM EDT
That was a good chapter. A bit of a cliffhanger with what's going on with Cameron.
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Panzerfaust150 |
10. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 17 2009, 11:44 PM EDT
Chapter 7 is up
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kaotic |
11. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 18 2009, 12:13 AM EDT
"Chapter 7 is up"Great chapter... but something's missing... I can't find chapter eight. ;) Do you find this valuable? |
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bryan011 |
12. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 18 2009, 1:05 AM EDT
Yes. Dang cliffhangers!*shakes fist* Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
13. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 18 2009, 1:36 AM EDT
Geez people, I know I update frequently enough, but man...I'm only human! ;-)
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kaotic |
14. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 18 2009, 1:43 AM EDT
"Geez people, I know I update frequently enough, but man...I'm only human! ;-)"Lol, you have something we want; what you have, we need. Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
15. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 19 2009, 11:06 PM EDT
Chapter 8 is up
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kaotic |
16. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 19 2009, 11:06 PM EDT
| Post edited: Oct 19 2009, 11:22 PM EDT
"Chapter 8 is up"Awesome! XD It was an interesting chapter, Sarah and Derek were great. The problems were that there was no Cameron, and John and Riley (as someone who really hates that character...). Did I mention how much I hate Riley? lol I will admit she can be used for good plot lines... either to kill her, or I can't think of anything else. Do you find this valuable? |
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Panzerfaust150 |
17. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 19 2009, 11:24 PM EDT
"Awesome! XDDon't worry, I am not a Jiley fan either. I am just taking my time with this..I am not a big "Romance Happens" person. I was friends with my wife with a year before we started dating. Do you find this valuable? |
daemondark |
18. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 19 2009, 11:24 PM EDT
Your story, in a word, Awesome. As i said in my reviews, your new character is excellent.
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Panzerfaust150 |
19. RE: New Story added to Fanfiction section
Oct 19 2009, 11:27 PM EDT
| Post edited: Oct 19 2009, 11:32 PM EDT
Thank you DD! I know you said you're military...Former Navy Brat and Former Army ROTC cadet (epilepsy is a *****). Lemme guess, Army or Marines?
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